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四、书面表达(本题有1小题,共20分)
76.假如你是张华,你的英国笔友Jane对你们家的周末活动很感兴趣。请根据以下相关信息,选择其中一次行程,写一封邮件与她分享。
Zhang Hua
注意:(1)必须包含所选行程的所有要点,可适当发挥。
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
(3)词数:80左右;邮件的开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
76.假如你是张华,你的英国笔友Jane对你们家的周末活动很感兴趣。请根据以下相关信息,选择其中一次行程,写一封邮件与她分享。
Zhang Hua
注意:(1)必须包含所选行程的所有要点,可适当发挥。
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
(3)词数:80左右;邮件的开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
答案
76.One possible version:
Dear Jane,
Happy to share with you what my family did last weekend. We visited the Science Museum. We attended an exhibition about astronauts and learnt about their daily lives and work in space. It was fascinating! We even had the chance to talk to some robots. They could answer questions and move around, which was really cool. I also shot some videos of the exhibits to show you later. It was both fun and educational. I felt so excited about all the new things I discovered.
What is your family trip like? Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
Dear Jane,
Happy to share with you what my family did last weekend. We visited the Science Museum. We attended an exhibition about astronauts and learnt about their daily lives and work in space. It was fascinating! We even had the chance to talk to some robots. They could answer questions and move around, which was really cool. I also shot some videos of the exhibits to show you later. It was both fun and educational. I felt so excited about all the new things I discovered.
What is your family trip like? Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
解析
【分析】
本题要求写一封给英国笔友Jane的邮件，分享家庭周末行程，需选一次行程、涵盖所有要点，词数80左右且开头结尾已给出。解题思路：1. 确定写作对象为笔友，语气要亲切自然；2. 选定行程（参观科学博物馆），梳理核心要点：参观宇航员展览、了解宇航员太空生活、与机器人互动、拍摄展品、表达感受；3. 用一般过去时组织语言，控制词数，不出现真实信息，符合邮件格式要求。
【解析】
1. 承接已给开头，点明所选行程：We visited the Science Museum.
2. 依次描述行程核心活动：介绍宇航员展览内容（了解太空生活与工作）、和机器人互动的经历、拍摄展品的安排；
3. 表达个人感受（有趣且有教育意义）；
4. 衔接已给结尾的问句与落款，完成邮件写作，确保词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Jane,
Happy to share with you what my family did last weekend. We visited the Science Museum. We attended an exhibition about astronauts and learnt about their daily lives and work in space. It was fascinating! We even had the chance to talk to some robots. They could answer questions and move around, which was really cool. I also shot some videos of the exhibits to show you later. It was both fun and educational. I felt so excited about all the new things I discovered.
What is your family trip like? Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【知识点】
英语邮件写作、一般过去时应用、要点整合写作
【点评】
该范文紧扣题目要求，完整涵盖所选行程的所有要点，语气贴合笔友间的交流风格，时态运用准确，语言简洁流畅，词数符合要求，既清晰分享了行程内容，又传递了真实感受，是一篇合格的初中英语书面表达范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求写一封给英国笔友Jane的邮件，分享家庭周末行程，需选一次行程、涵盖所有要点，词数80左右且开头结尾已给出。解题思路：1. 确定写作对象为笔友，语气要亲切自然；2. 选定行程（参观科学博物馆），梳理核心要点：参观宇航员展览、了解宇航员太空生活、与机器人互动、拍摄展品、表达感受；3. 用一般过去时组织语言，控制词数，不出现真实信息，符合邮件格式要求。
【解析】
1. 承接已给开头，点明所选行程：We visited the Science Museum.
2. 依次描述行程核心活动：介绍宇航员展览内容（了解太空生活与工作）、和机器人互动的经历、拍摄展品的安排；
3. 表达个人感受（有趣且有教育意义）；
4. 衔接已给结尾的问句与落款，完成邮件写作，确保词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Jane,
Happy to share with you what my family did last weekend. We visited the Science Museum. We attended an exhibition about astronauts and learnt about their daily lives and work in space. It was fascinating! We even had the chance to talk to some robots. They could answer questions and move around, which was really cool. I also shot some videos of the exhibits to show you later. It was both fun and educational. I felt so excited about all the new things I discovered.
What is your family trip like? Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【知识点】
英语邮件写作、一般过去时应用、要点整合写作
【点评】
该范文紧扣题目要求，完整涵盖所选行程的所有要点，语气贴合笔友间的交流风格，时态运用准确，语言简洁流畅，词数符合要求，既清晰分享了行程内容，又传递了真实感受，是一篇合格的初中英语书面表达范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
