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四、书面表达(本题有1小题,共20分)
假设你是 Li Hua,昨天你收到好友 Jack 的一封电子邮件,Jack 向你倾诉他的烦恼并寻求你的帮助。请阅读邮件后回复。
Dear Li Hua,
I really need your help. These days, my best friend and I are not talking to each other. I saw him bad-mouthing me with some other classmates after class, sometimes even on the Internet. I feel so sad that I can't focus on my study. What should I do?
Jack
注意:1. 回复须围绕上述问题展开,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 词数 80 左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:bad-mouth v. 说(某人)坏话 focus on 专注于
Hi Jack,
I'm sorry you had to go through that.
I hope my advice will be helpful to you.
Li Hua
假设你是 Li Hua,昨天你收到好友 Jack 的一封电子邮件,Jack 向你倾诉他的烦恼并寻求你的帮助。请阅读邮件后回复。
Dear Li Hua,
I really need your help. These days, my best friend and I are not talking to each other. I saw him bad-mouthing me with some other classmates after class, sometimes even on the Internet. I feel so sad that I can't focus on my study. What should I do?
Jack
注意:1. 回复须围绕上述问题展开,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 词数 80 左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:bad-mouth v. 说(某人)坏话 focus on 专注于
Hi Jack,
I'm sorry you had to go through that.
It must be painful to hear your friend bad-mouthing you. I have some advice for you.
First, try to calm down and think if there's any misunderstanding between you two. Maybe you could talk to him privately to express your feelings honestly. If he continues bad-mouthing you, remember that true friends don't do that. Second, focus on your studies and spend time with other friends who respect you.
Don't let this affect your schoolwork—that's what matters most right now. You deserve better treatment from a real friend.
I hope my advice will be helpful to you.
Li Hua
答案
One possible version:
Hi Jack,
I'm sorry you had to go through that. It must be painful to hear your friend bad-mouthing you. I have some advice for you.
First, try to calm down and think if there's any misunderstanding between you two. Maybe you could talk to him privately to express your feelings honestly. If he continues bad-mouthing you, remember that true friends don't do that. Second, focus on your studies and spend time with other friends who respect you. Don't let this affect your schoolwork—that's what matters most right now. You deserve better treatment from a real friend.
I hope my advice will be helpful to you.
Li Hua
Hi Jack,
I'm sorry you had to go through that. It must be painful to hear your friend bad-mouthing you. I have some advice for you.
First, try to calm down and think if there's any misunderstanding between you two. Maybe you could talk to him privately to express your feelings honestly. If he continues bad-mouthing you, remember that true friends don't do that. Second, focus on your studies and spend time with other friends who respect you. Don't let this affect your schoolwork—that's what matters most right now. You deserve better treatment from a real friend.
I hope my advice will be helpful to you.
Li Hua
解析
【分析】本题要求以Li Hua的身份给好友Jack写建议信，针对Jack被好友说坏话、无法专注学习的烦恼，需遵循“共情→给出具体建议→收尾”的结构，围绕问题展开，适当补充细节，使用参考词汇，控制词数在80左右，保证行文连贯。
【解析】首先承接开头的共情，点明好友说坏话带来的痛苦；接着分两点给出合理建议：第一，先冷静反思是否存在误会，私下与好友坦诚沟通表达自身感受；第二，将注意力放在学业上，与尊重自己的朋友相处，避免影响学习；最后收尾呼应，符合题目要求。
【答案】One possible version:
Hi Jack,
I'm sorry you had to go through that. It must be painful to hear your friend bad-mouthing you. I have some advice for you.
First, try to calm down and think if there's any misunderstanding between you two. Maybe you could talk to him privately to express your feelings honestly. If he continues bad-mouthing you, remember that true friends don't do that. Second, focus on your studies and spend time with other friends who respect you. Don't let this affect your schoolwork—that's what matters most right now. You deserve better treatment from a real friend.
I hope my advice will be helpful to you.
Li Hua
【知识点】英语建议信写作、英语应用文写作、词汇运用
【点评】本题贴近学生日常人际问题，考查学生用英语解决实际问题的表达能力，要求结构清晰、建议合理、语言连贯，是常见的书面表达题型，能有效检验学生的英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】首先承接开头的共情，点明好友说坏话带来的痛苦；接着分两点给出合理建议：第一，先冷静反思是否存在误会，私下与好友坦诚沟通表达自身感受；第二，将注意力放在学业上，与尊重自己的朋友相处，避免影响学习；最后收尾呼应，符合题目要求。
【答案】One possible version:
Hi Jack,
I'm sorry you had to go through that. It must be painful to hear your friend bad-mouthing you. I have some advice for you.
First, try to calm down and think if there's any misunderstanding between you two. Maybe you could talk to him privately to express your feelings honestly. If he continues bad-mouthing you, remember that true friends don't do that. Second, focus on your studies and spend time with other friends who respect you. Don't let this affect your schoolwork—that's what matters most right now. You deserve better treatment from a real friend.
I hope my advice will be helpful to you.
Li Hua
【知识点】英语建议信写作、英语应用文写作、词汇运用
【点评】本题贴近学生日常人际问题，考查学生用英语解决实际问题的表达能力，要求结构清晰、建议合理、语言连贯，是常见的书面表达题型，能有效检验学生的英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】0.6
