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八、(2025·宿迁实验学校期末)书面表达
请根据下方提示问题,以“My animal friend”为题写一篇80词左右的短文,可适当发挥。
提示:golden retriever 金毛猎犬
My animal friend
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请根据下方提示问题,以“My animal friend”为题写一篇80词左右的短文,可适当发挥。
提示:golden retriever 金毛猎犬
My animal friend
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答案
八、One possible version:
My animal friend
My animal friend is a golden retriever. It is friendly and smart. It has a soft, shiny coat and loves to play. It eats dog food and vegetables, and it's always ready to run and fetch things for me. When I come home from school, we always have fun together. It's good at learning new tricks. My dog has a great sense of smell and is very loyal. That makes me feel safe and happy.
make sb do sth意为“让某人做某事”。
思路引导 [总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主。③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏题干中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的动物朋友是什么；第二步，描述动物的外貌特征、饮食习惯、活动以及特别之处；第三步，谈论自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①a sense of……的感觉 ②be good at擅长……
[高分句型]
①It eats dog food and vegetables, and it's always ready to run and fetch things for me. (and连接的并列句)
②When I come home from school, we always have fun together. (when引导的时间状语从句)
My animal friend
My animal friend is a golden retriever. It is friendly and smart. It has a soft, shiny coat and loves to play. It eats dog food and vegetables, and it's always ready to run and fetch things for me. When I come home from school, we always have fun together. It's good at learning new tricks. My dog has a great sense of smell and is very loyal. That makes me feel safe and happy.
make sb do sth意为“让某人做某事”。
思路引导 [总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主。③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏题干中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的动物朋友是什么；第二步，描述动物的外貌特征、饮食习惯、活动以及特别之处；第三步，谈论自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①a sense of……的感觉 ②be good at擅长……
[高分句型]
①It eats dog food and vegetables, and it's always ready to run and fetch things for me. (and连接的并列句)
②When I come home from school, we always have fun together. (when引导的时间状语从句)
解析
【分析】
本题是材料类英语书面表达题，题目为“My animal friend”，要求根据给定表格的提示问题（动物是什么、外貌、饮食、行为、特别之处），结合提示的动物golden retriever写作。解题思路：1. 确定写作对象为金毛猎犬；2. 对应表格每个问题组织内容，确保不遗漏要点；3. 选用一般现在时描述动物常态；4. 适当添加细节使短文连贯，控制在80词左右；5. 运用合适词汇和句型提升作文质量。
【解析】
写作步骤：① 开篇点明动物朋友是金毛猎犬，对应“What is it?”；② 描述外貌特征（柔软有光泽的毛、友好聪明），对应“What does it look like?”；③ 说明饮食（狗粮和蔬菜），对应“What does it eat?”；④ 讲述它的行为（陪玩、帮取东西），对应“What does it do?”；⑤ 突出特别之处（擅长学技巧、忠诚、嗅觉好），对应“What's special about it?”；⑥ 表达和它相处的快乐感受，使用一般现在时，运用并列句、时间状语从句等句型，控制字数，使短文连贯自然。
【答案】
My animal friend
My animal friend is a golden retriever. It is friendly and smart. It has a soft, shiny coat and loves to play. It eats dog food and vegetables, and it's always ready to run and fetch things for me. When I come home from school, we always have fun together. It's good at learning new tricks. My dog has a great sense of smell and is very loyal. That makes me feel safe and happy.
【知识点】
英语书面表达，一般现在时，动物话题写作
【点评】
本题为常见的动物类英语书面表达题，紧扣材料提示与表格要点，考查学生的语言组织、时态运用及细节描写能力，要求学生清晰描述动物特征、习性及特别之处，同时表达个人情感，难度适中，适合学生巩固相关写作技能。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题是材料类英语书面表达题，题目为“My animal friend”，要求根据给定表格的提示问题（动物是什么、外貌、饮食、行为、特别之处），结合提示的动物golden retriever写作。解题思路：1. 确定写作对象为金毛猎犬；2. 对应表格每个问题组织内容，确保不遗漏要点；3. 选用一般现在时描述动物常态；4. 适当添加细节使短文连贯，控制在80词左右；5. 运用合适词汇和句型提升作文质量。
【解析】
写作步骤：① 开篇点明动物朋友是金毛猎犬，对应“What is it?”；② 描述外貌特征（柔软有光泽的毛、友好聪明），对应“What does it look like?”；③ 说明饮食（狗粮和蔬菜），对应“What does it eat?”；④ 讲述它的行为（陪玩、帮取东西），对应“What does it do?”；⑤ 突出特别之处（擅长学技巧、忠诚、嗅觉好），对应“What's special about it?”；⑥ 表达和它相处的快乐感受，使用一般现在时，运用并列句、时间状语从句等句型，控制字数，使短文连贯自然。
【答案】
My animal friend
My animal friend is a golden retriever. It is friendly and smart. It has a soft, shiny coat and loves to play. It eats dog food and vegetables, and it's always ready to run and fetch things for me. When I come home from school, we always have fun together. It's good at learning new tricks. My dog has a great sense of smell and is very loyal. That makes me feel safe and happy.
【知识点】
英语书面表达，一般现在时，动物话题写作
【点评】
本题为常见的动物类英语书面表达题，紧扣材料提示与表格要点，考查学生的语言组织、时态运用及细节描写能力，要求学生清晰描述动物特征、习性及特别之处，同时表达个人情感，难度适中，适合学生巩固相关写作技能。
【难度系数】
0.5
