六、书面表达(本题有1小题;共计20分)
61. 假如你是彼得(Peter),你的朋友吉尔(Jill)发来电子邮件向你抱怨她的家规太严格。以下是吉尔的邮件,请你据此用英语给她回一封邮件并给出相关建议。不少于70词。

Dear Jill,








Yours,
Peter

61. One possible version:
Dear Jill,
Here are some ideas for you.
It is a good habit to get up early and go to bed early. But sometimes when you feel tired, you can get up a little late on weekends. Everyone knows that all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. You can hang out with friends on weekends. Why not talk about it with your parents first? And then do your best to study well. I'm sure you can live a happy life.
Yours,
Peter

【分析】
本题要求以彼得的身份给吉尔写一封回信，针对吉尔抱怨家规严格的问题，需先共情理解，再给出合理可行的建议，同时遵循英语书信的格式，字数不少于70词。解题思路为：1. 开头回应吉尔的邮件，表达对她烦恼的理解；2. 针对吉尔提到的作息、不能和朋友外出、学习要求三个核心问题，分别给出符合实际的建议；3. 结尾表达关心，契合朋友间的交流语气，满足书信格式要求。
【解析】
首先以“Here are some ideas for you.”引出建议；针对作息，肯定早睡早起的好习惯，同时说明周末可适当调整，因为需要休息；针对不能和朋友晚上外出，建议和父母沟通，改在周末；针对学习，鼓励她努力学习，让她明白父母的期望是为她好，最后表达祝福。
【答案】
Dear Jill,
Here are some ideas for you.
It is a good habit to get up early and go to bed early. But sometimes when you feel tired, you can get up a little late on weekends. Everyone knows that all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. You can hang out with friends on weekends. Why not talk about it with your parents first? And then do your best to study well. I'm sure you can live a happy life.
Yours,
Peter
【知识点】
英语书信写作、建议表达、日常话题写作
【点评】
范文贴合题目要求，针对吉尔的烦恼给出了具体、合理的建议，语气友好自然，符合朋友间的交流，同时满足英语书信的格式和字数要求，是一篇符合标准的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.4