2025年一本预备新初一小升初英语第66页答案
(甘肃兰州期末)成功源于习惯,习惯源于日常。假如你是李华,明天的英语口语课上,老师要求你们以"My good habits"为主题发言,请根据下面提示与要求写一篇英语短文。

写作要求:1. 包含提到的所有内容,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,语义连贯,语法正确;
3. 词数:90左右;开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Hi, my name is Li Hua. I think good habits can help us have a happy and healthy life.






It's important for me to have good habits. They make me happy and healthy.
第一步 学审题 学审题,明晰写作思路
1. 审主题:从题干中的"My good habits"可知,写作主题是"我的好习惯";
2. 审文体:题干要求介绍自己的好习惯,文体应为记叙文;
3. 审人称:从题目"My good habits"可知,人称应以第一人称为主;
4. 审时态:介绍好习惯,为平常发生的事情,故用一般现在时;
5. 审要点:①日常作息;②饮食习惯;③日常活动。
第二步 搭框架 搭框架,掌握写作技巧

Hi, my name is Li Hua. I think good habits can help us have a happy and healthy life.①
I usually go to bed early and get up early. So I'm never late for school. What's more, I can have a clear mind in the morning. My eating habit is very healthy. I never eat junk food but often eat vegetables and fruit.② After school, I always do my homework first. After dinner, I take a walk with my parents and it's good for my body. In the evening, I sometimes play Chinese chess with my father. At ten o'clock, I brush my teeth and then I go to bed. I feel my everyday life is colourful.③
It's important for me to have good habits.④ They make me happy and healthy.
背范文,品析高分佳作
亮点赏析
①本句使用宾语从句表达作者的观点,增加了句型丰富度;
②用but连接前后含义相反的内容,突出"经常吃蔬菜与水果"的好习惯;
③用宾语从句表达作者对自己生活的美好感受,使情境更真实;
④使用"It's + adj. + for sb. + to do sth."句型,使表达更高级,呼应开头并升华主题。

答案

I usually go to bed early and get up early. So I'm never late for school. What's more, I can have a clear mind in the morning. My eating habit is very healthy. I never eat junk food but often eat vegetables and fruit. After school, I always do my homework first. After dinner, I take a walk with my parents and it's good for my body. In the evening, I sometimes play Chinese chess with my father. At ten o'clock, I brush my teeth and then I go to bed. I feel my everyday life is colourful.

解析

这是一篇记叙文写作,主题为“My good habits”,需以第一人称、一般现在时进行创作。写作要涵盖日常作息(早起、上学不迟到等)、饮食习惯(常吃蔬果、不吃垃圾食品)、日常活动(饭后散步、和父亲下象棋)三个核心要点,需保证语句通顺连贯,词数控制在90左右,开头结尾已给出,补充中间内容即可。