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五 书面表达。（7分）
科技的发展使人们的生活发生了翻天覆地的变化。请根据所给的思维导图，从出行、购物、学习、娱乐这四个方面对比现在与过去的生活，也可选择其他方面进行比较。要求：语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清晰，时态正确，书写规范。不少于7句话。
科技的发展使人们的生活发生了翻天覆地的变化。请根据所给的思维导图，从出行、购物、学习、娱乐这四个方面对比现在与过去的生活，也可选择其他方面进行比较。要求：语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清晰，时态正确，书写规范。不少于7句话。
答案
示例:
Things changed a lot these years. In the past, people wrote letters and waited a long time for an answer, but now we can talk online. For travel, people spent many hours on the road, but today we have high-speed trains, metros and e-bikes. They help us move faster and make the air cleaner. When shopping, people had to go to shops and use cash, but now we can shop online and pay with our smartphones. For studying, students could only learn from books in the classroom, but now we can study from home on a computer. In the past, people worked in offices, but today many people can work from home and have meetings online. Also, robot helpers can sweep the floor and cook for us. That helps us a lot. These changes are very good for our lives.
Things changed a lot these years. In the past, people wrote letters and waited a long time for an answer, but now we can talk online. For travel, people spent many hours on the road, but today we have high-speed trains, metros and e-bikes. They help us move faster and make the air cleaner. When shopping, people had to go to shops and use cash, but now we can shop online and pay with our smartphones. For studying, students could only learn from books in the classroom, but now we can study from home on a computer. In the past, people worked in offices, but today many people can work from home and have meetings online. Also, robot helpers can sweep the floor and cook for us. That helps us a lot. These changes are very good for our lives.
解析
【分析】首先明确题目要求：围绕科技发展带来的生活变化，对比过去与现在的生活，需从出行、购物、学习、娱乐（或其他）方面展开，时态需正确（一般过去时描述过去，一般现在时描述现在），语言通顺连贯，不少于7句。解题思路：先确定对比维度，结合思维导图的四个核心方面，每个方面分别描述过去的状态和现在因科技带来的改变，最后总结变化的好处，确保语句连贯、时态准确，符合书面表达规范。
【解析】根据题目要求，以“生活变化”为主题，选取出行、购物、学习等方面，分别用一般过去时描述过去的生活场景，一般现在时描述现在的科技带来的便利，整合思维导图信息，组织成逻辑清晰、语句通顺的短文，满足不少于7句的要求，符合书面表达的书写规范。
【答案】Things changed a lot these years. In the past, people wrote letters and waited a long time for an answer, but now we can talk online. For travel, people spent many hours on the road, but today we have high-speed trains, metros and e-bikes. They help us move faster and make the air cleaner. When shopping, people had to go to shops and use cash, but now we can shop online and pay with our smartphones. For studying, students could only learn from books in the classroom, but now we can study from home on a computer. In the past, people worked in offices, but today many people can work from home and have meetings online. Also, robot helpers can sweep the floor and cook for us. That helps us a lot. These changes are very good for our lives.
【知识点】一般过去时、一般现在时、英语书面表达
【点评】本题结合生活实际，考查学生的时态运用、信息整合及书面表达能力，要求紧扣思维导图的核心内容，对比过去与现在的生活变化，语言需通顺连贯，难度适中，能有效考查学生的综合语言运用能力。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】根据题目要求，以“生活变化”为主题，选取出行、购物、学习等方面，分别用一般过去时描述过去的生活场景，一般现在时描述现在的科技带来的便利，整合思维导图信息，组织成逻辑清晰、语句通顺的短文，满足不少于7句的要求，符合书面表达的书写规范。
【答案】Things changed a lot these years. In the past, people wrote letters and waited a long time for an answer, but now we can talk online. For travel, people spent many hours on the road, but today we have high-speed trains, metros and e-bikes. They help us move faster and make the air cleaner. When shopping, people had to go to shops and use cash, but now we can shop online and pay with our smartphones. For studying, students could only learn from books in the classroom, but now we can study from home on a computer. In the past, people worked in offices, but today many people can work from home and have meetings online. Also, robot helpers can sweep the floor and cook for us. That helps us a lot. These changes are very good for our lives.
【知识点】一般过去时、一般现在时、英语书面表达
【点评】本题结合生活实际，考查学生的时态运用、信息整合及书面表达能力，要求紧扣思维导图的核心内容，对比过去与现在的生活变化，语言需通顺连贯，难度适中，能有效考查学生的综合语言运用能力。
【难度系数】0.6
