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五、书面表达
最近,你校开展了名为"巧手制书签,书香满校园"的主题活动,请你以"A DIY Bookmark for My Favourite Book"为题,根据表格中的内容提示写一篇英语短文,向校英文报投稿,介绍制作书签的目的和过程,并分享制作心得。
要求:
1. 表达清晰,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2. 必须包括提示中的所有信息,并按要求适当发挥;
3. 词数100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
A DIY Bookmark for My Favourite Book
Last week, I took part in our school's Reading & Bookmark-making activity.
最近,你校开展了名为"巧手制书签,书香满校园"的主题活动,请你以"A DIY Bookmark for My Favourite Book"为题,根据表格中的内容提示写一篇英语短文,向校英文报投稿,介绍制作书签的目的和过程,并分享制作心得。
要求:
1. 表达清晰,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2. 必须包括提示中的所有信息,并按要求适当发挥;
3. 词数100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
A DIY Bookmark for My Favourite Book
Last week, I took part in our school's Reading & Bookmark-making activity.
答案
One possible version:
A DIY Bookmark for My Favourite Book
Last week, I took part in our school's Reading & Bookmark-making activity. Its purpose was to help us enjoy reading our favourite book. My favourite book is the classic novel Journey to the West—one of the Four Great Classical Novels. I like the Monkey King best because he helps the weak and never gives up.
In order to make a bookmark, I prepared a card, scissors, glue and so on. First, I cut the card into long strips. And then I drew a picture of a monkey on the left and wrote a famous saying "Nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it." on the right to encourage myself not to give up when facing difficulties. At last, I glued it to a thin piece of wood.
Although I met some difficulties in this process. I am proud of myself because I never gave up and made it at last.
A DIY Bookmark for My Favourite Book
Last week, I took part in our school's Reading & Bookmark-making activity. Its purpose was to help us enjoy reading our favourite book. My favourite book is the classic novel Journey to the West—one of the Four Great Classical Novels. I like the Monkey King best because he helps the weak and never gives up.
In order to make a bookmark, I prepared a card, scissors, glue and so on. First, I cut the card into long strips. And then I drew a picture of a monkey on the left and wrote a famous saying "Nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it." on the right to encourage myself not to give up when facing difficulties. At last, I glued it to a thin piece of wood.
Although I met some difficulties in this process. I am proud of myself because I never gave up and made it at last.
解析
【分析】
解题时需先明确核心任务：围绕“DIY书签”主题，结合表格提示的三个维度（制作原因、制作过程、制作感受）完成英语短文写作。第一步，确定喜欢的书籍（如经典名著《西游记》），明确制作书签的目的是帮助享受阅读；第二步，梳理制作所需的材料工具，按顺序规划制作步骤；第三步，结合制作过程分享真实感受，确保内容连贯、语法正确，符合词数要求。
【解析】
写作时，先承接已给开头，说明活动目的（对应表格“Why you made it”部分：帮助享受阅读，介绍喜欢的书《西游记》，类型为四大名著，喜欢孙悟空的原因）；接着写制作书签的材料（卡片、剪刀、胶水等），按步骤描述：先裁剪卡片成长条，再画猴子图案，写励志语句，最后粘贴固定（对应表格“Materials & Tools”和“Steps”部分）；最后表达制作感受，说明虽有困难但很自豪（对应表格“How you felt”部分），确保语言准确，符合英语表达习惯，词数达标。
【答案】
One possible version:
A DIY Bookmark for My Favourite Book
Last week, I took part in our school's Reading & Bookmark-making activity. Its purpose was to help us enjoy reading our favourite book. My favourite book is the classic novel Journey to the West—one of the Four Great Classical Novels. I like the Monkey King best because he helps the weak and never gives up.
In order to make a bookmark, I prepared a card, scissors, glue and so on. First, I cut the card into long strips. And then I drew a picture of a monkey on the left and wrote a famous saying "Nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it." on the right to encourage myself not to give up when facing difficulties. At last, I glued it to a thin piece of wood.
Although I met some difficulties in this process. I am proud of myself because I never gave up and made it at last.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、实用文体写作、词汇运用
【点评】
该作文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有提示信息，内容具体充实，语言流畅自然，语法正确，逻辑清晰，能清晰传递制作书签的目的、过程与感受，是符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.3
解题时需先明确核心任务：围绕“DIY书签”主题，结合表格提示的三个维度（制作原因、制作过程、制作感受）完成英语短文写作。第一步，确定喜欢的书籍（如经典名著《西游记》），明确制作书签的目的是帮助享受阅读；第二步，梳理制作所需的材料工具，按顺序规划制作步骤；第三步，结合制作过程分享真实感受，确保内容连贯、语法正确，符合词数要求。
【解析】
写作时，先承接已给开头，说明活动目的（对应表格“Why you made it”部分：帮助享受阅读，介绍喜欢的书《西游记》，类型为四大名著，喜欢孙悟空的原因）；接着写制作书签的材料（卡片、剪刀、胶水等），按步骤描述：先裁剪卡片成长条，再画猴子图案，写励志语句，最后粘贴固定（对应表格“Materials & Tools”和“Steps”部分）；最后表达制作感受，说明虽有困难但很自豪（对应表格“How you felt”部分），确保语言准确，符合英语表达习惯，词数达标。
【答案】
One possible version:
A DIY Bookmark for My Favourite Book
Last week, I took part in our school's Reading & Bookmark-making activity. Its purpose was to help us enjoy reading our favourite book. My favourite book is the classic novel Journey to the West—one of the Four Great Classical Novels. I like the Monkey King best because he helps the weak and never gives up.
In order to make a bookmark, I prepared a card, scissors, glue and so on. First, I cut the card into long strips. And then I drew a picture of a monkey on the left and wrote a famous saying "Nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it." on the right to encourage myself not to give up when facing difficulties. At last, I glued it to a thin piece of wood.
Although I met some difficulties in this process. I am proud of myself because I never gave up and made it at last.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、实用文体写作、词汇运用
【点评】
该作文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有提示信息，内容具体充实，语言流畅自然，语法正确，逻辑清晰，能清晰传递制作书签的目的、过程与感受，是符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.3
