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(二)书面表达(共1题,计15分)
76.学校英文报发起以“Green life,start from me!”为主题的征文活动,请根据所给提示,写一篇英语短文投稿,和同学们分享你在环境保护方面的做法和倡议。
注意事项:
(1)文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
(2)文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺;
(3)词数80左右。
Green living is a necessary lifestyle. To live a green life, I
76.学校英文报发起以“Green life,start from me!”为主题的征文活动,请根据所给提示,写一篇英语短文投稿,和同学们分享你在环境保护方面的做法和倡议。
注意事项:
(1)文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
(2)文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺;
(3)词数80左右。
Green living is a necessary lifestyle. To live a green life, I
always turn off the lights and the TV when I'm not using them. I also try to use less water by taking shorter showers. They can help me save energy. At school, I recycle paper and plastic, and I often walk or ride my bike instead of taking a car.
I think we can all do more to protect our environment. I plan to organize an activity called "Green Week" at our school. During this week, we can have activities like planting trees, cleaning up the schoolyard, and sharing tips on how to save energy.
I believe that if everyone takes action, we can create a cleaner, greener future. Every small step counts—let's start today!
I think we can all do more to protect our environment. I plan to organize an activity called "Green Week" at our school. During this week, we can have activities like planting trees, cleaning up the schoolyard, and sharing tips on how to save energy.
I believe that if everyone takes action, we can create a cleaner, greener future. Every small step counts—let's start today!
答案
76. One possible version:
Green living is a necessary lifestyle. To live a green life,I
always turn off the lights and the TV when I'm not using
them. I also try to use less water by taking shorter showers.
by doing...通过做……
They can help me save energy. At school, I recycle paper and
plastic, and I often walk or ride my bike instead of taking a car.
I think we can all do more to protect our environment. I
plan to organize an activity called "Green Week" at our
school. During this week, we can have activities like planting
trees, cleaning up the schoolyard, and sharing tips on how to
save energy.
I believe that if everyone takes action, we can create a
cleaner, greener future. Every small step counts—let's start
today!
思路引导 [总体分析]
①体裁:本文是一篇应用文(征文稿),主题为“Green life,
start from me!”。②时态:以一般现在时为主;涉及未来计
划或倡议时,可用一般将来时。③提示:写作要点已给出,
应注意不要遗漏信息提示,适当增加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头已给出,直接引出个人做法;第二步,详细介绍
号召他人过绿色生活的做法;第三步,发出倡议。
[亮点词汇]
①turn off关掉 ②take shorter showers洗短时间淋浴
③instead of代替,而不是 ④share tips分享技巧
[高分句型]
I always turn off the lights and the TV when I'm not using
them. (when引导时间状语从句)
Green living is a necessary lifestyle. To live a green life,I
always turn off the lights and the TV when I'm not using
them. I also try to use less water by taking shorter showers.
by doing...通过做……
They can help me save energy. At school, I recycle paper and
plastic, and I often walk or ride my bike instead of taking a car.
I think we can all do more to protect our environment. I
plan to organize an activity called "Green Week" at our
school. During this week, we can have activities like planting
trees, cleaning up the schoolyard, and sharing tips on how to
save energy.
I believe that if everyone takes action, we can create a
cleaner, greener future. Every small step counts—let's start
today!
思路引导 [总体分析]
①体裁:本文是一篇应用文(征文稿),主题为“Green life,
start from me!”。②时态:以一般现在时为主;涉及未来计
划或倡议时,可用一般将来时。③提示:写作要点已给出,
应注意不要遗漏信息提示,适当增加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头已给出,直接引出个人做法;第二步,详细介绍
号召他人过绿色生活的做法;第三步,发出倡议。
[亮点词汇]
①turn off关掉 ②take shorter showers洗短时间淋浴
③instead of代替,而不是 ④share tips分享技巧
[高分句型]
I always turn off the lights and the TV when I'm not using
them. (when引导时间状语从句)
解析
【分析】首先明确本次征文主题为“Green life, start from me!”，需包含两个核心要点：一是个人践行绿色生活的具体做法（如节能、节水等），二是号召他人参与绿色行动的计划（如组织活动等）。写作时要承接给定开头句，先介绍个人的环保行为，再阐述号召他人的具体安排，最后发出倡议，同时注意时态（一般现在时为主，计划用一般将来时）、词数（80左右）及避免真实信息的要求。
【解析】写作步骤如下：1. 承接开头句，介绍个人践行绿色生活的具体做法，如不用时关灯关电视、短时间淋浴节水、回收纸和塑料、步行或骑车代替乘车等，体现节能环保；2. 阐述号召他人的具体计划，如组织“Green Week”活动，包含种树、清理校园、分享节能技巧等；3. 结尾发出倡议，强调从小事做起，呼吁大家共同创造绿色未来。写作时运用恰当的短语（如turn off, instead of）和句型（如when引导的时间状语从句），保证语句连贯，符合词数要求。
【答案】One possible version:
Green living is a necessary lifestyle. To live a green life,I always turn off the lights and the TV when I'm not using them. I also try to use less water by taking shorter showers. They can help me save energy. At school, I recycle paper and plastic, and I often walk or ride my bike instead of taking a car. I think we can all do more to protect our environment. I plan to organize an activity called "Green Week" at our school. During this week, we can have activities like planting trees, cleaning up the schoolyard, and sharing tips on how to save energy. I believe that if everyone takes action, we can create a cleaner, greener future. Every small step counts—let's start today!
【知识点】英语书面表达、环保主题写作、应用文写作
【点评】本文紧扣征文主题，完整覆盖题目要求的所有要点，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，语言流畅自然，运用了丰富的常用短语和地道句型，符合征文的格式与要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作步骤如下：1. 承接开头句，介绍个人践行绿色生活的具体做法，如不用时关灯关电视、短时间淋浴节水、回收纸和塑料、步行或骑车代替乘车等，体现节能环保；2. 阐述号召他人的具体计划，如组织“Green Week”活动，包含种树、清理校园、分享节能技巧等；3. 结尾发出倡议，强调从小事做起，呼吁大家共同创造绿色未来。写作时运用恰当的短语（如turn off, instead of）和句型（如when引导的时间状语从句），保证语句连贯，符合词数要求。
【答案】One possible version:
Green living is a necessary lifestyle. To live a green life,I always turn off the lights and the TV when I'm not using them. I also try to use less water by taking shorter showers. They can help me save energy. At school, I recycle paper and plastic, and I often walk or ride my bike instead of taking a car. I think we can all do more to protect our environment. I plan to organize an activity called "Green Week" at our school. During this week, we can have activities like planting trees, cleaning up the schoolyard, and sharing tips on how to save energy. I believe that if everyone takes action, we can create a cleaner, greener future. Every small step counts—let's start today!
【知识点】英语书面表达、环保主题写作、应用文写作
【点评】本文紧扣征文主题，完整覆盖题目要求的所有要点，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，语言流畅自然，运用了丰富的常用短语和地道句型，符合征文的格式与要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】0.6
