沙场练兵
假如你是李辉，即将来你校交流的美国学生Mike对中国的传统节日很感兴趣，请你向他发邮件介绍中国的传统节日——春节。70词左右。
要点提示: 1.节日信息; 2.节日活动; 3.节日意义。
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to hear from you.
I hope you can come and join us in celebrating an unusual Spring Festival.
Yours,
Li Hui
[审题指导]
1.体裁: 应用文 2.人称: 以第一人称为主
3.时态: 以一般现在时为主
[思路构建]

[精彩范文]
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to hear from you. The Spring Festival is coming. It’s the most important festival in China with many interesting traditions.
Before the Spring Festival, we often do some cleaning, because we want to sweep away bad luck. On the Spring Festival’s Eve, we make dumplings together around the table and then have a family dinner. We stay up till midnight and then set off fireworks. At the Spring Festival, we visit relatives and friends. They often give us children lucky money. The Spring Festival is a time for family reunions. Happiness and laughter always fill our
home. We get together to welcome and hope for the lucky new year.
I hope you can come and join us in celebrating an unusual Spring Festival.
Yours,
Li Hui
高分点评: 1. 采用 “总—分—总”结构，思路清晰。根据思维导图的提示，分别介绍了节前、除夕及春节的活动，最后发出邀请，使文章条理清晰。
2. 短语 sweep away, stay up, set off, a time for 的运用说明对基础知识掌握得很扎实。

The Spring Festival is coming. It is the most important traditional festival in China. Before it, we clean our houses to sweep away bad luck. On the eve, we have a big family dinner and make dumplings together. We also visit relatives and get lucky money. It is a time for family reunions, and we welcome the new year with happiness.

【分析】这是一道英语应用文写作题，要求以李辉的身份给美国学生Mike写邮件介绍中国传统节日春节。解题思路：1. 明确写作要求：体裁为邮件，人称以第一人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主，字数约70词；2. 按照思维导图提示，分三个核心部分：先点明春节是中国最重要的传统节日（节日信息），再按时间顺序介绍节前、除夕等活动（节日活动），最后说明春节阖家团圆、辞旧迎新的意义；3. 确保涵盖所有要点，语言准确流畅。
【解析】写作时，开头承接上文点明春节的地位（节日信息）；接着按时间顺序介绍活动：节前打扫房屋扫走霉运，除夕吃团圆饭、包饺子，春节期间走亲访友拿压岁钱；最后点明春节是阖家团圆、辞旧迎新的时刻，符合题目要点要求，语言简洁准确，控制字数达标。
【答案】The Spring Festival is coming. It is the most important traditional festival in China. Before it, we clean our houses to sweep away bad luck. On the eve, we have a big family dinner and make dumplings together. We also visit relatives and get lucky money. It is a time for family reunions, and we welcome the new year with happiness.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、节日话题表达
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求，完整涵盖节日信息、活动、意义三个要点，结构清晰，语言简洁，符合字数要求，准确运用了相关短语，是一篇符合要求的节日介绍邮件。
【难度系数】0.5

实战演练 (20分) 得分
假如你是王军，你的美国朋友Simon对中国节日文化感兴趣，请你以“My favourite festival”为题，以下面图示内容要点为提示，介绍一下你较为熟悉的一个中国传统节日。词数70左右。

My favourite festival
Hello! I'm Wang Jun. I'm very happy to tell you about my favourite festival.

My favourite Chinese festival is the Dragon Boat Festival. It is one of the most traditional festivals in China, which has a long history. It falls on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month every year.
On this day, people usually eat zongzi and hold dragon boat races. I take part in the dragon boat race with my friends every year. The members of the dragon boat team work hard together and everybody tries their best to win the race.
It's an interesting and meaningful festival. Hope you can come to China and celebrate the festival with me.

【分析】
本题要求以“My favourite festival”为题介绍中国传统节日，需结合图示的“When（时间）、What（活动）、How（方式/感受）”等要点写作。首先选择熟悉的传统节日（如端午节），先点明节日名称和时间；再介绍节日的特色活动（吃粽子、赛龙舟等）；最后表达对节日的喜爱及邀请，确保词数符合要求，语言通顺。
【解析】
1. 开篇点明最喜欢的节日是端午节，说明其地位和时间（农历五月初五）；
2. 介绍节日的具体活动：吃粽子、赛龙舟，结合个人参与赛龙舟的经历；
3. 总结节日的意义，发出邀请，完成写作。
【答案】
My favourite Chinese festival is the Dragon Boat Festival. It is one of the most traditional festivals in China, which has a long history. It falls on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month every year.
On this day, people usually eat zongzi and hold dragon boat races. I take part in the dragon boat race with my friends every year. The members of the dragon boat team work hard together and everybody tries their best to win the race.
It's an interesting and meaningful festival. Hope you can come to China and celebrate the festival with me.
【知识点】
英语书面表达；节日话题写作
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，围绕“我最喜欢的节日”展开，涵盖了时间、活动、个人体验等要点，语言流畅，符合词数要求，是一篇优秀的节日介绍类作文。
【难度系数】
0.6