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七、书面表达(本题有1小题,共计15分)
66.暑假即将来临,你校英文报新增“Cool Summer Stories”栏目,向全校学生征稿。请你根据栏目海报信息写一篇英语短文,分享你去年暑假的一次经历与收获。
Cool Summer Stories
Dear friends,
Do you have any special memories of your last summer holiday? Write and share!
• How was your last summer holiday?
□fun □exciting □meaningful □unforgettable
• What did you do last summer holiday?
□took a trip □learnt a new skill(技能)
□visited grandparents □did volunteer(志愿者) work □...
• What can you learn from it?
send your article to schoolnewspaper@mail. com
要求:(1)包含所给要点,可适当发挥;(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名、学校等信息;(3)70词左右。短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My last summer holiday was (fun/exciting/meaningful/unforgettable/... ).
66.暑假即将来临,你校英文报新增“Cool Summer Stories”栏目,向全校学生征稿。请你根据栏目海报信息写一篇英语短文,分享你去年暑假的一次经历与收获。
Cool Summer Stories
Dear friends,
Do you have any special memories of your last summer holiday? Write and share!
• How was your last summer holiday?
□fun □exciting □meaningful □unforgettable
• What did you do last summer holiday?
□took a trip □learnt a new skill(技能)
□visited grandparents □did volunteer(志愿者) work □...
• What can you learn from it?
send your article to schoolnewspaper@mail. com
要求:(1)包含所给要点,可适当发挥;(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名、学校等信息;(3)70词左右。短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My last summer holiday was (fun/exciting/meaningful/unforgettable/... ).
答案
66. One possible version:
My last summer holiday was unforgettable. I visited my grandparents in the countryside and had a great time.
During the holiday, I did many things with my grandparents. I helped them feed chickens and pick vegetables. It was so much fun. I also tried to milk a cow with them, and even cooked some local food for them. It was not easy.
Because of this experience, I get closer to my grandparents and I begin to understand the importance of hard work. All these warm memories will stay with me.
(85 words)
写作指导
【话题点拨】
本文是一篇征文投稿,介绍去年暑假的一次经历与收获。用一般过去时。用第一人称。
【提纲演示】
开门见山 My last summer holiday was funny/exciting/meaningful/... I visited ...
介绍经历 did many things{fed chickens picked vegetables milked the cow cooked local food
感受收获 get closer to ... /understand the importance of hard work ...
My last summer holiday was unforgettable. I visited my grandparents in the countryside and had a great time.
During the holiday, I did many things with my grandparents. I helped them feed chickens and pick vegetables. It was so much fun. I also tried to milk a cow with them, and even cooked some local food for them. It was not easy.
Because of this experience, I get closer to my grandparents and I begin to understand the importance of hard work. All these warm memories will stay with me.
(85 words)
写作指导
【话题点拨】
本文是一篇征文投稿,介绍去年暑假的一次经历与收获。用一般过去时。用第一人称。
【提纲演示】
开门见山 My last summer holiday was funny/exciting/meaningful/... I visited ...
介绍经历 did many things{fed chickens picked vegetables milked the cow cooked local food
感受收获 get closer to ... /understand the importance of hard work ...
解析
【分析】
本题要求以英文报“Cool Summer Stories”栏目投稿，分享去年暑假的经历与收获，需包含假期感受、具体做的事、学到的内容，采用一般过去时、第一人称，词数约70词。解题思路：先确定合适的假期感受（如unforgettable），再围绕该感受选取具体经历（如看望乡下祖父母），接着列举具体活动（喂鸡、摘菜等），最后点明收获，确保要点齐全、时态正确、无真实信息。
【解析】
1. 开头承接给定内容，明确假期感受为unforgettable，引出核心经历（看望乡下祖父母）；
2. 用一般过去时列举具体活动：帮祖父母喂鸡、摘菜、挤牛奶、做当地食物，丰富经历细节；
3. 点明收获：与祖父母更亲近，理解劳动的重要性，升华主题，符合征文要求。
【答案】
One possible version: My last summer holiday was unforgettable. I visited my grandparents in the countryside and had a great time. During the holiday, I did many things with my grandparents. I helped them feed chickens and pick vegetables. It was so much fun. I also tried to milk a cow with them, and even cooked some local food for them. It was not easy. Because of this experience, I get closer to my grandparents and I begin to understand the importance of hard work. All these warm memories will stay with me.
【知识点】英语书面表达、一般过去时运用、要点式写作
【点评】本文紧扣征文要求，要点齐全，时态准确，语言流畅自然，情感真挚，符合初中英语书面表达的评分标准，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】0.6
本题要求以英文报“Cool Summer Stories”栏目投稿，分享去年暑假的经历与收获，需包含假期感受、具体做的事、学到的内容，采用一般过去时、第一人称，词数约70词。解题思路：先确定合适的假期感受（如unforgettable），再围绕该感受选取具体经历（如看望乡下祖父母），接着列举具体活动（喂鸡、摘菜等），最后点明收获，确保要点齐全、时态正确、无真实信息。
【解析】
1. 开头承接给定内容，明确假期感受为unforgettable，引出核心经历（看望乡下祖父母）；
2. 用一般过去时列举具体活动：帮祖父母喂鸡、摘菜、挤牛奶、做当地食物，丰富经历细节；
3. 点明收获：与祖父母更亲近，理解劳动的重要性，升华主题，符合征文要求。
【答案】
One possible version: My last summer holiday was unforgettable. I visited my grandparents in the countryside and had a great time. During the holiday, I did many things with my grandparents. I helped them feed chickens and pick vegetables. It was so much fun. I also tried to milk a cow with them, and even cooked some local food for them. It was not easy. Because of this experience, I get closer to my grandparents and I begin to understand the importance of hard work. All these warm memories will stay with me.
【知识点】英语书面表达、一般过去时运用、要点式写作
【点评】本文紧扣征文要求，要点齐全，时态准确，语言流畅自然，情感真挚，符合初中英语书面表达的评分标准，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】0.6
