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D2
同学们,本单元我们了解了许多关于“诚信”主题的故事,你能记录自己的诚信经历吗?
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例题演练
根据提示,写一篇主题为“Being Honest”的日记。
要求:语句通顺、时态正确、书写工整;不少于6句话。
提示:1. 昨天发生了什么事;2. 你的做法;3. 你的感受;4. 明白的道理。
范文展示
Dear Diary,
Yesterday afternoon, I played in the classroom. I broke my deskmate's pencil by accident. I felt very bad. I didn't want to tell lies. So I said sorry to my deskmate and bought a new pencil for him. He was very happy and said I was honest. I know honesty is very important. I will always be an honest person.
小试身手
诚实守信是中华民族的传统价值观。你们学校正在开展“我诚实,我守信”为话题的英语征文活动。请谈谈生活中你是如何做到诚信的,以及这样做的意义。
提示词汇:honesty, break, tell the truth
提示问题:
1. What happened?
2. What did you choose to do?
3. How did you feel?

写作方法提优
Last week, I accidentally broke my classmate Lily's favourite cup during a group study. At first, I was scared and thought of hiding it. But then, I remembered, "Honesty is the best policy".
I went to Lily, told her the truth, and said sorry to her. She was surprised but said it was okay. I felt good. This choice taught me that honesty brings peace of mind, and true friends value honesty over mistakes.

【分析】本题要求写一篇以“诚信”为主题的英语日记，需包含事件、做法、感受、道理四个要点，遵循日记的结构（开头介绍事件、中间描述应对行动、结尾说明结果与感悟），使用一般过去时态，运用提示词汇，语句通顺且不少于6句话。解题时先确定核心主题“诚信”，再围绕主题构思具体经历，按日记结构组织内容，注意时态正确，准确表达想法。
【解析】1. 确定时态：全文采用一般过去时，符合日记记录过去经历的要求；2. 结构搭建：①开头：交代事件（上周小组学习时不小心打碎同学Lily的杯子）；②中间：描述心理活动（起初害怕想隐瞒），然后选择诚实，告诉真相并道歉；③结尾：说明结果（同学原谅），表达自身感受，点明感悟（诚实的重要性）；3. 运用提示词汇：break（打碎）、tell the truth（说实话）、honesty（诚实），确保内容贴合主题。
【答案】Last week, I accidentally broke my classmate Lily's favourite cup during a group study. At first, I was scared and thought of hiding it. But then, I remembered, "Honesty is the best policy". I went to Lily, told her the truth, and said sorry to her. She was surprised but said it was okay. I felt good. This choice taught me that honesty brings peace of mind, and true friends value honesty over mistakes.
【知识点】英语日记写作、一般过去时运用、主题英语写作
【点评】本题围绕“诚信”主题考查英语日记写作，既考查学生的语言组织与运用能力，又渗透了诚信的价值观教育，符合英语学科核心素养的培养要求，是常规的写作能力考查题。
【难度系数】0.5