七、书面表达。
假如你是李华,你的英国笔友John给你发来一封电子邮件,想让你介绍自己的一日三餐。请你根据下列提示用英语给他回复一封邮件。

要求:1. 内容应包括所有的提示信息,可以适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺、意思连贯、语法正确;
3. 100词左右(邮件格式、开头及结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear John,
How are you? Let me tell you about my three meals a day.
Yours,
Li Hua
假如你是李华,你的英国笔友John给你发来一封电子邮件,想让你介绍自己的一日三餐。请你根据下列提示用英语给他回复一封邮件。
要求:1. 内容应包括所有的提示信息,可以适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺、意思连贯、语法正确;
3. 100词左右(邮件格式、开头及结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear John,
How are you? Let me tell you about my three meals a day.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
One possible version:
Dear John,
How are you? Let me tell you about my three meals a day.
Breakfast is important for me. It can give me energy for the whole morning. For breakfast, I usually have an egg and some bread. Sometimes I eat an apple or two after morning exercises. I don't like orange juice.
I have a bowl of rice, fish and some vegetables for lunch. I never eat hamburgers. They are bad for our health.
For dinner, I like to eat some jiaozi and chicken. Mum can make different jiaozi. It is really delicious. But I hate drinking milk. I know milk is good for sleep, so I plan to drink it before going to bed.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear John,
How are you? Let me tell you about my three meals a day.
Breakfast is important for me. It can give me energy for the whole morning. For breakfast, I usually have an egg and some bread. Sometimes I eat an apple or two after morning exercises. I don't like orange juice.
I have a bowl of rice, fish and some vegetables for lunch. I never eat hamburgers. They are bad for our health.
For dinner, I like to eat some jiaozi and chicken. Mum can make different jiaozi. It is really delicious. But I hate drinking milk. I know milk is good for sleep, so I plan to drink it before going to bed.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题,要求根据给定的三餐图片信息,以李华的身份给英国笔友John写一封介绍一日三餐的邮件。解题思路:1. 明确邮件格式(开头结尾已给出,只需补充中间内容);2. 提取图片关键信息:早餐吃鸡蛋、面包,不喜欢橙汁;午餐吃米饭、鱼、蔬菜,不喜欢汉堡;晚餐吃饺子、鸡肉,不喜欢牛奶;3. 用合适的连接词串联内容,补充少量合理细节(如早餐提供能量、饺子美味等),确保语句通顺、语法正确,字数约100词,涵盖所有提示信息。
【解析】承接开头,先介绍早餐:说明早餐的重要性,提及吃鸡蛋、面包,不喜欢橙汁;接着写午餐:说明午餐的食物(米饭、鱼、蔬菜),点明不吃汉堡(因为不健康);再写晚餐:说明晚餐的食物(饺子、鸡肉,妈妈做的饺子很美味),提到不喜欢牛奶但计划尝试;最后完成邮件内容,确保符合要求。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear John,
How are you? Let me tell you about my three meals a day.
Breakfast is important for me. It can give me energy for the whole morning. For breakfast, I usually have an egg and some bread. Sometimes I eat an apple or two after morning exercises. I don't like orange juice.
I have a bowl of rice, fish and some vegetables for lunch. I never eat hamburgers. They are bad for our health.
For dinner, I like to eat some jiaozi and chicken. Mum can make different jiaozi. It is really delicious. But I hate drinking milk. I know milk is good for sleep, so I plan to drink it before going to bed.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书面表达、话题写作(一日三餐)、邮件写作
【点评】本题结合图片提示考查学生的英语书面表达能力,既要求准确提取图文信息,又注重语言的连贯性和语法正确性,同时融入健康饮食的引导,是一道贴合学生生活的基础写作题。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】承接开头,先介绍早餐:说明早餐的重要性,提及吃鸡蛋、面包,不喜欢橙汁;接着写午餐:说明午餐的食物(米饭、鱼、蔬菜),点明不吃汉堡(因为不健康);再写晚餐:说明晚餐的食物(饺子、鸡肉,妈妈做的饺子很美味),提到不喜欢牛奶但计划尝试;最后完成邮件内容,确保符合要求。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear John,
How are you? Let me tell you about my three meals a day.
Breakfast is important for me. It can give me energy for the whole morning. For breakfast, I usually have an egg and some bread. Sometimes I eat an apple or two after morning exercises. I don't like orange juice.
I have a bowl of rice, fish and some vegetables for lunch. I never eat hamburgers. They are bad for our health.
For dinner, I like to eat some jiaozi and chicken. Mum can make different jiaozi. It is really delicious. But I hate drinking milk. I know milk is good for sleep, so I plan to drink it before going to bed.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书面表达、话题写作(一日三餐)、邮件写作
【点评】本题结合图片提示考查学生的英语书面表达能力,既要求准确提取图文信息,又注重语言的连贯性和语法正确性,同时融入健康饮食的引导,是一道贴合学生生活的基础写作题。
【难度系数】0.5
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