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假如你是阳光中学的一名新生,现打算写一篇博客来介绍你的初中生活。请根据以下思维导图,以“My school life”为题,用英语写一篇短文。
注意事项:
1. 文章须包含图中所有要点,括号内为非限定性内容,要求语句通顺,意思连贯。
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等信息。
3. 词数70左右,文章的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
[思路点拨]1. 文体:记叙文。2. 时态:一般现在时。3. 人称:以第一人称为主。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
My school life
I am a new student at Sunshine Middle School.
What about your school life? Do you like it?
实战练笔,夯实写作功底
假如你是阳光中学的一名新生,现打算写一篇博客来介绍你的初中生活。请根据以下思维导图,以“My school life”为题,用英语写一篇短文。
注意事项:
1. 文章须包含图中所有要点,括号内为非限定性内容,要求语句通顺,意思连贯。
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等信息。
3. 词数70左右,文章的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
[思路点拨]1. 文体:记叙文。2. 时态:一般现在时。3. 人称:以第一人称为主。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
My school life
I am a new student at Sunshine Middle School.
Our school has many great places. I often read books in the library and play basketball on the sports field.
Among all the subjects, I like English best because it's interesting and useful.
After school, I join the music club. I can play the piano there.
I feel happy and excited about my school life.
I have made many new friends and got a lot of knowledge.
What about your school life? Do you like it?
答案
One possible version:
My school life
I am a new student at Sunshine Middle School.
Our school has many great places. I often read books in the library and play basketball on the sports field. Among all the subjects, I like English best because it's interesting and useful.
After school, I join the music club. I can play the piano there.
I feel happy and excited about my school life. I have made many new friends and got a lot of knowledge.
What about your school life? Do you like it?
My school life
I am a new student at Sunshine Middle School.
Our school has many great places. I often read books in the library and play basketball on the sports field. Among all the subjects, I like English best because it's interesting and useful.
After school, I join the music club. I can play the piano there.
I feel happy and excited about my school life. I have made many new friends and got a lot of knowledge.
What about your school life? Do you like it?
解析
【分析】
首先明确写作任务：作为阳光中学新生写博客介绍初中生活，需涵盖所有要点，使用一般现在时、第一人称，词数约70，开头结尾已给出。接着提取核心要点：学校场所（图书馆、运动场）、喜爱的科目（英语及原因）、课后活动（音乐俱乐部弹钢琴）、个人感受（开心、交新朋友、学知识），再将这些要点用通顺的英语句子衔接，确保符合要求。
【解析】
1. 确定写作要素：文体为记叙文，时态用一般现在时，人称以第一人称“I”为主；
2. 补充中间内容：①介绍学校场所与日常活动：Our school has many great places. I often read books in the library and play basketball on the sports field.；②说明喜爱的科目及原因：Among all the subjects, I like English best because it's interesting and useful.；③描述课后活动：After school, I join the music club. I can play the piano there.；④表达校园生活感受：I feel happy and excited about my school life. I have made many new friends and got a lot of knowledge.；
3. 检查确认：涵盖所有要点，语句连贯，词数符合要求，无真实信息。
【答案】
One possible version:
My school life
I am a new student at Sunshine Middle School.
Our school has many great places. I often read books in the library and play basketball on the sports field. Among all the subjects, I like English best because it's interesting and useful.
After school, I join the music club. I can play the piano there.
I feel happy and excited about my school life. I have made many new friends and got a lot of knowledge.
What about your school life? Do you like it?
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作，一般现在时运用，英语要点表达
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，作为新生介绍初中生活，涵盖所有核心要点，时态正确，语句通顺自然，符合初中英语写作规范，传递了积极的校园生活态度。
【难度系数】
0.4
首先明确写作任务：作为阳光中学新生写博客介绍初中生活，需涵盖所有要点，使用一般现在时、第一人称，词数约70，开头结尾已给出。接着提取核心要点：学校场所（图书馆、运动场）、喜爱的科目（英语及原因）、课后活动（音乐俱乐部弹钢琴）、个人感受（开心、交新朋友、学知识），再将这些要点用通顺的英语句子衔接，确保符合要求。
【解析】
1. 确定写作要素：文体为记叙文，时态用一般现在时，人称以第一人称“I”为主；
2. 补充中间内容：①介绍学校场所与日常活动：Our school has many great places. I often read books in the library and play basketball on the sports field.；②说明喜爱的科目及原因：Among all the subjects, I like English best because it's interesting and useful.；③描述课后活动：After school, I join the music club. I can play the piano there.；④表达校园生活感受：I feel happy and excited about my school life. I have made many new friends and got a lot of knowledge.；
3. 检查确认：涵盖所有要点，语句连贯，词数符合要求，无真实信息。
【答案】
One possible version:
My school life
I am a new student at Sunshine Middle School.
Our school has many great places. I often read books in the library and play basketball on the sports field. Among all the subjects, I like English best because it's interesting and useful.
After school, I join the music club. I can play the piano there.
I feel happy and excited about my school life. I have made many new friends and got a lot of knowledge.
What about your school life? Do you like it?
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作，一般现在时运用，英语要点表达
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，作为新生介绍初中生活，涵盖所有核心要点，时态正确，语句通顺自然，符合初中英语写作规范，传递了积极的校园生活态度。
【难度系数】
0.4
