十二、思维导图 假如现在是2030年,你们学校组织了一次太空站之旅。请你根据以下思维导图的提示,以“A Trip to the Space Station”为题写一篇英语短文,记录此次旅行。(8分)

注意:(1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
(2)语句连贯,不少于6句话。短文的标题和开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
A Trip to the Space Station
There was a trip to the space station in our school.
注意:(1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
(2)语句连贯,不少于6句话。短文的标题和开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
A Trip to the Space Station
There was a trip to the space station in our school.
On July 15th, 2030, we took a spaceship to the space station. It took us about two hours to get there. During the trip, we visited the station. The guide showed us what astronauts' life and work were like.
Besides, we did some exercise. We also planted small seeds in a special space garden to see growth in space.
This trip helped us learn more about space life. It was amazing.
I feel proud of human space achievements and hope to explore more.
答案
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A Trip to the Space Station
There was a trip to the space station in our school.
On July 15th, 2030, we took a spaceship to the space station. It took us about two hours to get there. During the trip, we visited the station. The guide showed us what astronauts' life and work were like. Besides, we did some exercise. We also planted small seeds in a special space garden to see growth in space. This trip helped us learn more about space life. It was amazing. I feel proud of human space achievements and hope to explore more.
A Trip to the Space Station
There was a trip to the space station in our school.
On July 15th, 2030, we took a spaceship to the space station. It took us about two hours to get there. During the trip, we visited the station. The guide showed us what astronauts' life and work were like. Besides, we did some exercise. We also planted small seeds in a special space garden to see growth in space. This trip helped us learn more about space life. It was amazing. I feel proud of human space achievements and hope to explore more.
解析
【分析】本题要求根据思维导图的三个模块(旅行相关信息、活动、收获和感受)写英语短文,需紧扣提示并适当拓展。解题思路:1. 补充旅行的时间、交通方式、到达时长等旅行相关信息;2. 围绕活动模块,除参观太空站外,拓展合理的活动内容;3. 结合收获(了解太空生活知识)和感受,确保语句连贯,满足不少于6句话的要求。
【解析】写作时,先承接开头句,补充具体时间(如2030年7月15日)、交通方式(乘宇宙飞船)及到达时长(约2小时);接着写活动,除参观太空站外,拓展了解宇航员工作生活、做运动、种植太空种子等内容;最后写收获与感受,使短文内容完整、连贯,符合要求。
【答案】A Trip to the Space Station
There was a trip to the space station in our school.
On July 15th, 2030, we took a spaceship to the space station. It took us about two hours to get there. During the trip, we visited the station. The guide showed us what astronauts' life and work were like. Besides, we did some exercise. We also planted small seeds in a special space garden to see growth in space. This trip helped us learn more about space life. It was amazing. I feel proud of human space achievements and hope to explore more.
【知识点】英语记叙文写作、思维导图信息整合
【点评】范文紧扣思维导图提示,拓展内容合理,语句连贯,完整呈现了太空站之旅的全过程及收获感受,符合题目要求。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作时,先承接开头句,补充具体时间(如2030年7月15日)、交通方式(乘宇宙飞船)及到达时长(约2小时);接着写活动,除参观太空站外,拓展了解宇航员工作生活、做运动、种植太空种子等内容;最后写收获与感受,使短文内容完整、连贯,符合要求。
【答案】A Trip to the Space Station
There was a trip to the space station in our school.
On July 15th, 2030, we took a spaceship to the space station. It took us about two hours to get there. During the trip, we visited the station. The guide showed us what astronauts' life and work were like. Besides, we did some exercise. We also planted small seeds in a special space garden to see growth in space. This trip helped us learn more about space life. It was amazing. I feel proud of human space achievements and hope to explore more.
【知识点】英语记叙文写作、思维导图信息整合
【点评】范文紧扣思维导图提示,拓展内容合理,语句连贯,完整呈现了太空站之旅的全过程及收获感受,符合题目要求。
【难度系数】0.6
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