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阳光中学最近开展了一系列“安全教育”主题的班会，假如你是八年级（1）班的班长基蒂，请你写一篇发言稿，给出你的建议。下方问题为写作要点：
1. What should we do when an earthquake happens?
2. Why do we need to follow traffic rules?
注意：1. 发言稿应包含上述要点，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯；
3. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello, dear classmates!
As we all know, safety comes first. Safety education has become very important for middle school students.
阳光中学最近开展了一系列“安全教育”主题的班会，假如你是八年级（1）班的班长基蒂，请你写一篇发言稿，给出你的建议。下方问题为写作要点：
1. What should we do when an earthquake happens?
2. Why do we need to follow traffic rules?
注意：1. 发言稿应包含上述要点，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯；
3. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello, dear classmates!
As we all know, safety comes first. Safety education has become very important for middle school students.
答案
Sample writing:
Hello, dear classmates!
As we all know, safety comes first. Safety education has become very important for middle school students. Safety is important in our lives. Here are some tips we can keep in mind.
When an earthquake happens, stay calm. Hide under a strong desk or table. Don’t run around.
Traffic rules keep us safe on the road. If we don’t follow them, we may get hurt.
Always use the crosswalk and look both ways before crossing a road. Don’t look at your mobile phone while walking on the road.
What’s more, when there is a fire, use the stairs instead of the elevator. Cover your nose and mouth with a wet cloth.
That’s all for my talk. Hope all of us can stay safe! Thank you!
Hello, dear classmates!
As we all know, safety comes first. Safety education has become very important for middle school students. Safety is important in our lives. Here are some tips we can keep in mind.
When an earthquake happens, stay calm. Hide under a strong desk or table. Don’t run around.
Traffic rules keep us safe on the road. If we don’t follow them, we may get hurt.
Always use the crosswalk and look both ways before crossing a road. Don’t look at your mobile phone while walking on the road.
What’s more, when there is a fire, use the stairs instead of the elevator. Cover your nose and mouth with a wet cloth.
That’s all for my talk. Hope all of us can stay safe! Thank you!
解析
【分析】本题是初中英语书面表达题，要求以八年级（1）班班长基蒂的身份写一篇安全教育主题的发言稿，需涵盖两个核心要点：地震发生时的应对方法、遵守交通规则的原因，同时要求语句通顺、意思连贯，词数约80词（开头不计入）。解题思路：先承接给定开头引出安全建议，再分点落实两个核心要点（地震时保持冷静、躲在坚固家具下、勿乱跑；交通规则保障安全，不遵守易受伤，补充过马路的注意事项），适当补充其他安全小提示，最后收尾致谢，确保符合发言稿的语气和要求。
【解析】写作步骤：1. 承接给定开头，引出安全建议：“Safety is important in our lives. Here are some tips we can keep in mind.”；2. 阐述地震应对：当地震发生时保持冷静，躲在坚固的桌子或椅子下，不要乱跑；3. 说明遵守交通规则的原因：交通规则能保障道路安全，若不遵守可能受伤，补充过马路要走斑马线、左右看、走路时不看手机；4. 适当补充火灾应对小细节（如走楼梯不用电梯，用湿毛巾捂住口鼻）；5. 收尾致谢，完成发言稿，确保语句连贯，词数符合要求。
【答案】Hello, dear classmates!
As we all know, safety comes first. Safety education has become very important for middle school students. Safety is important in our lives. Here are some tips we can keep in mind.
When an earthquake happens, stay calm. Hide under a strong desk or table. Don’t run around.
Traffic rules keep us safe on the road. If we don’t follow them, we may get hurt.
Always use the crosswalk and look both ways before crossing a road. Don’t look at your mobile phone while walking on the road.
What’s more, when there is a fire, use the stairs instead of the elevator. Cover your nose and mouth with a wet cloth.
That’s all for my talk. Hope all of us can stay safe! Thank you!
【知识点】英语应用文写作、安全教育主题英语表达、初中英语书面表达
【点评】本题结合安全教育主题考查初中英语应用文写作能力，要求紧扣要点、适当发挥，既检验学生的语言组织与运用能力，又渗透安全意识，是初中英语常见的写作题型，难度适中。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作步骤：1. 承接给定开头，引出安全建议：“Safety is important in our lives. Here are some tips we can keep in mind.”；2. 阐述地震应对：当地震发生时保持冷静，躲在坚固的桌子或椅子下，不要乱跑；3. 说明遵守交通规则的原因：交通规则能保障道路安全，若不遵守可能受伤，补充过马路要走斑马线、左右看、走路时不看手机；4. 适当补充火灾应对小细节（如走楼梯不用电梯，用湿毛巾捂住口鼻）；5. 收尾致谢，完成发言稿，确保语句连贯，词数符合要求。
【答案】Hello, dear classmates!
As we all know, safety comes first. Safety education has become very important for middle school students. Safety is important in our lives. Here are some tips we can keep in mind.
When an earthquake happens, stay calm. Hide under a strong desk or table. Don’t run around.
Traffic rules keep us safe on the road. If we don’t follow them, we may get hurt.
Always use the crosswalk and look both ways before crossing a road. Don’t look at your mobile phone while walking on the road.
What’s more, when there is a fire, use the stairs instead of the elevator. Cover your nose and mouth with a wet cloth.
That’s all for my talk. Hope all of us can stay safe! Thank you!
【知识点】英语应用文写作、安全教育主题英语表达、初中英语书面表达
【点评】本题结合安全教育主题考查初中英语应用文写作能力，要求紧扣要点、适当发挥，既检验学生的语言组织与运用能力，又渗透安全意识，是初中英语常见的写作题型，难度适中。
【难度系数】0.5
