九、短文写作。
根据下面的写作要点,写一写王浩养成好习惯的故事。短文要包含所有要点,并适当发挥,不少于8句。
要点:
·王浩有一些坏习惯。他经常吃蛋糕和糖果。周六和周日他起床很晚,并在家看电视。
·他经常感到疲倦,有时(sometimes)感到不舒服。
·他想要养成……等好习惯。现在他变得强壮而健康。
Wang Hao has some unhealthy habits.


He often .
Wang Hao wants to have good habits. So he

示例: Wang Hao has some unhealthy habits. He often eats cakes and sweets. On Saturday and Sunday, he gets up late. He watches TV at home. He often feels tired and sometimes he feels ill.
Wang Hao wants to have good habits. So he eats fruit, vegetables and fish. He also drinks lots of water and some milk every day. He gets up early and does exercise. He runs in the park. He plays football with his friends too. He feels strong and healthy now.

【分析】本题为英语短文写作题，需紧扣给定的三个核心要点：①王浩的坏习惯（常吃蛋糕和糖果、周末起晚且在家看电视、常疲倦有时不舒服）；②他为养成好习惯做出的改变；③最终结果（变得强壮健康）。写作时需使用一般现在时，语句通顺连贯，不少于8句，适当补充合理细节，确保所有要点都被覆盖。
【解析】Wang Hao has some unhealthy habits. He often eats cakes and sweets. On Saturday and Sunday, he gets up late. He watches TV at home. He often feels tired and sometimes he feels ill. Wang Hao wants to have good habits. So he eats fruit, vegetables and fish. He also drinks lots of water and some milk every day. He gets up early and does exercise. He runs in the park. He plays football with his friends too. He feels strong and healthy now.
【答案】Wang Hao has some unhealthy habits. He often eats cakes and sweets. On Saturday and Sunday, he gets up late. He watches TV at home. He often feels tired and sometimes he feels ill. Wang Hao wants to have good habits. So he eats fruit, vegetables and fish. He also drinks lots of water and some milk every day. He gets up early and does exercise. He runs in the park. He plays football with his friends too. He feels strong and healthy now.
【知识点】英语短文写作、一般现在时、健康话题表达
【点评】本题考查学生的英语书面表达能力，要求结合给定要点完成短文，需注意时态正确、语句连贯，适当发挥补充合理细节，符合初中英语写作的考查要求，能有效检验学生的语言运用能力。
【难度系数】0.6