十四、书面表达。(共6分)
每个人的爱好都像一颗闪亮的星星,汇聚成家庭的快乐银河。请你以“My family’s hobbies”为题,写一篇短文向大家介绍自己以及家人的爱好。要求语句通顺,语法正确,不少于六句话。
要求:1. 开头用一句话总述家庭爱好丰富多样,带来快乐。2. 中间分别介绍2~3位家人的爱好。3. 结尾表达感受。
My family’s hobbies
每个人的爱好都像一颗闪亮的星星,汇聚成家庭的快乐银河。请你以“My family’s hobbies”为题,写一篇短文向大家介绍自己以及家人的爱好。要求语句通顺,语法正确,不少于六句话。
要求:1. 开头用一句话总述家庭爱好丰富多样,带来快乐。2. 中间分别介绍2~3位家人的爱好。3. 结尾表达感受。
My family’s hobbies
答案
One possible version:
My family's hobbies
My family have many interesting hobbies, and they make our life happy. My dad loves playing basketball. He plays with his friends on weekends, and I often join him too. My mum enjoys making crafts. She usually makes paper flowers or animals after dinner. I like reading storybooks. Every evening, my mum sits and reads with me together. These hobbies let us spend more time together. I love my family's hobbies very much!
My family's hobbies
My family have many interesting hobbies, and they make our life happy. My dad loves playing basketball. He plays with his friends on weekends, and I often join him too. My mum enjoys making crafts. She usually makes paper flowers or animals after dinner. I like reading storybooks. Every evening, my mum sits and reads with me together. These hobbies let us spend more time together. I love my family's hobbies very much!
解析
【分析】
首先明确题目要求:以“My family’s hobbies”为题,需满足三点要求:1. 开头总述家庭爱好丰富多样且带来快乐;2. 中间介绍2~3位家人的爱好;3. 结尾表达感受,同时要语句通顺、语法正确且不少于六句话。写作时需围绕家庭爱好展开,使用一般现在时描述日常爱好,确保内容贴合生活,结构完整。
【解析】
按照题目要求,先写开头总起句点明家庭爱好多且带来快乐;接着分别介绍爸爸(爱打篮球,周末和朋友玩,“我”常加入)、妈妈(爱做手工,晚饭后做纸花或动物)、“我”(爱读故事书,每晚和妈妈共读)的爱好;最后结尾表达这些爱好增进了家人相处时间,“我”喜爱家庭的爱好。
【答案】
One possible version:
My family’s hobbies
My family have many interesting hobbies, and they make our life happy. My dad loves playing basketball. He plays with his friends on weekends, and I often join him too. My mum enjoys making crafts. She usually makes paper flowers or animals after dinner. I like reading storybooks. Every evening, my mum sits and reads with me together. These hobbies let us spend more time together. I love my family's hobbies very much!
【知识点】
英语书面表达,一般现在时,家庭话题写作
【点评】
该范文严格遵循题目要求,结构清晰,开头总述家庭爱好的作用,中间分别介绍三位家庭成员的爱好,结尾表达真情实感,语句通顺,语法正确,符合不少于六句话的要求,是一篇符合标准的优秀习作。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先明确题目要求:以“My family’s hobbies”为题,需满足三点要求:1. 开头总述家庭爱好丰富多样且带来快乐;2. 中间介绍2~3位家人的爱好;3. 结尾表达感受,同时要语句通顺、语法正确且不少于六句话。写作时需围绕家庭爱好展开,使用一般现在时描述日常爱好,确保内容贴合生活,结构完整。
【解析】
按照题目要求,先写开头总起句点明家庭爱好多且带来快乐;接着分别介绍爸爸(爱打篮球,周末和朋友玩,“我”常加入)、妈妈(爱做手工,晚饭后做纸花或动物)、“我”(爱读故事书,每晚和妈妈共读)的爱好;最后结尾表达这些爱好增进了家人相处时间,“我”喜爱家庭的爱好。
【答案】
One possible version:
My family’s hobbies
My family have many interesting hobbies, and they make our life happy. My dad loves playing basketball. He plays with his friends on weekends, and I often join him too. My mum enjoys making crafts. She usually makes paper flowers or animals after dinner. I like reading storybooks. Every evening, my mum sits and reads with me together. These hobbies let us spend more time together. I love my family's hobbies very much!
【知识点】
英语书面表达,一般现在时,家庭话题写作
【点评】
该范文严格遵循题目要求,结构清晰,开头总述家庭爱好的作用,中间分别介绍三位家庭成员的爱好,结尾表达真情实感,语句通顺,语法正确,符合不少于六句话的要求,是一篇符合标准的优秀习作。
【难度系数】
0.7
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