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十三、短文写作。
寒假马上要来了,我们该怎样过好寒假呢? 根据图表提供的信息并适当发挥,写一封倡议书,不少于8句。
Dear students,
Winter holiday is coming. How can we spend it well? Here is some advice for you.
First, we should keep safe. We should .
We should not
Second, we should have good habits.
Third, we can spend some time on our hobbies.
Let's have a safe and happy winter holiday!
寒假马上要来了,我们该怎样过好寒假呢? 根据图表提供的信息并适当发挥,写一封倡议书,不少于8句。
Dear students,
Winter holiday is coming. How can we spend it well? Here is some advice for you.
First, we should keep safe. We should .
We should not
Second, we should have good habits.
Third, we can spend some time on our hobbies.
Let's have a safe and happy winter holiday!
答案
示例：Dear students,
Winter holiday is coming. How can we spend it well? Here is some advice for you.
First, we should keep safe. We should follow the traffic rules on the road. We should not play with fire. We should not swim or climb trees in the park.
Second, we should have good habits. We should get up early and go to bed early every day. We should have a healthy diet. We should also make a plan and use our time wisely.
Third, we can spend some time on our hobbies. We can play ping-pong with our friends. It can make us strong and happy. We can also read some interesting books. We can learn a lot from books.
Let's have a safe and happy winter holiday!
Winter holiday is coming. How can we spend it well? Here is some advice for you.
First, we should keep safe. We should follow the traffic rules on the road. We should not play with fire. We should not swim or climb trees in the park.
Second, we should have good habits. We should get up early and go to bed early every day. We should have a healthy diet. We should also make a plan and use our time wisely.
Third, we can spend some time on our hobbies. We can play ping-pong with our friends. It can make us strong and happy. We can also read some interesting books. We can learn a lot from books.
Let's have a safe and happy winter holiday!
解析
【分析】本题要求写一封关于寒假安排的倡议书，需围绕图表给出的三个核心方向（注意安全、养成好习惯、发展爱好）展开，结合图表中的具体建议并适当拓展，满足不少于8句的要求。写作时要遵循倡议书的格式，分点阐述，语言需通顺自然，符合英语表达习惯，确保内容贴合寒假生活实际。
【解析】首先开头点明主题，引出寒假建议；接着分三部分：第一部分讲安全，结合图表的遵守交通规则、不玩火，补充合理的安全注意事项（如不在公园私自游泳、不爬危险的树）；第二部分讲好习惯，结合图表的早起、健康饮食，补充早睡、合理规划时间等内容；第三部分讲爱好，结合打乒乓球、读书，补充爱好带来的益处；最后结尾发出呼吁，总结寒假的美好祝愿。
【答案】Dear students,
Winter holiday is coming. How can we spend it well? Here is some advice for you.
First, we should keep safe. We should follow the traffic rules on the road. We should not play with fire. We should not swim or climb trees in the park.
Second, we should have good habits. We should get up early and go to bed early every day. We should have a healthy diet. We should also make a plan and use our time wisely.
Third, we can spend some time on our hobbies. We can play ping-pong with our friends. It can make us strong and happy. We can also read some interesting books. We can learn a lot from books.
Let's have a safe and happy winter holiday!
【知识点】英语倡议书写作；寒假话题表达；英语句子组织
【点评】该倡议书结构清晰，紧扣图表信息，内容具体充实，语言通顺流畅，符合初中英语写作的要求，既覆盖了图表的核心要点，又适当拓展了合理内容，很好地完成了写作任务。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】首先开头点明主题，引出寒假建议；接着分三部分：第一部分讲安全，结合图表的遵守交通规则、不玩火，补充合理的安全注意事项（如不在公园私自游泳、不爬危险的树）；第二部分讲好习惯，结合图表的早起、健康饮食，补充早睡、合理规划时间等内容；第三部分讲爱好，结合打乒乓球、读书，补充爱好带来的益处；最后结尾发出呼吁，总结寒假的美好祝愿。
【答案】Dear students,
Winter holiday is coming. How can we spend it well? Here is some advice for you.
First, we should keep safe. We should follow the traffic rules on the road. We should not play with fire. We should not swim or climb trees in the park.
Second, we should have good habits. We should get up early and go to bed early every day. We should have a healthy diet. We should also make a plan and use our time wisely.
Third, we can spend some time on our hobbies. We can play ping-pong with our friends. It can make us strong and happy. We can also read some interesting books. We can learn a lot from books.
Let's have a safe and happy winter holiday!
【知识点】英语倡议书写作；寒假话题表达；英语句子组织
【点评】该倡议书结构清晰，紧扣图表信息，内容具体充实，语言通顺流畅，符合初中英语写作的要求，既覆盖了图表的核心要点，又适当拓展了合理内容，很好地完成了写作任务。
【难度系数】0.5
