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七、书面表达(本题有1小题,共计20分)(真题·绍兴越城)
76.假设你叫李华,你校国际交换生 Tom 对参与学校志愿服务很感兴趣,但担心影响学习。请你根据以下思维导图的主要内容提示,用英文写一封邮件。
参考词汇:label n. 标签 balance v. & n. 平衡 growth n. 成长
要求:(1)可在提示基础上适当变化词汇、拓展信息;(2)短文中不可出现真实姓名;(3)语句连贯,80词左右;(4)短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
You're interested in joining school volunteer work but feel unsure if it will influence studies. Here is some information about
Looking forward to your reply!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
76.假设你叫李华,你校国际交换生 Tom 对参与学校志愿服务很感兴趣,但担心影响学习。请你根据以下思维导图的主要内容提示,用英文写一封邮件。
参考词汇:label n. 标签 balance v. & n. 平衡 growth n. 成长
要求:(1)可在提示基础上适当变化词汇、拓展信息;(2)短文中不可出现真实姓名;(3)语句连贯,80词左右;(4)短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
You're interested in joining school volunteer work but feel unsure if it will influence studies. Here is some information about
Looking forward to your reply!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
答案
76. One possible version:
Dear Tom,
You're interested in joining school volunteer work but feel unsure if it will influence studies. Here is some information about the volunteer work and I will also share my advice.
The activity will start at 3:00 p. m. this Saturday in the library. We need to organize books and make labels. Don't worry! There is no need to get any preparations.
You can try to balance study and this activity. Just finish homework early and join us. It's also a chance to meet friends and learn new skills. Trust me, it's fun and it won't take much time. Let's try it together!
Looking forward to your reply!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
（81 words）
写作指导
【话题点拨】
本文为介绍校园生活的书信交流类应用文，根据思维导图介绍学校志愿活动相关信息并给出建议，介绍活动信息（时间、地点、任务）通常用一般现在时。
【提纲演示】
开头:说明来信缘由 | You're interested in joining school volunteer work but feel unsure if it will influence studies.
正文:介绍活动信息 & 给出建议 | share activity details（time，location，tasks，preparation）give advice
结尾:期待回复 | Looking forward to your reply!
Dear Tom,
You're interested in joining school volunteer work but feel unsure if it will influence studies. Here is some information about the volunteer work and I will also share my advice.
The activity will start at 3:00 p. m. this Saturday in the library. We need to organize books and make labels. Don't worry! There is no need to get any preparations.
You can try to balance study and this activity. Just finish homework early and join us. It's also a chance to meet friends and learn new skills. Trust me, it's fun and it won't take much time. Let's try it together!
Looking forward to your reply!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
（81 words）
写作指导
【话题点拨】
本文为介绍校园生活的书信交流类应用文，根据思维导图介绍学校志愿活动相关信息并给出建议，介绍活动信息（时间、地点、任务）通常用一般现在时。
【提纲演示】
开头:说明来信缘由 | You're interested in joining school volunteer work but feel unsure if it will influence studies.
正文:介绍活动信息 & 给出建议 | share activity details（time，location，tasks，preparation）give advice
结尾:期待回复 | Looking forward to your reply!
解析
【分析】
首先明确邮件写作目的：回复Tom关于参与学校志愿活动的疑问，需结合思维导图信息完成写作。第一步，开头承接题目给出的内容，引出要介绍的志愿活动信息和建议；第二步，按思维导图“Information”部分，依次说明活动的时间、地点、任务、准备要求；第三步，根据“Advice”部分，结合参考词汇给出平衡学习与志愿活动的建议，适当拓展内容让语句连贯；最后使用题目指定的结尾句。需注意符合书信格式，控制字数，用词准确。
【解析】
1. 开头：承接题目内容，引出志愿活动信息与建议，写“Here is some information about the volunteer work and I will also share my advice.”；
2. 介绍活动信息：对应思维导图“Information”部分，依次说明时间（3:00 p.m. this Saturday）、地点（school library）、任务（organize books, make labels）、准备要求（no need）；
3. 给出建议：对应思维导图“Advice”部分，结合参考词汇“balance”，说明平衡学习与志愿活动的方法，适当拓展内容使语句连贯；
4. 结尾：使用题目指定的“Looking forward to your reply!”，完成邮件。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Tom,
You're interested in joining school volunteer work but feel unsure if it will influence studies. Here is some information about the volunteer work and I will also share my advice.
The activity will start at 3:00 p.m. this Saturday in the library. We need to organize books and make labels. Don't worry! There is no need to get any preparations.
You can try to balance study and this activity. Just finish homework early and join us. It's also a chance to meet friends and learn new skills. Trust me, it's fun and it won't take much time. Let's try it together!
Looking forward to your reply!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、校园话题表达、时间地点任务英文表述
【点评】
本文符合邮件格式，涵盖思维导图所有要点，语句连贯自然，适当拓展内容使文章充实，用词准确，符合字数要求，完成了写作任务。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先明确邮件写作目的：回复Tom关于参与学校志愿活动的疑问，需结合思维导图信息完成写作。第一步，开头承接题目给出的内容，引出要介绍的志愿活动信息和建议；第二步，按思维导图“Information”部分，依次说明活动的时间、地点、任务、准备要求；第三步，根据“Advice”部分，结合参考词汇给出平衡学习与志愿活动的建议，适当拓展内容让语句连贯；最后使用题目指定的结尾句。需注意符合书信格式，控制字数，用词准确。
【解析】
1. 开头：承接题目内容，引出志愿活动信息与建议，写“Here is some information about the volunteer work and I will also share my advice.”；
2. 介绍活动信息：对应思维导图“Information”部分，依次说明时间（3:00 p.m. this Saturday）、地点（school library）、任务（organize books, make labels）、准备要求（no need）；
3. 给出建议：对应思维导图“Advice”部分，结合参考词汇“balance”，说明平衡学习与志愿活动的方法，适当拓展内容使语句连贯；
4. 结尾：使用题目指定的“Looking forward to your reply!”，完成邮件。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Tom,
You're interested in joining school volunteer work but feel unsure if it will influence studies. Here is some information about the volunteer work and I will also share my advice.
The activity will start at 3:00 p.m. this Saturday in the library. We need to organize books and make labels. Don't worry! There is no need to get any preparations.
You can try to balance study and this activity. Just finish homework early and join us. It's also a chance to meet friends and learn new skills. Trust me, it's fun and it won't take much time. Let's try it together!
Looking forward to your reply!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、校园话题表达、时间地点任务英文表述
【点评】
本文符合邮件格式，涵盖思维导图所有要点，语句连贯自然，适当拓展内容使文章充实，用词准确，符合字数要求，完成了写作任务。
【难度系数】
0.6
