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九、书面表达(满分16分)
假如你是李明,刚收到来自笔友Andy的电子邮件,请认真阅读下面的邮件,并根据邮件内容写一封回信。
注意事项:1. 词数100左右;2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;3. 文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
Dear Andy,
I am glad to hear from you.
Yours truly,
Li Ming
假如你是李明,刚收到来自笔友Andy的电子邮件,请认真阅读下面的邮件,并根据邮件内容写一封回信。
注意事项:1. 词数100左右;2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;3. 文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
Dear Andy,
I am glad to hear from you.
Read 10,000 books and travel 10,000 miles. I like this saying very much. I have a habit of reading books. I often read books in libraries or bookshops at weekends. I like history books best, because they can bring me back to the past and help me experience different cultures in different times.
I also like travelling because it is helpful to my reading. Travelling is another way to learn about the world. Last summer holiday, I visited the Palace Museum in Beijing. It was amazing to see so many wonderful buildings. I learnt a lot about the history of the Ming and Qing Dynasties. It has opened up a whole new world to me.
I hope you can come to China some day. I am looking forward to showing you around my hometown.
I also like travelling because it is helpful to my reading. Travelling is another way to learn about the world. Last summer holiday, I visited the Palace Museum in Beijing. It was amazing to see so many wonderful buildings. I learnt a lot about the history of the Ming and Qing Dynasties. It has opened up a whole new world to me.
I hope you can come to China some day. I am looking forward to showing you around my hometown.
Yours truly,
Li Ming
答案
One possible version:
Dear Andy,
I am glad to hear from you.
Read 10,000 books and travel 10,000 miles. I like this saying very much. I have a habit of reading books. I often read books in libraries or bookshops at weekends. I like history books best, because they can bring me back to the past and help me experience different cultures in different times.
I also like travelling because it is helpful to my reading. Travelling is another way to learn about the world. Last summer holiday, I visited the Palace Museum in Beijing. It was amazing to see so many wonderful buildings. I learnt a lot about the history of the Ming and Qing Dynasties. It has opened up a whole new world to me.
I hope you can come to China some day. I am looking forward to showing you around my hometown.
Yours truly,
Li Ming
思路引导 [总体分析]
①体裁:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件。②时态:以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。③提示:需根据邮件内容逐一回答Andy的问题,包括阅读习惯、喜欢的书籍类型、旅行对阅读的帮助以及相关经历分享。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表达收到邮件的喜悦;第二步,描述阅读习惯(时间、地点)、喜欢的书籍类型及原因、旅行与阅读的关系以及分享一次具体经历与收获;第三步,表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①help sb do sth帮助某人做某事 ②learn about了解 ③open up打开,开启
[高分句型]
I like history books best, because they can bring me back to the past and help me experience different cultures in different times. (because引导原因状语从句)
Dear Andy,
I am glad to hear from you.
Read 10,000 books and travel 10,000 miles. I like this saying very much. I have a habit of reading books. I often read books in libraries or bookshops at weekends. I like history books best, because they can bring me back to the past and help me experience different cultures in different times.
I also like travelling because it is helpful to my reading. Travelling is another way to learn about the world. Last summer holiday, I visited the Palace Museum in Beijing. It was amazing to see so many wonderful buildings. I learnt a lot about the history of the Ming and Qing Dynasties. It has opened up a whole new world to me.
I hope you can come to China some day. I am looking forward to showing you around my hometown.
Yours truly,
Li Ming
思路引导 [总体分析]
①体裁:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件。②时态:以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。③提示:需根据邮件内容逐一回答Andy的问题,包括阅读习惯、喜欢的书籍类型、旅行对阅读的帮助以及相关经历分享。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表达收到邮件的喜悦;第二步,描述阅读习惯(时间、地点)、喜欢的书籍类型及原因、旅行与阅读的关系以及分享一次具体经历与收获;第三步,表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①help sb do sth帮助某人做某事 ②learn about了解 ③open up打开,开启
[高分句型]
I like history books best, because they can bring me back to the past and help me experience different cultures in different times. (because引导原因状语从句)
解析
【分析】
本题是英语书面表达中的电子邮件回信写作题，解题思路如下：首先，明确需回应笔友Andy邮件中的所有问题，包括阅读的时间地点、喜欢的书籍类型及原因、旅行对阅读的帮助、相关经历与收获；其次，按照“表达喜悦→回应核心观点→逐一解答问题→发出邀请”的结构组织内容；最后，注意时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，词数控制在100左右，避免真实信息，适当发挥使语句连贯。
【解析】
按照写作步骤完成：
1. 开头：表达收到邮件的喜悦，回应“读万卷书行万里路”的说法；
2. 主体：①说明阅读习惯：常在周末在图书馆或书店读书；②说明喜欢历史书的原因：能回到过去，体验不同时代的文化；③阐述旅行对阅读的帮助：旅行是了解世界的另一种方式；④分享经历：去年暑假参观故宫，了解明清历史，收获颇丰；
3. 结尾：邀请Andy来中国，期待带他参观。
【答案】
Dear Andy,
I am glad to hear from you.
Read 10,000 books and travel 10,000 miles. I like this saying very much. I have a habit of reading books. I often read books in libraries or bookshops at weekends. I like history books best, because they can bring me back to the past and help me experience different cultures in different times.
I also like travelling because it is helpful to my reading. Travelling is another way to learn about the world. Last summer holiday, I visited the Palace Museum in Beijing. It was amazing to see so many wonderful buildings. I learnt a lot about the history of the Ming and Qing Dynasties. It has opened up a whole new world to me.
I hope you can come to China some day. I am looking forward to showing you around my hometown.
Yours truly,
Li Ming
【知识点】
英语书面表达、电子邮件写作
【点评】
本题考查应用文写作能力，要求考生根据给定邮件内容逐一回应问题，覆盖所有要点，适当发挥，注重语句连贯性与准确性，是初中英语常见题型，能有效考查学生的语言运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题是英语书面表达中的电子邮件回信写作题，解题思路如下：首先，明确需回应笔友Andy邮件中的所有问题，包括阅读的时间地点、喜欢的书籍类型及原因、旅行对阅读的帮助、相关经历与收获；其次，按照“表达喜悦→回应核心观点→逐一解答问题→发出邀请”的结构组织内容；最后，注意时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，词数控制在100左右，避免真实信息，适当发挥使语句连贯。
【解析】
按照写作步骤完成：
1. 开头：表达收到邮件的喜悦，回应“读万卷书行万里路”的说法；
2. 主体：①说明阅读习惯：常在周末在图书馆或书店读书；②说明喜欢历史书的原因：能回到过去，体验不同时代的文化；③阐述旅行对阅读的帮助：旅行是了解世界的另一种方式；④分享经历：去年暑假参观故宫，了解明清历史，收获颇丰；
3. 结尾：邀请Andy来中国，期待带他参观。
【答案】
Dear Andy,
I am glad to hear from you.
Read 10,000 books and travel 10,000 miles. I like this saying very much. I have a habit of reading books. I often read books in libraries or bookshops at weekends. I like history books best, because they can bring me back to the past and help me experience different cultures in different times.
I also like travelling because it is helpful to my reading. Travelling is another way to learn about the world. Last summer holiday, I visited the Palace Museum in Beijing. It was amazing to see so many wonderful buildings. I learnt a lot about the history of the Ming and Qing Dynasties. It has opened up a whole new world to me.
I hope you can come to China some day. I am looking forward to showing you around my hometown.
Yours truly,
Li Ming
【知识点】
英语书面表达、电子邮件写作
【点评】
本题考查应用文写作能力，要求考生根据给定邮件内容逐一回应问题，覆盖所有要点，适当发挥，注重语句连贯性与准确性，是初中英语常见题型，能有效考查学生的语言运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
