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七、书面表达(共1大题,满分20分)
沟通是连接心灵的桥梁。请你根据以下内容提示,以“The Power of Communication”为题写一篇英语短文,回忆你与他人产生误会或矛盾的一次经历,描述事件的经过,谈谈你是如何通过沟通解决问题的,并分享你的感悟。
What was the problem?
How did you communicate to solve it?
What did you learn about communication?
Write something more about it.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息,词数100左右(标题和开头已给出的词不计入总词数)。
The Power of Communication
Communication is like a bridge that connects hearts.
沟通是连接心灵的桥梁。请你根据以下内容提示,以“The Power of Communication”为题写一篇英语短文,回忆你与他人产生误会或矛盾的一次经历,描述事件的经过,谈谈你是如何通过沟通解决问题的,并分享你的感悟。
What was the problem?
How did you communicate to solve it?
What did you learn about communication?
Write something more about it.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息,词数100左右(标题和开头已给出的词不计入总词数)。
The Power of Communication
Communication is like a bridge that connects hearts.
Last month, I had a problem with my best friend. I thought she ignored me during a group project because she didn't share her notes with me as promised. I felt upset and would like to stop talking to her. She was also mad that I suddenly ignored her.
Later, I learned she was busy helping another sick group member during the project. Instead of remaining upset, I had a talk with her. I told her why I felt hurt and expressed that I understood her difficulty after I knew the truth. Listening to what I said, she apologised for not letting me know the reason in time. Listening to each other made the misunderstanding between us clear.
This experience taught me that communication solves problems. Now, I always share my feelings with my friends openly. That experience made the friendship stronger.
答案
[参考范文]
The Power of Communication
Communication is like a bridge that connects hearts. Last month, I had a problem with my best friend. I thought she ignored me during a group project because she didn't share her notes with me as promised. I felt upset and would like to stop talking to her. She was also mad that I suddenly ignored her.
Later, I learned she was busy helping another sick group member during the project. Instead of remaining upset, I had a talk with her. I told her why I felt hurt and expressed that I understood her difficulty after I knew the truth. Listening to what I said, she apologised for not letting me know the reason in time. Listening to each other made the misunderstanding between us clear.
This experience taught me that communication solves problems. Now, I always share my feelings with my friends openly. That experience made the friendship stronger.
The Power of Communication
Communication is like a bridge that connects hearts. Last month, I had a problem with my best friend. I thought she ignored me during a group project because she didn't share her notes with me as promised. I felt upset and would like to stop talking to her. She was also mad that I suddenly ignored her.
Later, I learned she was busy helping another sick group member during the project. Instead of remaining upset, I had a talk with her. I told her why I felt hurt and expressed that I understood her difficulty after I knew the truth. Listening to what I said, she apologised for not letting me know the reason in time. Listening to each other made the misunderstanding between us clear.
This experience taught me that communication solves problems. Now, I always share my feelings with my friends openly. That experience made the friendship stronger.
解析
【分析】写作时需围绕主题“The Power of Communication”，紧扣提示的三个核心问题（误会是什么、如何通过沟通解决、沟通的感悟），补充合理细节。首先用已给开头句点题；接着叙述具体误会经历，明确误会的起因与双方的情绪；然后描述沟通的过程，体现主动交流、坦诚表达、互相理解的关键；最后总结感悟，呼应主题，同时注意控制词数，不透露个人真实信息。
【解析】写作遵循“点题-叙事-感悟”的结构：1. 开头（已给）引出沟通是连接心灵的桥梁；2. 叙事部分：交代与好友因小组项目笔记产生的误会，说明双方的情绪；3. 解决部分：描述主动与好友沟通，说出自身感受，倾听对方解释、理解其难处的过程；4. 感悟部分：总结沟通能化解误会、巩固友谊，呼应主题。需注意语言简洁，词数约100，符合要求。
【答案】The Power of Communication
Communication is like a bridge that connects hearts. Last month, I had a problem with my best friend. I thought she ignored me during a group project because she didn't share her notes with me as promised. I felt upset and would like to stop talking to her. She was also mad that I suddenly ignored her.
Later, I learned she was busy helping another sick group member during the project. Instead of remaining upset, I had a talk with her. I told her why I felt hurt and expressed that I understood her difficulty after I knew the truth. Listening to what I said, she apologised for not letting me know the reason in time. Listening to each other made the misunderstanding between us clear.
This experience taught me that communication solves problems. Now, I always share my feelings with my friends openly. That experience made the friendship stronger.
【知识点】英语书面表达、话题作文、记叙文写作
【点评】该范文紧扣主题，结构清晰，完整覆盖题目要求的所有要点，语言流畅自然，情感真挚，准确体现了沟通的力量，符合初中英语书面表达的要求，是一篇优秀的参考例文。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作遵循“点题-叙事-感悟”的结构：1. 开头（已给）引出沟通是连接心灵的桥梁；2. 叙事部分：交代与好友因小组项目笔记产生的误会，说明双方的情绪；3. 解决部分：描述主动与好友沟通，说出自身感受，倾听对方解释、理解其难处的过程；4. 感悟部分：总结沟通能化解误会、巩固友谊，呼应主题。需注意语言简洁，词数约100，符合要求。
【答案】The Power of Communication
Communication is like a bridge that connects hearts. Last month, I had a problem with my best friend. I thought she ignored me during a group project because she didn't share her notes with me as promised. I felt upset and would like to stop talking to her. She was also mad that I suddenly ignored her.
Later, I learned she was busy helping another sick group member during the project. Instead of remaining upset, I had a talk with her. I told her why I felt hurt and expressed that I understood her difficulty after I knew the truth. Listening to what I said, she apologised for not letting me know the reason in time. Listening to each other made the misunderstanding between us clear.
This experience taught me that communication solves problems. Now, I always share my feelings with my friends openly. That experience made the friendship stronger.
【知识点】英语书面表达、话题作文、记叙文写作
【点评】该范文紧扣主题，结构清晰，完整覆盖题目要求的所有要点，语言流畅自然，情感真挚，准确体现了沟通的力量，符合初中英语书面表达的要求，是一篇优秀的参考例文。
【难度系数】0.5
