话题写作训练
请结合下面的思维导图,以“My Family”为题,从家庭关系、外貌、爱好、性格四个方面,介绍你的家庭成员。70词左右。

My Family
请结合下面的思维导图,以“My Family”为题,从家庭关系、外貌、爱好、性格四个方面,介绍你的家庭成员。70词左右。
My Family
答案
One possible version:
My Family
Hello, I'm Bob. Here is a photo of my family. There are only three people in my family. My father is tall and handsome. He is busy at work, but he always spends time playing ping-pong with me. My mother is a music teacher. She is kind to her students, and they all like her. The boy with short hair is me. I love reading books with my parents in our free time. We really love each other.
My Family
Hello, I'm Bob. Here is a photo of my family. There are only three people in my family. My father is tall and handsome. He is busy at work, but he always spends time playing ping-pong with me. My mother is a music teacher. She is kind to her students, and they all like her. The boy with short hair is me. I love reading books with my parents in our free time. We really love each other.
解析
【分析】
这是一道英语话题写作题,要求以“My Family”为题,结合思维导图的四个维度(家庭关系、外貌、爱好、性格)介绍家庭成员,词数约70。解题思路:首先确定要介绍的家庭成员(如父母和自己,对应思维导图的关系类词汇);其次从思维导图中选取合适词汇描述外貌(如tall、handsome)、爱好(如play ping-pong、read books)、性格(如kind);最后组织通顺的语句,开头引出家庭,分别介绍成员特点,结尾表达家庭的爱,控制词数符合要求。
【解析】
写作步骤如下:1. 开头:打招呼并引出家庭介绍,如“Hello, I'm Bob. Here is a photo of my family.”;2. 介绍父亲:点明关系(father),描述外貌(tall and handsome),说明爱好(play ping-pong with me);3. 介绍母亲:点明关系(mother),描述性格(kind),补充职业(music teacher);4. 介绍自己:点明关系(myself),说明爱好(read books);5. 结尾表达家庭的爱,确保语句通顺,词数约70。
【答案】
One possible version:
My Family
Hello, I'm Bob. Here is a photo of my family. There are only three people in my family. My father is tall and handsome. He is busy at work, but he always spends time playing ping-pong with me. My mother is a music teacher. She is kind to her students, and they all like her. The boy with short hair is me. I love reading books with my parents in our free time. We really love each other.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、家庭词汇运用
【点评】
本题结合思维导图考查学生的英语书面表达能力,要求学生能运用指定词汇描述家庭成员特征,结构清晰,符合初中英语写作的基础考查要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
这是一道英语话题写作题,要求以“My Family”为题,结合思维导图的四个维度(家庭关系、外貌、爱好、性格)介绍家庭成员,词数约70。解题思路:首先确定要介绍的家庭成员(如父母和自己,对应思维导图的关系类词汇);其次从思维导图中选取合适词汇描述外貌(如tall、handsome)、爱好(如play ping-pong、read books)、性格(如kind);最后组织通顺的语句,开头引出家庭,分别介绍成员特点,结尾表达家庭的爱,控制词数符合要求。
【解析】
写作步骤如下:1. 开头:打招呼并引出家庭介绍,如“Hello, I'm Bob. Here is a photo of my family.”;2. 介绍父亲:点明关系(father),描述外貌(tall and handsome),说明爱好(play ping-pong with me);3. 介绍母亲:点明关系(mother),描述性格(kind),补充职业(music teacher);4. 介绍自己:点明关系(myself),说明爱好(read books);5. 结尾表达家庭的爱,确保语句通顺,词数约70。
【答案】
One possible version:
My Family
Hello, I'm Bob. Here is a photo of my family. There are only three people in my family. My father is tall and handsome. He is busy at work, but he always spends time playing ping-pong with me. My mother is a music teacher. She is kind to her students, and they all like her. The boy with short hair is me. I love reading books with my parents in our free time. We really love each other.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、家庭词汇运用
【点评】
本题结合思维导图考查学生的英语书面表达能力,要求学生能运用指定词汇描述家庭成员特征,结构清晰,符合初中英语写作的基础考查要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
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