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【实战演练】
在生活中，你或许有过帮助陌生人的经历——可能是帮迷路的小朋友找家长，可能是帮路人捡起散落的物品，也可能是在雨天分享雨伞。请你以“The Time I Helped a Stranger”为题，写一篇短文，分享这次经历。
内容：(1)你帮助的陌生人是谁，当时发生了什么；(2)你具体做了什么来帮助对方；(3)帮助后你和对方的感受，以及这次经历让你明白的道理。
要求：(1)包括提示信息，可适当发挥；(2)文中不得出现真实姓名，校名等信息；(3)80－120词。
【写作提示】
在生活中，你或许有过帮助陌生人的经历——可能是帮迷路的小朋友找家长，可能是帮路人捡起散落的物品，也可能是在雨天分享雨伞。请你以“The Time I Helped a Stranger”为题，写一篇短文，分享这次经历。
内容：(1)你帮助的陌生人是谁，当时发生了什么；(2)你具体做了什么来帮助对方；(3)帮助后你和对方的感受，以及这次经历让你明白的道理。
要求：(1)包括提示信息，可适当发挥；(2)文中不得出现真实姓名，校名等信息；(3)80－120词。
【写作提示】
答案
【实战演练】
One possible version:
The Time I Helped a Stranger
Last Saturday afternoon, I was walking to the supermarket when I saw an old man dropping his apples on the ground. The apples rolled everywhere, and he hurried to pick them up but couldn't catch all.
I ran to help him. I picked up the apples one by one and put them back in his bag. He told me he was going to visit his grandson and was worried about being late. I helped him carry the bag to the nearby bus stop and waited with him until his bus came.
The old man smiled and said, "You're a kind child, thank you!" I felt happy too. This experience made me know that showing kindness to strangers is easy. A small help can make others feel warm, and that's how we make the world nicer.
One possible version:
The Time I Helped a Stranger
Last Saturday afternoon, I was walking to the supermarket when I saw an old man dropping his apples on the ground. The apples rolled everywhere, and he hurried to pick them up but couldn't catch all.
I ran to help him. I picked up the apples one by one and put them back in his bag. He told me he was going to visit his grandson and was worried about being late. I helped him carry the bag to the nearby bus stop and waited with him until his bus came.
The old man smiled and said, "You're a kind child, thank you!" I felt happy too. This experience made me know that showing kindness to strangers is easy. A small help can make others feel warm, and that's how we make the world nicer.
解析
【分析】首先明确写作主题为“帮助陌生人”，需围绕题目要求的三个核心内容展开：1. 点明帮助的陌生人及当时的场景；2. 描述具体帮助的动作；3. 写出帮助后的感受及感悟。写作时要注意用动作、细节体现过程，结尾紧扣“善意、影响”的主题，符合词数要求，不出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
【解析】第一步：开头设置场景，引出帮助陌生人的契机（如看到老人掉落苹果）；第二步：描述帮助的具体动作，比如捡拾苹果、送老人到公交站，加入对话体现细节；第三步：写出双方的感受，以及感悟到的道理，紧扣善意主题，控制词数在80-120之间，避免真实信息。
【答案】One possible version:
The Time I Helped a Stranger
Last Saturday afternoon, I was walking to the supermarket when I saw an old man dropping his apples on the ground. The apples rolled everywhere, and he hurried to pick them up but couldn't catch all.
I ran to help him. I picked up the apples one by one and put them back in his bag. He told me he was going to visit his grandson and was worried about being late. I helped him carry the bag to the nearby bus stop and waited with him until his bus came.
The old man smiled and said, "You're a kind child, thank you!" I felt happy too. This experience made me know that showing kindness to strangers is easy. A small help can make others feel warm, and that's how we make the world nicer.
【知识点】英语记叙文写作；话题作文；英语表达运用
【点评】这篇范文严格遵循题目要求，结构清晰，开头场景自然，中间用具体动作和对话体现帮助过程，结尾紧扣“善意、影响”的主题，词数符合要求，语言简洁流畅，很好地完成了写作任务。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】第一步：开头设置场景，引出帮助陌生人的契机（如看到老人掉落苹果）；第二步：描述帮助的具体动作，比如捡拾苹果、送老人到公交站，加入对话体现细节；第三步：写出双方的感受，以及感悟到的道理，紧扣善意主题，控制词数在80-120之间，避免真实信息。
【答案】One possible version:
The Time I Helped a Stranger
Last Saturday afternoon, I was walking to the supermarket when I saw an old man dropping his apples on the ground. The apples rolled everywhere, and he hurried to pick them up but couldn't catch all.
I ran to help him. I picked up the apples one by one and put them back in his bag. He told me he was going to visit his grandson and was worried about being late. I helped him carry the bag to the nearby bus stop and waited with him until his bus came.
The old man smiled and said, "You're a kind child, thank you!" I felt happy too. This experience made me know that showing kindness to strangers is easy. A small help can make others feel warm, and that's how we make the world nicer.
【知识点】英语记叙文写作；话题作文；英语表达运用
【点评】这篇范文严格遵循题目要求，结构清晰，开头场景自然，中间用具体动作和对话体现帮助过程，结尾紧扣“善意、影响”的主题，词数符合要求，语言简洁流畅，很好地完成了写作任务。
【难度系数】0.6
