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六、书面表达。
近年来，人类活动对大自然的破坏引发了各种自然灾害。假如你是一名中学生，正参加英语写作大赛，请你根据以下内容写一篇英语短文，介绍在不同的自然灾害中保护自己的方法。同时，提出预防措施，拯救地球。
Types of natural disasters
floods
earthquakes
fires
…
→
Ways to protect ourselves
get to high ground
hide under
use a wet towel
…
→
Actions to prevent future disasters
plant more trees
protect wild animals
…
注意事项：
1. 要点齐全、语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 词数90左右，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。
In recent years, there have been many natural disasters caused by human activities, such as
Hope we can have a better world in the future.
近年来，人类活动对大自然的破坏引发了各种自然灾害。假如你是一名中学生，正参加英语写作大赛，请你根据以下内容写一篇英语短文，介绍在不同的自然灾害中保护自己的方法。同时，提出预防措施，拯救地球。
Types of natural disasters
floods
earthquakes
fires
…
→
Ways to protect ourselves
get to high ground
hide under
use a wet towel
…
→
Actions to prevent future disasters
plant more trees
protect wild animals
…
注意事项：
1. 要点齐全、语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 词数90左右，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。
In recent years, there have been many natural disasters caused by human activities, such as
Hope we can have a better world in the future.
答案
One possible version:
In recent years, there have been many natural disasters caused by human activities, such as floods, earthquakes, fires, sandstorms and so on.
When there is a flood, we should get to high ground and make sure not to walk through the flood water. If an earthquake happens, we can hide under a strong desk and stay away from a window. If a fire happens, we can use a wet towel to cover our mouth and nose and stay low to the ground. Of course, we should take action to prevent future disasters. We can plant more trees and protect wild animals. We can also share some related information with others.
Hope we can have a better world in the future.
In recent years, there have been many natural disasters caused by human activities, such as floods, earthquakes, fires, sandstorms and so on.
When there is a flood, we should get to high ground and make sure not to walk through the flood water. If an earthquake happens, we can hide under a strong desk and stay away from a window. If a fire happens, we can use a wet towel to cover our mouth and nose and stay low to the ground. Of course, we should take action to prevent future disasters. We can plant more trees and protect wild animals. We can also share some related information with others.
Hope we can have a better world in the future.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，属于话题类应用文写作。解题思路为：1. 承接已给开头，列举题目指定的自然灾害类型；2. 分述洪水、地震、火灾三种灾害对应的自我保护方法，确保覆盖所有要求的保护要点；3. 提出预防未来灾害的措施，结合题目给出的种树、保护野生动物等内容；4. 衔接已给结尾，保证语句通顺、意思连贯，符合词数要求，且不使用真实个人或学校信息。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 承接开头，列举洪水、地震、火灾等由人类活动引发的自然灾害；2. 分述应对方法：遭遇洪水时到高地，切勿涉险水；发生地震时躲在坚固的桌下，远离窗户；遇到火灾时用湿毛巾捂住口鼻，低姿前行；3. 提出预防措施：多种树、保护野生动物，还可与他人分享相关信息；4. 确保语句通顺、要点齐全，词数符合要求，最后衔接已给结尾。
【答案】
In recent years, there have been many natural disasters caused by human activities, such as floods, earthquakes, fires, sandstorms and so on. When there is a flood, we should get to high ground and make sure not to walk through the flood water. If an earthquake happens, we can hide under a strong desk and stay away from a window. If a fire happens, we can use a wet towel to cover our mouth and nose and stay low to the ground. Of course, we should take action to prevent future disasters. We can plant more trees and protect wild animals. We can also share some related information with others. Hope we can have a better world in the future.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、自然灾害英语表达、要点连贯写作
【点评】
本题围绕自然灾害话题，考查学生的英语书面表达能力，要求覆盖指定要点，贴近学生生活实际，难度适中，需注意语句通顺、逻辑连贯，符合词数要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语书面表达题，属于话题类应用文写作。解题思路为：1. 承接已给开头，列举题目指定的自然灾害类型；2. 分述洪水、地震、火灾三种灾害对应的自我保护方法，确保覆盖所有要求的保护要点；3. 提出预防未来灾害的措施，结合题目给出的种树、保护野生动物等内容；4. 衔接已给结尾，保证语句通顺、意思连贯，符合词数要求，且不使用真实个人或学校信息。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 承接开头，列举洪水、地震、火灾等由人类活动引发的自然灾害；2. 分述应对方法：遭遇洪水时到高地，切勿涉险水；发生地震时躲在坚固的桌下，远离窗户；遇到火灾时用湿毛巾捂住口鼻，低姿前行；3. 提出预防措施：多种树、保护野生动物，还可与他人分享相关信息；4. 确保语句通顺、要点齐全，词数符合要求，最后衔接已给结尾。
【答案】
In recent years, there have been many natural disasters caused by human activities, such as floods, earthquakes, fires, sandstorms and so on. When there is a flood, we should get to high ground and make sure not to walk through the flood water. If an earthquake happens, we can hide under a strong desk and stay away from a window. If a fire happens, we can use a wet towel to cover our mouth and nose and stay low to the ground. Of course, we should take action to prevent future disasters. We can plant more trees and protect wild animals. We can also share some related information with others. Hope we can have a better world in the future.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、自然灾害英语表达、要点连贯写作
【点评】
本题围绕自然灾害话题，考查学生的英语书面表达能力，要求覆盖指定要点，贴近学生生活实际，难度适中，需注意语句通顺、逻辑连贯，符合词数要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
