八、书面表达。(10 分)

Jack 一家今天去了公园,请根据图片提示,用英语写一篇短文描述一下 Jack 一家在公园的活动。
要求:语句通顺,书写规范,不少于5句话。

It is Sunday today. It's a fine day. Jack
and his family are in the park. Jack and his
father are flying a kite. His mother is
reading a book under a tree. Mary is eating
an apple near her mother. Tom and his dog
are playing football happily. They're having
a good time.

【分析】
拿到这道题首先明确写作要求：描述Jack一家在公园的活动，不少于5句话，语句通顺。首先第一步先确定整体时态，描述当下正在发生的场景，选用现在进行时（be+动词ing）是最贴合的；第二步搭建写作框架：开篇先交代背景，说明今天的天气、时间，点明一家人来到公园的核心场景；第三步按照空间顺序逐个对应图中人物的活动：先写高处的Jack和爸爸放风筝，再写左侧树下妈妈和Mary的活动，最后写右下角Tom和小狗踢足球的内容，所有细节都从图里提取，不编造无关内容；最后收尾总结大家游玩的心情，自然收尾，就能满足题目的全部要求。
【解析】
本篇范文按照"背景引入-分述人物活动-总结心情"的逻辑展开：
1. 开篇先用两句交代基础信息：说明今天是周日，天气晴朗，自然引出Jack全家来到公园游玩的核心场景，让文章开头清晰自然。
2. 接下来按照从远到近的空间顺序依次描述人物行为：
先介绍Jack和爸爸正在放风筝，对应图中右上方的场景；
接着介绍妈妈在树下看书，Mary在妈妈旁边吃苹果，对应图左侧长椅的场景；
最后介绍Tom正和他的小狗开心地踢足球，对应图右下角的场景。
3. 最后收尾点明大家都玩得很愉快，收束全文。全文所有内容都贴合图片提示，现在进行时使用准确，句数远多于5句，符合题目全部要求。
【答案】
It is Sunday today. It's a fine day. Jack and his family are in the park. Jack and his father are flying a kite. His mother is reading a book under a tree. Mary is eating an apple near her mother. Tom and his dog are playing football happily. They're having a good time.
【知识点】
现在进行时，情景写作，人物活动描述
【点评】
这篇短文完全匹配图片给出的所有信息，叙事逻辑流畅，时态运用准确规范，没有语法错误，用词简单地道，完整还原了一家人在公园休闲游玩的温馨画面，完全满足题目的各项评分要求，是一篇合格的优秀小学英语习作。
【难度系数】
0.7