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Ⅳ. Think and write. (写作。)
假如你是 Li Lin，请根据以下提示写一篇短文介绍你的假期之旅。
| Place | Transport(旅行方式) | People | Activities | Feelings |
| ---- | ---- | ---- | ---- | ---- |
| Zibo | by train | Li Lin and
his parents | visit the museum；take nice photos；eat Zibo barbecue(烧烤)；… | … |
要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，不少于50词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
My trip to Zibo last summer holiday was !
I want to go there again!
假如你是 Li Lin，请根据以下提示写一篇短文介绍你的假期之旅。
| Place | Transport(旅行方式) | People | Activities | Feelings |
| ---- | ---- | ---- | ---- | ---- |
| Zibo | by train | Li Lin and
his parents | visit the museum；take nice photos；eat Zibo barbecue(烧烤)；… | … |要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，不少于50词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
My trip to Zibo last summer holiday was !
I want to go there again!
答案
参考范文:
My trip to Zibo last summer holiday was interesting!
I went to Zibo with my parents. We went there by train. In the morning, we visited a famous museum. I saw many old things there and learnt a lot about the history of Zibo. We also took many nice photos in front of the museum. In the evening, we ate Zibo barbecue. It was so delicious! We all felt very happy.
I want to go there again!
My trip to Zibo last summer holiday was interesting!
I went to Zibo with my parents. We went there by train. In the morning, we visited a famous museum. I saw many old things there and learnt a lot about the history of Zibo. We also took many nice photos in front of the museum. In the evening, we ate Zibo barbecue. It was so delicious! We all felt very happy.
I want to go there again!
解析
【分析】
本题要求以Li Lin的身份，根据表格提示写一篇介绍淄博假期旅行的短文，开头和结尾已给出。解题思路：1. 承接开头，交代同行人物（父母）和交通方式（乘火车）；2. 按时间顺序梳理活动：上午参观博物馆，描述在博物馆的收获（看到古物、了解淄博历史），接着写拍好看的照片；晚上吃淄博烧烤，评价其味道；3. 表达整体感受，最后呼应结尾“想再去”。注意使用一般过去时，确保语句通顺、意思连贯，满足不少于50词的要求。
【解析】
首先承接开头“My trip to Zibo last summer holiday was interesting!”，接着说明“I went to Zibo with my parents. We went there by train.”；然后按时间顺序写活动：“In the morning, we visited a famous museum. I saw many old things there and learnt a lot about the history of Zibo. We also took many nice photos in front of the museum.”；再写晚上的活动和感受：“In the evening, we ate Zibo barbecue. It was so delicious! We all felt very happy.”；最后呼应结尾“I want to go there again!”，整体符合要求。
【答案】
My trip to Zibo last summer holiday was interesting!
I went to Zibo with my parents. We went there by train. In the morning, we visited a famous museum. I saw many old things there and learnt a lot about the history of Zibo. We also took many nice photos in front of the museum. In the evening, we ate Zibo barbecue. It was so delicious! We all felt very happy.
I want to go there again!
【知识点】
英语话题写作、一般过去时、常用动词短语
【点评】
本题为话题写作题，围绕假期旅行展开，提供明确的表格提示，有效降低了写作难度，考查学生整合信息、运用英语进行连贯表达的能力，符合初中英语写作的考查要求。
【难度系数】
0.4
本题要求以Li Lin的身份，根据表格提示写一篇介绍淄博假期旅行的短文，开头和结尾已给出。解题思路：1. 承接开头，交代同行人物（父母）和交通方式（乘火车）；2. 按时间顺序梳理活动：上午参观博物馆，描述在博物馆的收获（看到古物、了解淄博历史），接着写拍好看的照片；晚上吃淄博烧烤，评价其味道；3. 表达整体感受，最后呼应结尾“想再去”。注意使用一般过去时，确保语句通顺、意思连贯，满足不少于50词的要求。
【解析】
首先承接开头“My trip to Zibo last summer holiday was interesting!”，接着说明“I went to Zibo with my parents. We went there by train.”；然后按时间顺序写活动：“In the morning, we visited a famous museum. I saw many old things there and learnt a lot about the history of Zibo. We also took many nice photos in front of the museum.”；再写晚上的活动和感受：“In the evening, we ate Zibo barbecue. It was so delicious! We all felt very happy.”；最后呼应结尾“I want to go there again!”，整体符合要求。
【答案】
My trip to Zibo last summer holiday was interesting!
I went to Zibo with my parents. We went there by train. In the morning, we visited a famous museum. I saw many old things there and learnt a lot about the history of Zibo. We also took many nice photos in front of the museum. In the evening, we ate Zibo barbecue. It was so delicious! We all felt very happy.
I want to go there again!
【知识点】
英语话题写作、一般过去时、常用动词短语
【点评】
本题为话题写作题，围绕假期旅行展开，提供明确的表格提示，有效降低了写作难度，考查学生整合信息、运用英语进行连贯表达的能力，符合初中英语写作的考查要求。
【难度系数】
0.4
