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写作实战 答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D8
每年的5月19日是中国旅游日(《徐霞客游记》的开篇日)。请你为校英语刊物English World写一篇稿件,介绍中国著名的旅行家、文学家——徐霞客。
内容包括:1.1587年生于江阴县(今江苏省江阴市)；
2.明代地理学家、旅行家、文学家；
3.受父亲的影响,从小就对地理和旅行感兴趣；
4.21岁开始出游,历时30多年完成《徐霞客游记》,足迹遍布大半个中国；
5.人们认为他是地理科学的先驱。
要求:1.必须包含所给要点,可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范；
3.文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；
4.词数80左右。
提示:《徐霞客游记》Travel Notes of Xu Xiake
每年的5月19日是中国旅游日(《徐霞客游记》的开篇日)。请你为校英语刊物English World写一篇稿件,介绍中国著名的旅行家、文学家——徐霞客。
内容包括:1.1587年生于江阴县(今江苏省江阴市)；
2.明代地理学家、旅行家、文学家；
3.受父亲的影响,从小就对地理和旅行感兴趣；
4.21岁开始出游,历时30多年完成《徐霞客游记》,足迹遍布大半个中国；
5.人们认为他是地理科学的先驱。
要求:1.必须包含所给要点,可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范；
3.文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；
4.词数80左右。
提示:《徐霞客游记》Travel Notes of Xu Xiake
答案
主题写作专项
基础版范文
Xu Xiake was born in Jiangyin County (now Jiangyin City, Jiangsu Province) in 1587. He was a geographer, traveler and writer in the Ming Dynasty.
Influenced by his father, he was interested in geography and traveling since childhood. At the age of 21, he started his travels. It took him over 30 years to complete Travel Notes of Xu Xiake, during which his footprints covered more than half of China.
People regard him as a pioneer who opened up the geography science.
进阶版范文
Xu Xiake, born in Jiangyin County (now Jiangyin City, Jiangsu Province) in 1587, was a famous geographer, traveler and writer of the Ming Dynasty.
When he was a small boy, he showed great interest in geography and traveling, which was influenced by his father. He began to travel at the age of 21. His journeys covered more than half of China. Facing great difficulties along the way, he never gave up and finally the book, Travel Notes of Xu Xiake, was finished after more than thirty years' travel.
People remember him as a pioneer in opening up the geography science.
基础版范文
Xu Xiake was born in Jiangyin County (now Jiangyin City, Jiangsu Province) in 1587. He was a geographer, traveler and writer in the Ming Dynasty.
Influenced by his father, he was interested in geography and traveling since childhood. At the age of 21, he started his travels. It took him over 30 years to complete Travel Notes of Xu Xiake, during which his footprints covered more than half of China.
People regard him as a pioneer who opened up the geography science.
进阶版范文
Xu Xiake, born in Jiangyin County (now Jiangyin City, Jiangsu Province) in 1587, was a famous geographer, traveler and writer of the Ming Dynasty.
When he was a small boy, he showed great interest in geography and traveling, which was influenced by his father. He began to travel at the age of 21. His journeys covered more than half of China. Facing great difficulties along the way, he never gave up and finally the book, Travel Notes of Xu Xiake, was finished after more than thirty years' travel.
People remember him as a pioneer in opening up the geography science.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语人物介绍类写作题，需为校英语刊物撰写介绍徐霞客的稿件。解题思路：①明确写作要求：必须涵盖所有给定要点，词数80左右，语句通顺、语法正确；②梳理给定要点：出生信息、身份、兴趣来源、出游经历与著作、历史地位；③构建文章结构：开头点明基本信息，中间阐述兴趣与出游、著作情况，结尾说明历史地位；④选用合适时态（一般过去时），用连接词串联内容，确保逻辑连贯。
【解析】
写作按以下步骤展开：
1. 开头：点明徐霞客的出生时间、地点及身份，对应要点1、2；
2. 中间：说明受父亲影响产生兴趣，21岁出游，耗时30多年完成著作，足迹遍布大半个中国，对应要点3、4；
3. 结尾：点明他是地理科学先驱，对应要点5；
4. 调整语句，确保语法正确、连贯，控制词数在80左右。
具体内容如下：
Xu Xiake was born in Jiangyin County (now Jiangyin City, Jiangsu Province) in 1587. He was a geographer, traveler and writer in the Ming Dynasty. Influenced by his father, he was interested in geography and traveling since childhood. At the age of 21, he started his travels. It took him over 30 years to complete Travel Notes of Xu Xiake, during which his footprints covered more than half of China. People regard him as a pioneer who opened up the geography science.
【答案】
Xu Xiake was born in Jiangyin County (now Jiangyin City, Jiangsu Province) in 1587. He was a geographer, traveler and writer in the Ming Dynasty. Influenced by his father, he was interested in geography and traveling since childhood. At the age of 21, he started his travels. It took him over 30 years to complete Travel Notes of Xu Xiake, during which his footprints covered more than half of China. People regard him as a pioneer who opened up the geography science.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、人物介绍类写作
【点评】
本题考查学生英语综合运用能力，要求围绕指定人物完成符合要求的介绍性稿件，需严格覆盖给定要点，兼顾语言准确性与连贯性，是基础写作的典型题型。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语人物介绍类写作题，需为校英语刊物撰写介绍徐霞客的稿件。解题思路：①明确写作要求：必须涵盖所有给定要点，词数80左右，语句通顺、语法正确；②梳理给定要点：出生信息、身份、兴趣来源、出游经历与著作、历史地位；③构建文章结构：开头点明基本信息，中间阐述兴趣与出游、著作情况，结尾说明历史地位；④选用合适时态（一般过去时），用连接词串联内容，确保逻辑连贯。
【解析】
写作按以下步骤展开：
1. 开头：点明徐霞客的出生时间、地点及身份，对应要点1、2；
2. 中间：说明受父亲影响产生兴趣，21岁出游，耗时30多年完成著作，足迹遍布大半个中国，对应要点3、4；
3. 结尾：点明他是地理科学先驱，对应要点5；
4. 调整语句，确保语法正确、连贯，控制词数在80左右。
具体内容如下：
Xu Xiake was born in Jiangyin County (now Jiangyin City, Jiangsu Province) in 1587. He was a geographer, traveler and writer in the Ming Dynasty. Influenced by his father, he was interested in geography and traveling since childhood. At the age of 21, he started his travels. It took him over 30 years to complete Travel Notes of Xu Xiake, during which his footprints covered more than half of China. People regard him as a pioneer who opened up the geography science.
【答案】
Xu Xiake was born in Jiangyin County (now Jiangyin City, Jiangsu Province) in 1587. He was a geographer, traveler and writer in the Ming Dynasty. Influenced by his father, he was interested in geography and traveling since childhood. At the age of 21, he started his travels. It took him over 30 years to complete Travel Notes of Xu Xiake, during which his footprints covered more than half of China. People regard him as a pioneer who opened up the geography science.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、人物介绍类写作
【点评】
本题考查学生英语综合运用能力，要求围绕指定人物完成符合要求的介绍性稿件，需严格覆盖给定要点，兼顾语言准确性与连贯性，是基础写作的典型题型。
【难度系数】
0.5
