沙场练兵
在中国传统文化中，“家”是一个永恒的话题。家人给我们温暖和力量。你的学校开展了以“My Happy Family”为主题的英文演讲活动。假设你是小美，请你根据以下照片和思维导图，写一篇演讲稿，向大家介绍你的幸福家庭。

要求：不少于60词。
[ 审题指导 ]
1. 体裁：说明文
2. 人称：以第一人称为主
3. 时态：一般现在时
[ 思路构建 ]

[ 精彩范文 ]
My Happy Family
Hello, everyone! I'm Xiaomei. Let me tell you about my family.
I'm from a small family. There are four people in my family. They are my parents, my brother and I. My father is a doctor. He likes helping others. My mother is a teacher. She likes running. My brother is only 5 years old and he looks cute. We also have a pet dog. Its name is Wangcai. My brother and I like playing with it.
My parents are busy most of the time. But we do many things together on weekends, such as reading books, doing sports and visiting my grandparents.

My Happy Family
Hello, everyone! I'm Xiaomei. Let me tell you about my family.
I'm from a small family. There are four people in my family. They are my parents, my brother and I. My father is a doctor. He likes helping others. My mother is a teacher. She likes running. My brother is only 5 years old and he looks cute. We also have a pet dog. Its name is Wangcai. My brother and I like playing with it.
My parents are busy most of the time. But we do many things together on weekends, such as reading books, doing sports and visiting my grandparents. We always have great fun together. I have a happy family. I enjoy the warm time with my family very much.

【分析】这是一篇英语演讲稿写作题，解题思路如下：1. 明确题干要求：体裁为说明文（演讲稿），以第一人称叙述，使用一般现在时，主题为“My Happy Family”，字数不少于60词；2. 梳理写作内容：需围绕“幸福家庭”，介绍家庭成员的构成、职业、爱好，可加入家庭宠物丰富内容，还要体现家庭共同活动，突出“幸福”的核心；3. 规划文章结构：开头问候并自我介绍引出主题，中间详细介绍家庭情况，结尾总结表达对家庭的喜爱，确保内容完整、符合要求。
【解析】按照题干要求的体裁、人称、时态组织内容：开头以问候语引出主题，介绍自己是小美并说明要介绍家庭；中间介绍家庭有四口人，分别说明父母的职业与爱好、弟弟的情况，加入宠物狗的内容丰富细节；接着介绍周末家庭共同活动，体现幸福；结尾总结表达对家庭的喜爱，确保内容完整、语言通顺，符合字数要求。
【答案】My Happy Family
Hello, everyone! I'm Xiaomei. Let me tell you about my family.
I'm from a small family. There are four people in my family. They are my parents, my brother and I. My father is a doctor. He likes helping others. My mother is a teacher. She likes running. My brother is only 5 years old and he looks cute. We also have a pet dog. Its name is Wangcai. My brother and I like playing with it.
My parents are busy most of the time. But we do many things together on weekends, such as reading books, doing sports and visiting my grandparents. We always have great fun together. I have a happy family. I enjoy the warm time with my family very much.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、一般现在时
【点评】文章紧扣主题，结构清晰，内容完整，涵盖了家庭成员、家庭活动等核心要素，符合演讲稿的格式要求，语言通顺自然，情感真挚，准确传达了幸福家庭的主题。
【难度系数】0.6

实战演练 (20分) 得分
假如你是Tommy，你父亲的生日到了，这是你向父亲表达感激的好机会。请根据以下问题提示，用英文给你父亲写一封信。
1. What do you think of your father?
2. What does he often do to make you grow up healthily? ( reading; travelling; exercising; helping others; going green; being polite … )
3. What will you do to show thanks to your father?
注意：词数不少于60；文章的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Father,
You raise me up. I will be with you in your life.
You are an important person in the process of my growth.







Yours,
Tommy

Dear Father,
You raise me up. I will be with you in your life. You are an important person in the process of my growth. You take good care of me all the time and teach me good manners. That makes me a polite person.
You are always patient enough to read with me and give me lots of advice on books. I like travelling, so you often take me to different places of interest all over the world. I enjoy the journeys very much and feel relaxed. You are ready to help people in need. You teach me to be a kind person. In the past, I never said "I love you" to you. Today is your birthday. I want to say it to you loudly.
Happy birthday to you, Dad! I hope you will be happy and healthy forever.
Yours,
Tommy

【分析】
本题为英语书信写作题，要求以Tommy的身份给父亲写生日感谢信，需紧扣三个核心要点：①对父亲的评价；②父亲为自己健康成长所做的事（可结合提示的阅读、旅行、助人等方向）；③自己表达感谢的方式。需遵循书信格式，语言真挚自然，词数达标，符合日常英语表达逻辑。
【解析】
1. 先明确书信主体内容的逻辑：开篇承接已给的开头，先回答对父亲的评价（如父亲照顾自己、教自己礼貌）；
2. 接着围绕父亲为成长做的事，选取提示中的阅读、旅行、助人等方面展开，用具体事例（如陪读书、带旅行、教助人）支撑；
3. 最后表达感谢的方式，结合父亲生日的背景，用真挚的语句（如说“我爱你”、祝生日快乐）收尾，确保内容连贯、情感真实，符合书信语气。
【答案】
Dear Father,
You raise me up. I will be with you in your life. You are an important person in the process of my growth. You take good care of me all the time and teach me good manners. That makes me a polite person.
You are always patient enough to read with me and give me lots of advice on books. I like travelling, so you often take me to different places of interest all over the world. I enjoy the journeys very much and feel relaxed. You are ready to help people in need. You teach me to be a kind person. In the past, I never said "I love you" to you. Today is your birthday. I want to say it to you loudly.
Happy birthday to you, Dad! I hope you will be happy and healthy forever.
Yours,
Tommy
【知识点】
英语书信写作、感恩主题写作、英语日常表达应用
【点评】
本题结合生活实际，考查学生围绕指定要点组织英语内容的能力，要求情感真挚、语言连贯，是贴近学生生活的实用写作题，能有效考查学生的英语综合应用能力。
【难度系数】
0.5