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五、书面表达
在成长道路上，我们总会遇见许多给予我们温暖、指引与力量的人。他们或许是名人榜样，如科学家、运动员；或是身边至亲好友，像父母、同窗挚友。请以“The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most”为题，结合自身经历与要点提示，写一篇 100 词左右的短文。
要点提示:1. Who has influenced you the most?
2. What are his/her qualities?
3. How did he/she influence you?
4. What changes has he/she brought to you?
The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most
在成长道路上，我们总会遇见许多给予我们温暖、指引与力量的人。他们或许是名人榜样，如科学家、运动员；或是身边至亲好友，像父母、同窗挚友。请以“The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most”为题，结合自身经历与要点提示，写一篇 100 词左右的短文。
要点提示:1. Who has influenced you the most?
2. What are his/her qualities?
3. How did he/she influence you?
4. What changes has he/she brought to you?
The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most
答案
The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most
Among all the people I have met, my mother is the person who has influenced me most.
She is kind, hard-working and always full of courage. No matter how tough life is, she never gives up easily. She is also patient enough to listen to my problems and always encourages me to move forward.
When I was under a lot of stress and even wanted to drop out of school because of bad grades, she cheered me up and told me that success never came easy. She spent plenty of time helping me with my lessons.
With her help, I became more confident and braver. I no longer fear difficulties and keep working hard all the time. I truly thank her for all she has done for me.
Among all the people I have met, my mother is the person who has influenced me most.
She is kind, hard-working and always full of courage. No matter how tough life is, she never gives up easily. She is also patient enough to listen to my problems and always encourages me to move forward.
When I was under a lot of stress and even wanted to drop out of school because of bad grades, she cheered me up and told me that success never came easy. She spent plenty of time helping me with my lessons.
With her help, I became more confident and braver. I no longer fear difficulties and keep working hard all the time. I truly thank her for all she has done for me.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，要求围绕“对自己影响最大的人”展开，需紧扣四个要点写作。解题思路：1. 确定贴近生活的写作对象（如妈妈），便于结合自身经历；2. 明确人物的核心品质，通过具体事例体现；3. 结合自身经历展现人物的影响；4. 阐述人物带来的改变，确保内容连贯、词数符合要求。
【解析】
写作时按以下步骤进行：①开篇点题，直接点明最影响自己的人是妈妈；②介绍妈妈的品质，通过“自己因成绩差想辍学，妈妈鼓励并花时间辅导”的具体事例，展现妈妈的耐心、坚强等品质；③说明妈妈带来的改变（变得自信勇敢，不怕困难）；④结尾表达对妈妈的感谢，结构清晰，紧扣所有要点，语言流畅自然。
【答案】
The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most
Among all the people I have met, my mother is the person who has influenced me most.
She is kind, hard-working and always full of courage. No matter how tough life is, she never gives up easily. She is also patient enough to listen to my problems and always encourages me to move forward.
When I was under a lot of stress and even wanted to drop out of school because of bad grades, she cheered me up and told me that success never came easy. She spent plenty of time helping me with my lessons.
With her help, I became more confident and braver. I no longer fear difficulties and keep working hard all the time. I truly thank her for all she has done for me.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、人物描写、要点式写作
【点评】
该作文紧扣题目要求，围绕四个要点展开，有具体事例支撑，情感真挚，语言流畅，符合初中英语书面表达的规范，清晰展现了人物对自己的积极影响。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语书面表达题，要求围绕“对自己影响最大的人”展开，需紧扣四个要点写作。解题思路：1. 确定贴近生活的写作对象（如妈妈），便于结合自身经历；2. 明确人物的核心品质，通过具体事例体现；3. 结合自身经历展现人物的影响；4. 阐述人物带来的改变，确保内容连贯、词数符合要求。
【解析】
写作时按以下步骤进行：①开篇点题，直接点明最影响自己的人是妈妈；②介绍妈妈的品质，通过“自己因成绩差想辍学，妈妈鼓励并花时间辅导”的具体事例，展现妈妈的耐心、坚强等品质；③说明妈妈带来的改变（变得自信勇敢，不怕困难）；④结尾表达对妈妈的感谢，结构清晰，紧扣所有要点，语言流畅自然。
【答案】
The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most
Among all the people I have met, my mother is the person who has influenced me most.
She is kind, hard-working and always full of courage. No matter how tough life is, she never gives up easily. She is also patient enough to listen to my problems and always encourages me to move forward.
When I was under a lot of stress and even wanted to drop out of school because of bad grades, she cheered me up and told me that success never came easy. She spent plenty of time helping me with my lessons.
With her help, I became more confident and braver. I no longer fear difficulties and keep working hard all the time. I truly thank her for all she has done for me.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、人物描写、要点式写作
【点评】
该作文紧扣题目要求，围绕四个要点展开，有具体事例支撑，情感真挚，语言流畅，符合初中英语书面表达的规范，清晰展现了人物对自己的积极影响。
【难度系数】
0.6
