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假如你叫李华，你的学校正在向同学们征集开设课后课程的意见。请你给校长写一封邮件，说一说你建议开设哪些课程，并谈谈开设这些课程的理由。
提示:1. What kind of after-school classes do you suggest your school offer? (dancing, swimming ... )2. Why do you suggest these after-school classes?
注意:1. 邮件中须包括提示信息，可适当发挥。2. 词数 80 左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
[思路点拨] 1. 文体:应用文。2. 时态:一般现在时。3. 人称:以第一人称为主。
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Dear Headmaster,
My name is Li Hua.



I hope we'll have more interesting after-school classes. Thank you!
Yours,
Li Hua

One possible version:
Dear Headmaster,
My name is Li Hua. I want to give you some suggestions about our school's after-school classes.
First of all, dancing can make us happy. It's interesting for us. So I want to have dancing lessons after school. Besides, swimming can help us keep healthy. Doing sports keeps us fit and healthy. I like swimming. I want to have swimming lessons. Last but not least, computers can help us learn about science and technology. I hope we can learn more about computers in after-school classes.
I hope we'll have more interesting after-school classes. Thank you!
Yours,
Li Hua

【分析】
拿到这道写作题，首先先明确核心要求：这是一封给校长的建议邮件，需要说明你推荐的课后课程以及对应的推荐理由，文体为应用文，时态以一般现在时为主，使用第一人称行文。接下来你可以对照给出的思维导图搭建内容：第一步承接开头自我介绍，直接点明要针对学校课后课程提出相关建议；第二步用提示的连接词First of all引出第一个推荐的舞蹈课，补充说明舞蹈能让我们心情愉悦的理由；第三步用Besides衔接第二个推荐的游泳课，说明游泳可以帮助我们保持健康的优势；第四步用Last but not least引出第三个推荐的计算机相关课程，说明它能帮助我们了解科技的作用，最后自然衔接题目给出的结尾句，注意语句通顺，语气礼貌，控制词数在要求范围内，不要遗漏要点。
【解析】
1. 开篇衔接：承接自我介绍的内容，直接引出主题，说明自己要针对学校课后课程给出建议，对应思维导图第一部分。
2. 第一点建议：用First of all开头，点明推荐舞蹈课，补充理由：舞蹈可以让我们心情愉悦，十分有趣，适合作为课后课程。
3. 第二点建议：用Besides衔接，点明推荐游泳课，补充理由：游泳是很好的运动，可以帮助我们强身健体，保持健康。
4. 第三点建议：用Last but not least衔接，点明推荐计算机相关课程，补充理由：计算机可以帮助我们了解科学技术，拓展相关知识。
5. 最后自然衔接题目给出的固定结尾内容，完成全文。
完整行文如下：
Dear Headmaster,
My name is Li Hua. I want to give you some suggestions about our school's after-school classes.
First of all, dancing can make us happy. It's interesting for us. So I want to have dancing lessons after school. Besides, swimming can help us keep healthy. Doing sports keeps us fit and healthy. I like swimming. I want to have swimming lessons. Last but not least, computers can help us learn about science and technology. I hope we can learn more about computers in after-school classes.
I hope we'll have more interesting after-school classes. Thank you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Headmaster,
My name is Li Hua. I want to give you some suggestions about our school's after-school classes.
First of all, dancing can make us happy. It's interesting for us. So I want to have dancing lessons after school. Besides, swimming can help us keep healthy. Doing sports keeps us fit and healthy. I like swimming. I want to have swimming lessons. Last but not least, computers can help us learn about science and technology. I hope we can learn more about computers in after-school classes.
I hope we'll have more interesting after-school classes. Thank you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语邮件写作，建议类表达，一般现在时应用
【点评】
本题属于提纲引导类的基础应用文写作，题目已经给出了清晰的行文逻辑框架和连接提示，学生只需要对应补充每类课程的推荐理由，保证要点齐全，语句通顺，没有基础语法错误即可完成写作，难度较低，日常积累常见的兴趣活动相关的英文表达就能轻松应对这类题型。
【难度系数】
0.8