七、书面表达(本题有1小题，共计20分)(真题·给人)
76. 假设你是李华，你校英语社团将开展“劳动(labour)让我成长”的演讲比赛。请结合自身实际，选择下图中的一个劳动场所，谈谈你的做法和收获。
Labour Helps Me Grow
In the neighbourhood At home

要求:(1)文中必须包含所选表格内的所有信息,可适当发挥;(2)你的做法和收获至少各补充一条;(3)80词左右;(4)演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone. I'm Li Hua. I'm so happy to give a speech here.







Thanks for listening!

One possible version:
Hello, everyone. I'm Li Hua. I'm so happy to give a speech here.
I'd like to share how labour helps me grow at home. Every day, I do the dishes after meals and make the bed every morning. Also, I often help my mum wash the clothes and sweep the floor on weekends.
From doing these chores, I've developed important life skills. I've learnt to take care of myself and understand how hard my parents work. What's more, I've become more responsible and patient. I also realise that small efforts can make a big difference in keeping a home tidy.
Labour not only makes me independent but also teaches me the value of hard work.
Thanks for listening!
(102 words)
写作指导
【话题点拨】
这是一篇演讲类记叙文,主题是“劳动如何帮助自身成长”,需以第一人称(Li Hua)向听众分享居家劳动的经历与感悟。写作需覆盖“what(做了哪些劳动)、how(劳动的具体方式)、why(劳动带来的成长)”三个核心维度,逻辑清晰且情感真实;时态以一般现在时(描述日常劳动)+现在完成时(描述成长变化)为主;需包含材料中的劳动内容(洗碗、整理床铺、洗衣、扫地),并重点突出“劳动带来的能力/认知提升”,让内容有感染力。
【提纲演示】
第一步:
开篇问候+点明主题
示例:Hello, everyone. I'm Li Hua. I'm so happy to give a speech here. I'd like to share how labour helps me grow at home.
第二步:
具体阐述日常劳动内容
示例:Every day, I do the dishes after meals and make the bed every morning. Also, I often help my mum wash the clothes and sweep the floor on weekends.
第三步:
分析劳动带来的成长(核心部分)
技能与自我照顾能力:
示例: From doing these chores, I've developed important life skills. I've learnt to take care of myself ...
对他人的理解:
示例:... and understand how hard my parents work.
性格与认知变化:
示例: What's more, I've become more responsible and patient. I also realise that small efforts can make a big difference ...
第四步:
总结升华+结尾致谢
示例: Labour not only makes me independent but also teaches me the value of hard work. Thanks for listening!
【写作要点】
逻辑衔接:
用 also/what's more 串联不同劳动内容与成长点,让演讲更流畅
情感落地:
将“成长”具体化为“生活技能、理解父母、责任感”等细节,避免空泛
演讲语气:
开头问候、结尾致谢符合演讲场景,语言口语化但正式得体
难题解析

【分析】
首先审题明确：身份为李华，主题是“劳动让我成长”，需从给定的两个劳动场所中选一个，写作要求为覆盖所有指定劳动内容、补充做法与收获各一条、80词左右、使用给定的开头结尾。解题思路：1. 选择贴近学生日常的居家劳动作为写作方向，易展开内容；2. 开篇衔接给定开头，点明分享居家劳动的主题；3. 列出所有要求的劳动内容；4. 阐述收获，补充成长相关的具体内容；5. 总结劳动意义，呼应主题，使用符合演讲的得体语言，控制字数，用衔接词保证逻辑流畅。
【解析】
步骤1：确定写作方向，选择居家劳动（符合题目给出的选项，内容贴近学生实际）；
步骤2：衔接给定开头，点明分享居家劳动的主题；
步骤3：列举所有指定劳动内容：每天饭后洗碗、整理床铺，周末帮妈妈洗衣、扫地；
步骤4：阐述收获，补充成长内容：从劳动中获得生活技能、理解父母辛劳、增强责任感等；
步骤5：总结升华，呼应主题，使用给定的结尾致谢，用also、what's more等衔接词保证逻辑清晰，语言符合演讲的正式口语化风格。
【答案】
One possible version:
Hello, everyone. I'm Li Hua. I'm so happy to give a speech here.
I'd like to share how labour helps me grow at home. Every day, I do the dishes after meals and make the bed every morning. Also, I often help my mum wash the clothes and sweep the floor on weekends.
From doing these chores, I've developed important life skills. I've learnt to take care of myself and understand how hard my parents work. What's more, I've become more responsible and patient. I also realise that small efforts can make a big difference in keeping a home tidy.
Labour not only makes me independent but also teaches me the value of hard work.
Thanks for listening!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、话题类书面表达、时态运用
【点评】
这篇范文严格遵循题目要求，覆盖了所有指定的劳动内容，做法具体可感，收获真实有细节，逻辑清晰，衔接自然，语言得体，符合演讲的格式与语气，很好地诠释了“劳动让我成长”的核心主题，是一篇优秀的书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.6