一、龙龙准备给校园报投稿一篇关于“拯救地球”的短文。请你根据下面的思维导图提示,写一段话谈谈地球的现状,并呼吁大家一起保护地球。不少于40词。

Earth is our home.
Earth is our home.
Many important resources on Earth are running out now, and some places are becoming dirty. We should try our best to protect it.
We can use green energy like solar power in daily life.
We shouldn't waste water or electricity at home. We can plant more trees to make Earth greener.
We can also tell our friends to join in the activity of saving Earth.
Our love can make Earth a better place to live.
答案
1. Earth is our home. Many important resources on Earth are running out now, and some places are becoming dirty. We should try our best to protect it. We can use green energy like solar power in daily life. We shouldn't waste water or electricity at home. We can plant more trees to make Earth greener. We can also tell our friends to join in the activity of saving Earth. Our love can make Earth a better place to live.
解析
【分析】
这是一道话题写作题,需结合思维导图的三个核心部分(Why、How、Our love)完成短文。开头已给出“Earth is our home.”,接下来要先写Why部分,即地球面临的现状问题(如资源枯竭、环境污染);再写How部分,分“应该/能做的事”和“不应该做的事”,给出具体环保行动;最后用Our love部分升华,呼吁大家行动,确保短文不少于40词,语言通顺符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】
根据思维导图提示,先阐述地球的问题(Why):许多重要资源正在枯竭,部分地区变得脏乱;再说明环保做法(How):应使用太阳能等绿色能源,不浪费水电,可种树、呼吁朋友参与;最后用“Our love”表达呼吁,让地球更美好,组织成连贯短文。
【答案】
Earth is our home. Many important resources on Earth are running out now, and some places are becoming dirty. We should try our best to protect it. We can use green energy like solar power in daily life. We shouldn't waste water or electricity at home. We can plant more trees to make Earth greener. We can also tell our friends to join in the activity of saving Earth. Our love can make Earth a better place to live.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、环境保护英语表达
【点评】
本题结合思维导图考查“拯救地球”话题的英语写作,既考查环保相关词汇的运用,又锻炼语言连贯表达能力,贴近生活实际,符合校园写作的要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一道话题写作题,需结合思维导图的三个核心部分(Why、How、Our love)完成短文。开头已给出“Earth is our home.”,接下来要先写Why部分,即地球面临的现状问题(如资源枯竭、环境污染);再写How部分,分“应该/能做的事”和“不应该做的事”,给出具体环保行动;最后用Our love部分升华,呼吁大家行动,确保短文不少于40词,语言通顺符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】
根据思维导图提示,先阐述地球的问题(Why):许多重要资源正在枯竭,部分地区变得脏乱;再说明环保做法(How):应使用太阳能等绿色能源,不浪费水电,可种树、呼吁朋友参与;最后用“Our love”表达呼吁,让地球更美好,组织成连贯短文。
【答案】
Earth is our home. Many important resources on Earth are running out now, and some places are becoming dirty. We should try our best to protect it. We can use green energy like solar power in daily life. We shouldn't waste water or electricity at home. We can plant more trees to make Earth greener. We can also tell our friends to join in the activity of saving Earth. Our love can make Earth a better place to live.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、环境保护英语表达
【点评】
本题结合思维导图考查“拯救地球”话题的英语写作,既考查环保相关词汇的运用,又锻炼语言连贯表达能力,贴近生活实际,符合校园写作的要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
二、学校正在组织“发现更好的自我”征文活动,请你根据表格提示,以“To Be a Better Me”为题写一篇短文。不少于40词。

To Be a Better Me
To Be a Better Me
Everyone wants to be a better person, and I have my own plan to make it come true. First, I will do exercise every day and eat more healthy food like vegetables and fruit.
For a healthy mental life, I will take a deep breath when I feel angry or worried. I also want to be a social volunteer to save energy with other people.
To live a happy life, I will keep learning new things. I will manage my money well and read more books about space to explore it.
I will also travel to different places and enjoy traditional festivals with my family to have fun.
I believe these things can help me become a better me step by step.
答案
2. To Be a Better Me
Everyone wants to be a better person, and I have my own plan to make it come true. First, I will do exercise every day and eat more healthy food like vegetables and fruit. For a healthy mental life, I will take a deep breath when I feel angry or worried. I also want to be a social volunteer to save energy with other people. To live a happy life, I will keep learning new things. I will manage my money well and read more books about space to explore it. I will also travel to different places and enjoy traditional festivals with my family to have fun. I believe these things can help me become a better me step by step.
Everyone wants to be a better person, and I have my own plan to make it come true. First, I will do exercise every day and eat more healthy food like vegetables and fruit. For a healthy mental life, I will take a deep breath when I feel angry or worried. I also want to be a social volunteer to save energy with other people. To live a happy life, I will keep learning new things. I will manage my money well and read more books about space to explore it. I will also travel to different places and enjoy traditional festivals with my family to have fun. I believe these things can help me become a better me step by step.
解析
【分析】首先明确题目要求:以“To Be a Better Me”为题写一篇不少于40词的短文,需结合表格中“healthy life”(含physical、mental、social三个方面)和“happy life”(含keep learning、have fun两个方面)的提示内容。解题思路是先总述自己想要成为更好的自己的计划,再分两部分展开:一是健康生活的具体做法(身体层面做运动、吃健康食物;心理层面用深呼吸调节情绪;社交层面做志愿者节约能源),二是快乐生活的具体做法(不断学习、管理钱财、探索太空;通过旅行、享受节日获得乐趣),最后总结这些做法的作用,确保覆盖所有要点、内容连贯、符合字数要求。
【解析】写作步骤如下:1. 开篇点题,说明自己有成为更好的自己的计划;2. 围绕“healthy life”的三个维度展开:身体方面写做运动、吃健康食物;心理方面写通过深呼吸调节负面情绪;社交方面写做志愿者节约能源;3. 围绕“happy life”的两个维度展开:写不断学习的具体行为(管理钱财、探索太空),以及获得乐趣的方式(旅行不同地方、享受节日);4. 结尾总结,呼应主题,说明这些做法能帮助自己逐步成为更好的人。注意语言通顺、语法正确,满足字数要求。
【答案】To Be a Better Me
Everyone wants to be a better person, and I have my own plan to make it come true. First, I will do exercise every day and eat more healthy food like vegetables and fruit. For a healthy mental life, I will take a deep breath when I feel angry or worried. I also want to be a social volunteer to save energy with other people. To live a happy life, I will keep learning new things. I will manage my money well and read more books about space to explore it. I will also travel to different places and enjoy traditional festivals with my family to have fun. I believe these things can help me become a better me step by step.
【知识点】英语写作、提纲式短文写作
【点评】这篇作文紧扣主题,完整覆盖表格所有提示要点,结构清晰、逻辑连贯,语言流畅自然,符合征文的字数要求,很好地完成了写作任务。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作步骤如下:1. 开篇点题,说明自己有成为更好的自己的计划;2. 围绕“healthy life”的三个维度展开:身体方面写做运动、吃健康食物;心理方面写通过深呼吸调节负面情绪;社交方面写做志愿者节约能源;3. 围绕“happy life”的两个维度展开:写不断学习的具体行为(管理钱财、探索太空),以及获得乐趣的方式(旅行不同地方、享受节日);4. 结尾总结,呼应主题,说明这些做法能帮助自己逐步成为更好的人。注意语言通顺、语法正确,满足字数要求。
【答案】To Be a Better Me
Everyone wants to be a better person, and I have my own plan to make it come true. First, I will do exercise every day and eat more healthy food like vegetables and fruit. For a healthy mental life, I will take a deep breath when I feel angry or worried. I also want to be a social volunteer to save energy with other people. To live a happy life, I will keep learning new things. I will manage my money well and read more books about space to explore it. I will also travel to different places and enjoy traditional festivals with my family to have fun. I believe these things can help me become a better me step by step.
【知识点】英语写作、提纲式短文写作
【点评】这篇作文紧扣主题,完整覆盖表格所有提示要点,结构清晰、逻辑连贯,语言流畅自然,符合征文的字数要求,很好地完成了写作任务。
【难度系数】0.6
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