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Ⅳ. Think and write.（写作。）
假如你是Li Lin，请根据以下提示写一篇短文介绍你的假期之旅。
| Place | Transport(旅行方式) | People | Activities | Feelings |
| --- | --- | --- | --- | --- |
| Zibo | by train | Li Lin and
his parents | visit the museum；take nice photos；eat Zibo barbecue(烧烤)；… | … |
要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，不少于50词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
My trip to Zibo last summer holiday was
I want to go there again!
假如你是Li Lin，请根据以下提示写一篇短文介绍你的假期之旅。
| Place | Transport(旅行方式) | People | Activities | Feelings |
| --- | --- | --- | --- | --- |
| Zibo | by train | Li Lin and
his parents | visit the museum；take nice photos；eat Zibo barbecue(烧烤)；… | … |要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，不少于50词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
My trip to Zibo last summer holiday was
interesting
!I went to Zibo with my parents. We went there by train. In the morning, we visited a famous museum. I saw many old things there and learnt a lot about the history of Zibo.
We also took many nice photos in front of the museum.
In the evening, we ate Zibo barbecue. It was so delicious!
We all felt very happy.
I want to go there again!
答案
参考范文:
My trip to Zibo last summer holiday was interesting!
I went to Zibo with my parents. We went there by train. In the morning, we visited a famous museum. I saw many old things there and learnt a lot about the history of Zibo. We also took many nice photos in front of the museum. In the evening, we ate Zibo barbecue. It was so delicious! We all felt very happy.
I want to go there again!
My trip to Zibo last summer holiday was interesting!
I went to Zibo with my parents. We went there by train. In the morning, we visited a famous museum. I saw many old things there and learnt a lot about the history of Zibo. We also took many nice photos in front of the museum. In the evening, we ate Zibo barbecue. It was so delicious! We all felt very happy.
I want to go there again!
解析
【分析】
首先明确写作任务：以Li Lin的身份，根据表格中的信息（地点淄博、交通乘火车、人物和父母、活动参观博物馆、拍照、吃淄博烧烤，以及旅行感受），完成一篇介绍假期之旅的短文，要求语句通顺、意思连贯，不少于50词，开头和结尾已给出。解题思路：先承接开头点明旅行感受，接着依次介绍同行人物、交通方式，再详细描述各项活动，最后补充整体感受，确保覆盖表格关键信息，使用一般过去时契合“过去的假期”的语境，让内容连贯自然。
【解析】
写作时需注意：1. 时态采用一般过去时，匹配旅行发生在过去的语境；2. 完整包含表格所有关键信息：去淄博、和父母乘火车、参观博物馆、拍照、吃淄博烧烤；3. 补充合理细节（如博物馆的收获、烧烤的味道）丰富内容；4. 衔接自然，满足词数要求。具体步骤：①承接给定开头点明旅行感受；②介绍同行者与交通方式；③依次描述参观博物馆、拍照、吃烧烤的活动；④补充整体感受，呼应结尾句。
【答案】
My trip to Zibo last summer holiday was interesting!
I went to Zibo with my parents. We went there by train. In the morning, we visited a famous museum. I saw many old things there and learnt a lot about the history of Zibo. We also took many nice photos in front of the museum. In the evening, we ate Zibo barbecue. It was so delicious! We all felt very happy.
I want to go there again!
【知识点】
英语写作、一般过去时、假期话题表达
【点评】
本题结合表格信息考查学生的英语写作能力，要求整合给定信息完成短文，既考查语言运用能力，又考查信息梳理能力，是常见的英语写作题型，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先明确写作任务：以Li Lin的身份，根据表格中的信息（地点淄博、交通乘火车、人物和父母、活动参观博物馆、拍照、吃淄博烧烤，以及旅行感受），完成一篇介绍假期之旅的短文，要求语句通顺、意思连贯，不少于50词，开头和结尾已给出。解题思路：先承接开头点明旅行感受，接着依次介绍同行人物、交通方式，再详细描述各项活动，最后补充整体感受，确保覆盖表格关键信息，使用一般过去时契合“过去的假期”的语境，让内容连贯自然。
【解析】
写作时需注意：1. 时态采用一般过去时，匹配旅行发生在过去的语境；2. 完整包含表格所有关键信息：去淄博、和父母乘火车、参观博物馆、拍照、吃淄博烧烤；3. 补充合理细节（如博物馆的收获、烧烤的味道）丰富内容；4. 衔接自然，满足词数要求。具体步骤：①承接给定开头点明旅行感受；②介绍同行者与交通方式；③依次描述参观博物馆、拍照、吃烧烤的活动；④补充整体感受，呼应结尾句。
【答案】
My trip to Zibo last summer holiday was interesting!
I went to Zibo with my parents. We went there by train. In the morning, we visited a famous museum. I saw many old things there and learnt a lot about the history of Zibo. We also took many nice photos in front of the museum. In the evening, we ate Zibo barbecue. It was so delicious! We all felt very happy.
I want to go there again!
【知识点】
英语写作、一般过去时、假期话题表达
【点评】
本题结合表格信息考查学生的英语写作能力，要求整合给定信息完成短文，既考查语言运用能力，又考查信息梳理能力，是常见的英语写作题型，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.6
