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[开头句]
1. I am writing this letter to make suggestions on the after-school activities.（写信目的，下同）
2. I am writing to make some suggestions on how to improve some parts of our school life.
[中间句]
1. First, I would like to suggest that our school should provide more ping-pong tables.（提出建议，下同）
2. I think it will be a good idea to organize some cultural events.
3. I think we should have more books in the library.
4. Moreover, we need more computers in the library so that it is easier for us to search for information online.
[结尾句]
1. I hope my suggestions help improve our school life.（表达期望，下同）
2. I am looking forward to a more colourful school life.
3. This helps us develop good habits from an early age.（发表看法）
[名言警句]
1. Actions speak louder than words.
行动胜于言辞。
2. Education is our passport to the future.
教育是我们通往未来的通行证。
写作演练
近期,你校的餐厅将会进行改善,假设你是
王军,代表你们班同学给校长写一封信,就改善学校餐厅提出几点建议,不少于90词,已给出部分不计入总词数。内容如下:1. 增加食物的多样性;2. 改善就餐氛围,如播放音乐等;3. 提升餐厅工作人员的服务质量。
[思路点拨]
① 人称:以第一人称和第三人称为主;
② 时态:以一般现在时为主;③ 写作时要注意顺序,先从食物、就餐氛围、餐厅员工的服务三个方面提出建议,最后表达希望个人的建议有帮助。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Dear Headmaster,
I am writing this letter to
Wang Jun
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
[开头句]
1. I am writing this letter to make suggestions on the after-school activities.（写信目的，下同）
2. I am writing to make some suggestions on how to improve some parts of our school life.
[中间句]
1. First, I would like to suggest that our school should provide more ping-pong tables.（提出建议，下同）
2. I think it will be a good idea to organize some cultural events.
3. I think we should have more books in the library.
4. Moreover, we need more computers in the library so that it is easier for us to search for information online.
[结尾句]
1. I hope my suggestions help improve our school life.（表达期望，下同）
2. I am looking forward to a more colourful school life.
3. This helps us develop good habits from an early age.（发表看法）
[名言警句]
1. Actions speak louder than words.
行动胜于言辞。
2. Education is our passport to the future.
教育是我们通往未来的通行证。
写作演练
近期,你校的餐厅将会进行改善,假设你是
王军,代表你们班同学给校长写一封信,就改善学校餐厅提出几点建议,不少于90词,已给出部分不计入总词数。内容如下:1. 增加食物的多样性;2. 改善就餐氛围,如播放音乐等;3. 提升餐厅工作人员的服务质量。
[思路点拨]
① 人称:以第一人称和第三人称为主;
② 时态:以一般现在时为主;③ 写作时要注意顺序,先从食物、就餐氛围、餐厅员工的服务三个方面提出建议,最后表达希望个人的建议有帮助。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Dear Headmaster,
I am writing this letter to
make suggestions on improving our school dining hall.
First, I suggest adding more food varieties. Different kinds of food can make us healthier.
Offering different food, like Italian pasta or spicy Sichuan dishes, will surely satisfy diverse tastes.
Moreover, improving the dining environment is great. Playing soft background music can make the atmosphere more relaxing.
Finally, I have a suggestion for staff service.
Training them to be more friendly and efficient will give students a wonderful dining experience.
I hope you find my suggestions helpful in making our dining hall better.
Wang Jun
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
答案
One possible version:
Dear Headmaster,
I am writing this letter to make suggestions on improving our school dining hall.
First, I suggest adding more food varieties. Different kinds of food can make us healthier. Offering different food, like Italian pasta or spicy Sichuan dishes, will surely satisfy diverse tastes. Moreover, improving the dining environment is great. Playing soft background music can make the atmosphere more relaxing. Finally, I have a suggestion for staff service. Training them to be more friendly and efficient will give students a wonderful dining experience.
I hope you find my suggestions helpful in making our dining hall better.
Wang Jun
Dear Headmaster,
I am writing this letter to make suggestions on improving our school dining hall.
First, I suggest adding more food varieties. Different kinds of food can make us healthier. Offering different food, like Italian pasta or spicy Sichuan dishes, will surely satisfy diverse tastes. Moreover, improving the dining environment is great. Playing soft background music can make the atmosphere more relaxing. Finally, I have a suggestion for staff service. Training them to be more friendly and efficient will give students a wonderful dining experience.
I hope you find my suggestions helpful in making our dining hall better.
Wang Jun
解析
【分析】
本题要求写一封给校长的建议信，改善学校餐厅，需涵盖三个指定要点：增加食物多样性、改善就餐氛围、提升餐厅员工服务质量。解题思路为：1. 开头用素材中的合适表达点明写信目的；2. 中间用First、Moreover、Finally三个衔接词依次对应三个建议，每个建议补充具体细节（如食物多样性可举例不同菜系，氛围可提播放轻音乐，员工服务可提培训）；3. 结尾用素材中的表达表达期望，同时注意书信格式，人称以第一、第三人称为主，时态用一般现在时，确保字数达标。
【解析】
按照写作思路，具体写作步骤如下：
1. 开头：点明写信目的，对应素材开头句，写“I am writing this letter to make suggestions on improving our school dining hall.”
2. 中间部分：
用First引出第一个建议：First, I suggest adding more food varieties. 补充说明不同食物能满足多样口味，有益健康，如意大利面、川菜等；
用Moreover引出第二个建议：Moreover, improving the dining environment is great. 具体说明播放轻音乐可让就餐氛围更放松；
用Finally引出第三个建议：Finally, I have a suggestion for staff service. 说明培训员工更友好高效，能给学生带来好的就餐体验；
3. 结尾：表达期望，对应素材结尾句，写“I hope you find my suggestions helpful in making our dining hall better.”
4. 最后署名Wang Jun，完成书信。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Headmaster,
I am writing this letter to make suggestions on improving our school dining hall.
First, I suggest adding more food varieties. Different kinds of food can make us healthier. Offering different food, like Italian pasta or spicy Sichuan dishes, will surely satisfy diverse tastes. Moreover, improving the dining environment is great. Playing soft background music can make the atmosphere more relaxing. Finally, I have a suggestion for staff service. Training them to be more friendly and efficient will give students a wonderful dining experience.
I hope you find my suggestions helpful in making our dining hall better.
Wang Jun
【知识点】
英语建议信写作、书信格式规范、英语衔接词运用
【点评】
该作文严格贴合题目要求，结构清晰，要点完整，每个建议都配有具体的支撑内容，语言流畅自然，符合书信的格式规范，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求写一封给校长的建议信，改善学校餐厅，需涵盖三个指定要点：增加食物多样性、改善就餐氛围、提升餐厅员工服务质量。解题思路为：1. 开头用素材中的合适表达点明写信目的；2. 中间用First、Moreover、Finally三个衔接词依次对应三个建议，每个建议补充具体细节（如食物多样性可举例不同菜系，氛围可提播放轻音乐，员工服务可提培训）；3. 结尾用素材中的表达表达期望，同时注意书信格式，人称以第一、第三人称为主，时态用一般现在时，确保字数达标。
【解析】
按照写作思路，具体写作步骤如下：
1. 开头：点明写信目的，对应素材开头句，写“I am writing this letter to make suggestions on improving our school dining hall.”
2. 中间部分：
用First引出第一个建议：First, I suggest adding more food varieties. 补充说明不同食物能满足多样口味，有益健康，如意大利面、川菜等；
用Moreover引出第二个建议：Moreover, improving the dining environment is great. 具体说明播放轻音乐可让就餐氛围更放松；
用Finally引出第三个建议：Finally, I have a suggestion for staff service. 说明培训员工更友好高效，能给学生带来好的就餐体验；
3. 结尾：表达期望，对应素材结尾句，写“I hope you find my suggestions helpful in making our dining hall better.”
4. 最后署名Wang Jun，完成书信。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Headmaster,
I am writing this letter to make suggestions on improving our school dining hall.
First, I suggest adding more food varieties. Different kinds of food can make us healthier. Offering different food, like Italian pasta or spicy Sichuan dishes, will surely satisfy diverse tastes. Moreover, improving the dining environment is great. Playing soft background music can make the atmosphere more relaxing. Finally, I have a suggestion for staff service. Training them to be more friendly and efficient will give students a wonderful dining experience.
I hope you find my suggestions helpful in making our dining hall better.
Wang Jun
【知识点】
英语建议信写作、书信格式规范、英语衔接词运用
【点评】
该作文严格贴合题目要求，结构清晰，要点完整，每个建议都配有具体的支撑内容，语言流畅自然，符合书信的格式规范，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
