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为了丰富大家的课余生活，加强彼此间的了解，你班举办了一次主题为“我和我的收藏品”的班会。请你写一篇英语短文，向大家介绍自己收藏的物品、规模及收藏起始时间，并讲述收藏背后的故事。
注意：
1. 词数为80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4. 短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Many people like collecting different things.
【写作评价】
为了丰富大家的课余生活，加强彼此间的了解，你班举办了一次主题为“我和我的收藏品”的班会。请你写一篇英语短文，向大家介绍自己收藏的物品、规模及收藏起始时间，并讲述收藏背后的故事。
注意：
1. 词数为80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4. 短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Many people like collecting different things.
As for me, I like collecting movie tickets and now I have more than 100 of them. I started collecting movie tickets at the age of 10. And I still remember that it was my first time to watch films in the cinema. My mother advised me to keep that movie ticket so that I could remember the wonderful movie and our happy time together. From then on, I took an interest in collecting movie tickets. They not only remind me of the movies I have watched but also the people I once spent time with.
【写作评价】
答案
Writing
One possible version:
Many people like collecting different things. As for me, I like collecting movie tickets and now I have more than 100 of them.
I started collecting movie tickets at the age of 10. And I still remember that it was my first time to watch films in the cinema. My mother advised me to keep that movie ticket so that I could remember the wonderful movie and our happy time together. From then on, I took an interest in collecting movie tickets. They not only remind me of the movies I have watched but also the people I once spent time with.
One possible version:
Many people like collecting different things. As for me, I like collecting movie tickets and now I have more than 100 of them.
I started collecting movie tickets at the age of 10. And I still remember that it was my first time to watch films in the cinema. My mother advised me to keep that movie ticket so that I could remember the wonderful movie and our happy time together. From then on, I took an interest in collecting movie tickets. They not only remind me of the movies I have watched but also the people I once spent time with.
解析
【分析】本题为英语应用文写作，主题是“我和我的收藏品”。解题思路：首先承接已给开头，明确自己的收藏品类型、规模；接着说明收藏的起始时间；再详细讲述收藏背后的故事，最后可简单点明收藏的意义，确保覆盖题目要求的所有要点，语言连贯，词数符合要求。
【解析】写作时需遵循以下步骤：1. 承接开头，点明自己的收藏品（如电影票）及规模（已收藏的数量）；2. 说明开始收藏的时间；3. 讲述收藏背后的故事（如第一次和家人看电影，家人建议留存票根纪念，由此开始收藏）；4. 适当补充收藏的意义，使行文完整，符合词数80左右的要求，语言准确自然。
【答案】One possible version:
Many people like collecting different things. As for me, I like collecting movie tickets and now I have more than 100 of them.
I started collecting movie tickets at the age of 10. And I still remember that it was my first time to watch films in the cinema. My mother advised me to keep that movie ticket so that I could remember the wonderful movie and our happy time together. From then on, I took an interest in collecting movie tickets. They not only remind me of the movies I have watched but also the people I once spent time with.
【知识点】英语应用文写作，英语记叙文写作，英语语言表达
【点评】范文紧扣主题，完整覆盖了“收藏的物品、规模、起始时间及背后故事”的要求，结构清晰，语言流畅自然，符合词数要求，是一篇优秀的习作。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作时需遵循以下步骤：1. 承接开头，点明自己的收藏品（如电影票）及规模（已收藏的数量）；2. 说明开始收藏的时间；3. 讲述收藏背后的故事（如第一次和家人看电影，家人建议留存票根纪念，由此开始收藏）；4. 适当补充收藏的意义，使行文完整，符合词数80左右的要求，语言准确自然。
【答案】One possible version:
Many people like collecting different things. As for me, I like collecting movie tickets and now I have more than 100 of them.
I started collecting movie tickets at the age of 10. And I still remember that it was my first time to watch films in the cinema. My mother advised me to keep that movie ticket so that I could remember the wonderful movie and our happy time together. From then on, I took an interest in collecting movie tickets. They not only remind me of the movies I have watched but also the people I once spent time with.
【知识点】英语应用文写作，英语记叙文写作，英语语言表达
【点评】范文紧扣主题，完整覆盖了“收藏的物品、规模、起始时间及背后故事”的要求，结构清晰，语言流畅自然，符合词数要求，是一篇优秀的习作。
【难度系数】0.6
