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六、书面表达(20分)(真题·绍兴新昌)
61.读万卷书，行万里路。你班下周英语课将举行一次以“难忘的旅行”(An Unforgettable Trip)为题的演讲比赛。请根据以下思维导图中的信息写一篇演讲稿。
注意:(1)演讲稿必须包含以上所有要点,可适当增加细节;(2)文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息;(3)词数:60左右(开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数)。
Good morning, it's my great honour to stand here and make a speech about my unforgettable trip.
That's all. Thanks for listening.
61.读万卷书，行万里路。你班下周英语课将举行一次以“难忘的旅行”(An Unforgettable Trip)为题的演讲比赛。请根据以下思维导图中的信息写一篇演讲稿。
注意:(1)演讲稿必须包含以上所有要点,可适当增加细节;(2)文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息;(3)词数:60左右(开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数)。
Good morning, it's my great honour to stand here and make a speech about my unforgettable trip.
That's all. Thanks for listening.
答案
One possible version:
Good morning, it's my great honour to stand here and make a speech about my unforgettable trip. Last summer I went to Lijiang with my parents by train. The weather was fine, and we saw some farms and villages along the way.
Lijiang is a very beautiful city. We stayed there for two days. On the first day, we went sightseeing on a boat. The water was very clear, and there were a lot of oddly-shaped hills along the river. I felt like I was looking at a beautiful painting. On the next day, we walked around the Lijiang Gucheng. We bought some nice gifts and ate some delicious food. We really enjoyed ourselves during the trip.
That's all. Thanks for listening.
(100 words)
Good morning, it's my great honour to stand here and make a speech about my unforgettable trip. Last summer I went to Lijiang with my parents by train. The weather was fine, and we saw some farms and villages along the way.
Lijiang is a very beautiful city. We stayed there for two days. On the first day, we went sightseeing on a boat. The water was very clear, and there were a lot of oddly-shaped hills along the river. I felt like I was looking at a beautiful painting. On the next day, we walked around the Lijiang Gucheng. We bought some nice gifts and ate some delicious food. We really enjoyed ourselves during the trip.
That's all. Thanks for listening.
(100 words)
解析
【分析】
首先明确题目要求：需以“An Unforgettable Trip”为题写演讲稿，必须覆盖思维导图的6个核心要点（去的地点、同行人物、交通方式、天气、旅行活动、个人感受），开头结尾已给定，词数60左右，不得提及真实信息。解题思路：1. 确定旅行的具体信息，围绕6个要点展开；2. 选用一般过去时描述过去的旅行经历，符合语境；3. 将要点串联成连贯语句，适当添加细节让内容自然，同时控制词数；4. 检查是否遗漏要点、时态是否正确、有无真实信息。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 确定时态：描述已发生的旅行，统一使用一般过去时，动词变为过去式；
2. 梳理思维导图要点并填充内容：①Where：选择丽江（Lijiang）；②Who：和父母（my parents）；③How to get there：坐火车（by train）；④Weather：天气晴朗（fine）；⑤What to do：乘船观光、逛古城、买礼物、吃美食；⑥How to feel：玩得开心（enjoyed ourselves）；
3. 组织语言：将上述要点串联，添加合理细节（如沿途景色、河水清澈等），开头用给定内容，中间衔接要点，结尾用给定内容；
4. 检查：确保所有要点都包含，词数符合要求，无语法错误和真实信息。
【答案】
One possible version:
Good morning, it's my great honour to stand here and make a speech about my unforgettable trip. Last summer I went to Lijiang with my parents by train. The weather was fine, and we saw some farms and villages along the way.
Lijiang is a very beautiful city. We stayed there for two days. On the first day, we went sightseeing on a boat. The water was very clear, and there were a lot of oddly-shaped hills along the river. I felt like I was looking at a beautiful painting. On the next day, we walked around the Lijiang Gucheng. We bought some nice gifts and ate some delicious food. We really enjoyed ourselves during the trip.
That's all. Thanks for listening.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、一般过去时、要点整合写作
【点评】
本题结合思维导图的信息点考查英语书面表达，要求学生整合给定信息，用一般过去时描述个人旅行经历，既考查基础语法运用，又考查语言组织能力，是初中英语常见的写作题型，符合考试要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
首先明确题目要求：需以“An Unforgettable Trip”为题写演讲稿，必须覆盖思维导图的6个核心要点（去的地点、同行人物、交通方式、天气、旅行活动、个人感受），开头结尾已给定，词数60左右，不得提及真实信息。解题思路：1. 确定旅行的具体信息，围绕6个要点展开；2. 选用一般过去时描述过去的旅行经历，符合语境；3. 将要点串联成连贯语句，适当添加细节让内容自然，同时控制词数；4. 检查是否遗漏要点、时态是否正确、有无真实信息。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 确定时态：描述已发生的旅行，统一使用一般过去时，动词变为过去式；
2. 梳理思维导图要点并填充内容：①Where：选择丽江（Lijiang）；②Who：和父母（my parents）；③How to get there：坐火车（by train）；④Weather：天气晴朗（fine）；⑤What to do：乘船观光、逛古城、买礼物、吃美食；⑥How to feel：玩得开心（enjoyed ourselves）；
3. 组织语言：将上述要点串联，添加合理细节（如沿途景色、河水清澈等），开头用给定内容，中间衔接要点，结尾用给定内容；
4. 检查：确保所有要点都包含，词数符合要求，无语法错误和真实信息。
【答案】
One possible version:
Good morning, it's my great honour to stand here and make a speech about my unforgettable trip. Last summer I went to Lijiang with my parents by train. The weather was fine, and we saw some farms and villages along the way.
Lijiang is a very beautiful city. We stayed there for two days. On the first day, we went sightseeing on a boat. The water was very clear, and there were a lot of oddly-shaped hills along the river. I felt like I was looking at a beautiful painting. On the next day, we walked around the Lijiang Gucheng. We bought some nice gifts and ate some delicious food. We really enjoyed ourselves during the trip.
That's all. Thanks for listening.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、一般过去时、要点整合写作
【点评】
本题结合思维导图的信息点考查英语书面表达，要求学生整合给定信息，用一般过去时描述个人旅行经历，既考查基础语法运用，又考查语言组织能力，是初中英语常见的写作题型，符合考试要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
