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四、书面表达。（共60分）
Writing 1
自从进入九年级以来，不少同学遇到了令人困惑与烦恼的麻烦事。面对这些麻烦事，聪明的你是怎么解决的呢？请以“That day, I solved a trouble”为题写一篇英语短文，向你校英文专刊投稿。
The following questions are for your reference(参考)：
What trouble did you meet with?
How did you solve the trouble?
What did you learn from this experience?
注意:1. 内容涵盖所有要点,可适当发挥；
2. 词数100左右(已给出的开头不计入总词数)；
3. 文中不得提及有关个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
That day, I solved a trouble
Since I became a Grade 9 student, I have had a colourful school life. However, I still meet with some troubles. One day,
Writing 1
自从进入九年级以来，不少同学遇到了令人困惑与烦恼的麻烦事。面对这些麻烦事，聪明的你是怎么解决的呢？请以“That day, I solved a trouble”为题写一篇英语短文，向你校英文专刊投稿。
The following questions are for your reference(参考)：
What trouble did you meet with?
How did you solve the trouble?
What did you learn from this experience?
注意:1. 内容涵盖所有要点,可适当发挥；
2. 词数100左右(已给出的开头不计入总词数)；
3. 文中不得提及有关个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
That day, I solved a trouble
Since I became a Grade 9 student, I have had a colourful school life. However, I still meet with some troubles. One day,
it was my grandma's eightieth birthday. It was really a meaningful day for my family. Since my parents were occupied with the decoration of the house, they asked me to order a cake. However, I was so careless that I left the matter behind my mind when my friends invited me to play basketball that day. I felt sorry for that, but I didn't lose myself in self-blame. I made a handmade cake with cookies and colourful candies. Grandma was very happy when she saw the special cake.
In our daily lives, there are occasions when we are faced with something unpleasant. And self-blame, which is always the first choice of some people, is really of little use in solving the problems. When terrible things happen, what we should do is not to find fault with others, but to think about ways to solve them.
答案
Writing 1
One possible version:
That day, I solved a trouble
Since I became a Grade 9 student, I have had a colourful school life. However, I still meet with some troubles. One day, it was my grandma's eightieth birthday. It was really a meaningful day for my family. Since my parents were occupied with the decoration of the house, they asked me to order a cake. However, I was so careless that I left the matter behind my mind when my friends invited me to play basketball that day. I felt sorry for that, but I didn't lose myself in self-blame. I made a handmade cake with cookies and colourful candies. Grandma was very happy when she saw the special cake.
In our daily lives, there are occasions when we are faced with something unpleasant. And self-blame, which is always the first choice of some people, is really of little use in solving the problems. When terrible things happen, what we should do is not to find fault with others, but to think about ways to solve them.
One possible version:
That day, I solved a trouble
Since I became a Grade 9 student, I have had a colourful school life. However, I still meet with some troubles. One day, it was my grandma's eightieth birthday. It was really a meaningful day for my family. Since my parents were occupied with the decoration of the house, they asked me to order a cake. However, I was so careless that I left the matter behind my mind when my friends invited me to play basketball that day. I felt sorry for that, but I didn't lose myself in self-blame. I made a handmade cake with cookies and colourful candies. Grandma was very happy when she saw the special cake.
In our daily lives, there are occasions when we are faced with something unpleasant. And self-blame, which is always the first choice of some people, is really of little use in solving the problems. When terrible things happen, what we should do is not to find fault with others, but to think about ways to solve them.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语话题书面表达题，需围绕题目“That day, I solved a trouble”及三个参考问题（遇到的麻烦、解决方法、收获）完成短文。首先要承接已给开头，明确交代遇到的具体麻烦，接着说明解决该麻烦的具体做法，最后点明从该经历中获得的感悟；写作时需注意词数要求（100左右），不得提及个人身份信息，内容需完整涵盖所有要点，可适当合理发挥。
【解析】
首先承接开头，先叙述遇到的麻烦：奶奶八十大寿时，父母让“我”订蛋糕，但“我”因和朋友打球分心忘记了；接着写解决办法：“我”未陷入自责，而是用饼干和糖果制作了手工蛋糕；最后点明感悟：遇到麻烦时自责无用，应积极想办法解决问题。写作时需注意语言通顺，符合英语表达习惯，控制词数，不涉及个人隐私信息。
【答案】
That day, I solved a trouble
Since I became a Grade 9 student, I have had a colourful school life. However, I still meet with some troubles. One day, it was my grandma's eightieth birthday. It was really a meaningful day for my family. Since my parents were occupied with the decoration of the house, they asked me to order a cake. However, I was so careless that I left the matter behind my mind when my friends invited me to play basketball that day. I felt sorry for that, but I didn't lose myself in self-blame. I made a handmade cake with cookies and colourful candies. Grandma was very happy when she saw the special cake.
In our daily lives, there are occasions when we are faced with something unpleasant. And self-blame, which is always the first choice of some people, is really of little use in solving the problems. When terrible things happen, what we should do is not to find fault with others, but to think about ways to solve them.
【知识点】
英语话题作文，记叙文写作
【点评】
本题考查学生围绕指定话题完成英语短文写作的能力，要求学生清晰表达事件经过与感悟，注重内容完整性、语言规范性及要点覆盖，符合九年级英语写作的考查要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语话题书面表达题，需围绕题目“That day, I solved a trouble”及三个参考问题（遇到的麻烦、解决方法、收获）完成短文。首先要承接已给开头，明确交代遇到的具体麻烦，接着说明解决该麻烦的具体做法，最后点明从该经历中获得的感悟；写作时需注意词数要求（100左右），不得提及个人身份信息，内容需完整涵盖所有要点，可适当合理发挥。
【解析】
首先承接开头，先叙述遇到的麻烦：奶奶八十大寿时，父母让“我”订蛋糕，但“我”因和朋友打球分心忘记了；接着写解决办法：“我”未陷入自责，而是用饼干和糖果制作了手工蛋糕；最后点明感悟：遇到麻烦时自责无用，应积极想办法解决问题。写作时需注意语言通顺，符合英语表达习惯，控制词数，不涉及个人隐私信息。
【答案】
That day, I solved a trouble
Since I became a Grade 9 student, I have had a colourful school life. However, I still meet with some troubles. One day, it was my grandma's eightieth birthday. It was really a meaningful day for my family. Since my parents were occupied with the decoration of the house, they asked me to order a cake. However, I was so careless that I left the matter behind my mind when my friends invited me to play basketball that day. I felt sorry for that, but I didn't lose myself in self-blame. I made a handmade cake with cookies and colourful candies. Grandma was very happy when she saw the special cake.
In our daily lives, there are occasions when we are faced with something unpleasant. And self-blame, which is always the first choice of some people, is really of little use in solving the problems. When terrible things happen, what we should do is not to find fault with others, but to think about ways to solve them.
【知识点】
英语话题作文，记叙文写作
【点评】
本题考查学生围绕指定话题完成英语短文写作的能力，要求学生清晰表达事件经过与感悟，注重内容完整性、语言规范性及要点覆盖，符合九年级英语写作的考查要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
