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Ⅴ. 书面表达(15 分)
35. 假如你是八年级学生李华,下周学校将举办“慈善周”活动,呼吁同学们献爱心。现提供两名急需帮忙的对象的资料供你选择,请用英文写一则倡议书向同学们介绍你选择的帮助对象和你的计划。
要求:
(1) 所写内容必须包括某一个帮助对象的所有信息;
(2) 再提出 1—2 点具体的帮助行动和你的希望;
(3) 100 词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(4) 语义通顺、意思连贯、条理清楚、书写规范;
(5) 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear all,
We will have a Charity Week next week. It's time to do something meaningful for people in need.
Let's work together!
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
35. 假如你是八年级学生李华,下周学校将举办“慈善周”活动,呼吁同学们献爱心。现提供两名急需帮忙的对象的资料供你选择,请用英文写一则倡议书向同学们介绍你选择的帮助对象和你的计划。
要求:
(1) 所写内容必须包括某一个帮助对象的所有信息;
(2) 再提出 1—2 点具体的帮助行动和你的希望;
(3) 100 词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(4) 语义通顺、意思连贯、条理清楚、书写规范;
(5) 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear all,
We will have a Charity Week next week. It's time to do something meaningful for people in need.
An 11-year-old boy called Tom is in need of your help badly.
Tom was born with eye problems. An operation can bring hope to him. But his family is too poor to pay for the operation. The boy can’t go to school now. But he wishes he could study at school like us!
I am writing to ask you to help him. What he needs most is money for the operation. We can donate some money to his family. And I think we can also write to him and be his friends. Moreover, we can visit him and read interesting stories to him.
I hope all of us can give a helping hand and that Tom will get well soon.
Tom was born with eye problems. An operation can bring hope to him. But his family is too poor to pay for the operation. The boy can’t go to school now. But he wishes he could study at school like us!
I am writing to ask you to help him. What he needs most is money for the operation. We can donate some money to his family. And I think we can also write to him and be his friends. Moreover, we can visit him and read interesting stories to him.
I hope all of us can give a helping hand and that Tom will get well soon.
Let's work together!
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
答案
35.【参考范文】
Dear all,
We will have a Charity Week next week. It’s time to do something meaningful for people in need. An 11-year-old boy called Tom is in need of your help badly.
Tom was born with eye problems. An operation can bring hope to him. But his family is too poor to pay for the operation. The boy can’t go to school now. But he wishes he could study at school like us!
I am writing to ask you to help him. What he needs most is money for the operation. We can donate some money to his family. And I think we can also write to him and be his friends. Moreover, we can visit him and read interesting stories to him.
I hope all of us can give a helping hand and that Tom will get well soon.
Let’s work together!
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
Dear all,
We will have a Charity Week next week. It’s time to do something meaningful for people in need. An 11-year-old boy called Tom is in need of your help badly.
Tom was born with eye problems. An operation can bring hope to him. But his family is too poor to pay for the operation. The boy can’t go to school now. But he wishes he could study at school like us!
I am writing to ask you to help him. What he needs most is money for the operation. We can donate some money to his family. And I think we can also write to him and be his friends. Moreover, we can visit him and read interesting stories to him.
I hope all of us can give a helping hand and that Tom will get well soon.
Let’s work together!
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
首先明确题目要求：需以八年级学生李华的身份，为学校“慈善周”写倡议书，从两名帮助对象中选一位，必须包含所选对象的全部信息，补充1-2个具体帮助行动和希望，100词左右，开头结尾已给出。解题思路：第一步确定帮助对象（选Tom，信息明确易展开）；第二步梳理Tom的全部问题：天生眼疾、家庭贫困无法承担手术费、不能上学；第三步结合图表中“donate money”的建议，补充2个合理的具体行动（如写信交友、读故事）；最后表达希望，确保内容连贯、语气礼貌，符合倡议书格式。
【解析】
1. 开头承接给定内容，点明帮助对象是11岁的Tom；
2. 依次介绍Tom的问题：天生眼疾，手术是他的希望但家庭太穷付不起，目前无法上学；
3. 提出具体帮助计划：一是为Tom捐款，二是写信成为他的朋友、给他读有趣的故事；
4. 表达希望，呼吁同学们伸出援手，确保语义通顺、条理清晰，符合字数要求。
【答案】
Dear all,
We will have a Charity Week next week. It’s time to do something meaningful for people in need. An 11-year-old boy called Tom is in need of your help badly.
Tom was born with eye problems. An operation can bring hope to him. But his family is too poor to pay for the operation. The boy can’t go to school now. But he wishes he could study at school like us!
I am writing to ask you to help him. What he needs most is money for the operation. We can donate some money to his family. And I think we can also write to him and be his friends. Moreover, we can visit him and read interesting stories to him.
I hope all of us can give a helping hand and that Tom will get well soon.
Let’s work together!
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、固定句式运用、信息整合表达
【点评】
本题结合图表信息考查英语书面表达，既要求学生准确提取给定信息，又需补充合理的帮助行动，贴近学生生活，能有效考查学生的英语综合运用能力，符合八年级英语教学要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
首先明确题目要求：需以八年级学生李华的身份，为学校“慈善周”写倡议书，从两名帮助对象中选一位，必须包含所选对象的全部信息，补充1-2个具体帮助行动和希望，100词左右，开头结尾已给出。解题思路：第一步确定帮助对象（选Tom，信息明确易展开）；第二步梳理Tom的全部问题：天生眼疾、家庭贫困无法承担手术费、不能上学；第三步结合图表中“donate money”的建议，补充2个合理的具体行动（如写信交友、读故事）；最后表达希望，确保内容连贯、语气礼貌，符合倡议书格式。
【解析】
1. 开头承接给定内容，点明帮助对象是11岁的Tom；
2. 依次介绍Tom的问题：天生眼疾，手术是他的希望但家庭太穷付不起，目前无法上学；
3. 提出具体帮助计划：一是为Tom捐款，二是写信成为他的朋友、给他读有趣的故事；
4. 表达希望，呼吁同学们伸出援手，确保语义通顺、条理清晰，符合字数要求。
【答案】
Dear all,
We will have a Charity Week next week. It’s time to do something meaningful for people in need. An 11-year-old boy called Tom is in need of your help badly.
Tom was born with eye problems. An operation can bring hope to him. But his family is too poor to pay for the operation. The boy can’t go to school now. But he wishes he could study at school like us!
I am writing to ask you to help him. What he needs most is money for the operation. We can donate some money to his family. And I think we can also write to him and be his friends. Moreover, we can visit him and read interesting stories to him.
I hope all of us can give a helping hand and that Tom will get well soon.
Let’s work together!
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、固定句式运用、信息整合表达
【点评】
本题结合图表信息考查英语书面表达，既要求学生准确提取给定信息，又需补充合理的帮助行动，贴近学生生活，能有效考查学生的英语综合运用能力，符合八年级英语教学要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
