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三、教材佳句仿写·核心句式训练
1. 教材原句: The fog was so thick that drivers couldn't see more than a metre in front of them.
仿写:雨太大了,人们没办法离开。
2. 教材原句: I was working when the earthquake started.
仿写:当老师走进教室时,学生们正在大声朗读。
3. 教材原句: I couldn't see anything at all. I didn't know if anyone else was around me.
仿写:我完全听不到一点声音。我不知道我身边是否有人还活着。
4. 教材原句: Go outside as soon as possible.
仿写:遇到危险的时候尽可能快些跑。
1. 教材原句: The fog was so thick that drivers couldn't see more than a metre in front of them.
仿写:雨太大了,人们没办法离开。
The rain was so heavy that people couldn't leave.
2. 教材原句: I was working when the earthquake started.
仿写:当老师走进教室时,学生们正在大声朗读。
When the teacher came into the classroom, the students were reading aloud.
3. 教材原句: I couldn't see anything at all. I didn't know if anyone else was around me.
仿写:我完全听不到一点声音。我不知道我身边是否有人还活着。
4. 教材原句: Go outside as soon as possible.
仿写:遇到危险的时候尽可能快些跑。
Run as quickly as possible when facing danger.
答案
1 The rain was so heavy that people couldn't leave.
2 When the teacher came into the classroom, the students were reading aloud.
3 I couldn't hear a sound at all. I didn't know if anyone around me was still alive.
4 Run as quickly as possible when facing danger.
2 When the teacher came into the classroom, the students were reading aloud.
3 I couldn't hear a sound at all. I didn't know if anyone around me was still alive.
4 Run as quickly as possible when facing danger.
四、典例剖析·主题写作行文指导
时态：一般过去时
Simon 的家乡上周六遭受了洪灾。请根据所给提示以 Simon 的身份写一则日记。
语篇类型：应用文 人称：以第一人称为主
| 写日记的时间 | 2025年6月6日 星期五 |
| 洪灾发生的原因 | 连续2天大雨
|
| 日记主要内容 | 记录洪灾中自己的经历及灾后情况 |
注意：
1. 词数不少于80；
2. 要点齐全，层次清晰，语法正确，上下文连贯。
Step 1 谋篇布局指导
第一段：总体介绍灾难及发生时间
①There was a flood last Saturday after two days of heavy rain.
②A terrible flood hit my hometown after two days of heavy rain.
第二段：记录灾难中自己的经历
①I saw the floor was covered with water and Dad was collecting things.
②We put on our raincoats and got out of the house quickly.
③It was still raining heavily and we had to take a boat to reach/get to/arrive at the main road.
④I nearly fell into the water.
⑤We saw buses and cars moving slowly.
第三段：记录灾后的情况
①The next morning, the rain stopped and we went back home.
②We worked hard to clean it.
Step 2 高阶表达应用
1. It was still raining heavily and we had to take a boat to reach the main road.（用so...that...结构升格）
2. We got to the main road and saw buses and cars moving slowly.（用连词when升格）
Step 3 佳作展示评析
Friday, 6 June Sunny
There was a flood last Saturday after two days of heavy rain.
That day Mum woke me up¹ at around 6:30 a.m. She told me to get up quickly. I saw the floor was covered with² water and Dad was collecting things.
We put on³ our raincoats and got out of⁴ the house quickly. It was still raining so heavily that⁵ we had to take a boat to⁶ reach the
road. Suddenly, a strong wind came and the boat started to shake. Mum lost her handbag and I nearly fell into⁷ the water. When we got to the main road, we saw buses and cars moving slowly. Finally, we took a taxi and went to my uncle's home. We stayed in his flat that night.
The next morning, the rain stopped and we went back home. The house was very dirty after the flood. We worked hard to clean it.
时态：一般过去时
Simon 的家乡上周六遭受了洪灾。请根据所给提示以 Simon 的身份写一则日记。
语篇类型：应用文 人称：以第一人称为主
| 写日记的时间 | 2025年6月6日 星期五 |
| 洪灾发生的原因 | 连续2天大雨
|| 日记主要内容 | 记录洪灾中自己的经历及灾后情况 |
注意：
1. 词数不少于80；
2. 要点齐全，层次清晰，语法正确，上下文连贯。
Step 1 谋篇布局指导
第一段：总体介绍灾难及发生时间
①There was a flood last Saturday after two days of heavy rain.
②A terrible flood hit my hometown after two days of heavy rain.
第二段：记录灾难中自己的经历
①I saw the floor was covered with water and Dad was collecting things.
②We put on our raincoats and got out of the house quickly.
③It was still raining heavily and we had to take a boat to reach/get to/arrive at the main road.
④I nearly fell into the water.
⑤We saw buses and cars moving slowly.
第三段：记录灾后的情况
①The next morning, the rain stopped and we went back home.
②We worked hard to clean it.
Step 2 高阶表达应用
1. It was still raining heavily and we had to take a boat to reach the main road.（用so...that...结构升格）
2. We got to the main road and saw buses and cars moving slowly.（用连词when升格）
Step 3 佳作展示评析
Friday, 6 June Sunny
There was a flood last Saturday after two days of heavy rain.
That day Mum woke me up¹ at around 6:30 a.m. She told me to get up quickly. I saw the floor was covered with² water and Dad was collecting things.
We put on³ our raincoats and got out of⁴ the house quickly. It was still raining so heavily that⁵ we had to take a boat to⁶ reach the
road. Suddenly, a strong wind came and the boat started to shake. Mum lost her handbag and I nearly fell into⁷ the water. When we got to the main road, we saw buses and cars moving slowly. Finally, we took a taxi and went to my uncle's home. We stayed in his flat that night.The next morning, the rain stopped and we went back home. The house was very dirty after the flood. We worked hard to clean it.
答案
1 It was still raining so heavily that we had to take a boat to reach the main road.
2 When we got to the main road, we saw buses and cars moving slowly.
2 When we got to the main road, we saw buses and cars moving slowly.
