Ⅴ. Think and write.(写作。)
春节是中国人最喜爱的传统节日之一。请结合下面的思维导图,以“My last Spring Festival”为题写一篇作文,和大家分享一下你的春节活动和感受。

My last Spring Festival
春节是中国人最喜爱的传统节日之一。请结合下面的思维导图,以“My last Spring Festival”为题写一篇作文,和大家分享一下你的春节活动和感受。
My last Spring Festival
答案
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My last Spring Festival
I had a great Spring Festival last year.
Before the Spring Festival, my family and I were very busy. We went shopping to buy new clothes and delicious food. We also cleaned the house. On New Year's Eve, we had a big family dinner. After dinner, we watched TV together. We talked and laughed happily. Over the Spring Festival, I wore my new clothes and said "Happy Chinese New Year!" to my family. Everyone looked happy.
I love the Spring Festival very much!
My last Spring Festival
I had a great Spring Festival last year.
Before the Spring Festival, my family and I were very busy. We went shopping to buy new clothes and delicious food. We also cleaned the house. On New Year's Eve, we had a big family dinner. After dinner, we watched TV together. We talked and laughed happily. Over the Spring Festival, I wore my new clothes and said "Happy Chinese New Year!" to my family. Everyone looked happy.
I love the Spring Festival very much!
解析
【分析】这是一篇以“My last Spring Festival”为题的英语记叙文,要求结合思维导图的三个时间节点(春节前、除夕夜、春节期间)的活动完成写作,还需表达个人感受。解题思路:1. 确定时态为一般过去时(描述过去的春节);2. 围绕思维导图的分支,对应每个时间点的活动,补充合理细节让内容更丰富;3. 开头引出主题,结尾表达对春节的喜爱,使文章结构完整、逻辑清晰。
【解析】写作步骤:1. 开头点明主题,说明去年春节的整体感受;2. 写春节前的活动:去购物(买新衣服和美食)、打扫房屋;3. 写除夕夜的活动:吃团圆饭、一起看电视,补充聊天说笑的细节;4. 写春节期间的活动:穿新衣服、对家人说节日祝福;5. 结尾表达对春节的喜爱。注意使用一般过去时,语句通顺,符合节日话题的表达习惯。
【答案】My last Spring Festival
I had a great Spring Festival last year.
Before the Spring Festival, my family and I were very busy. We went shopping to buy new clothes and delicious food. We also cleaned the house. On New Year's Eve, we had a big family dinner. After dinner, we watched TV together. We talked and laughed happily. Over the Spring Festival, I wore my new clothes and said "Happy Chinese New Year!" to my family. Everyone looked happy.
I love the Spring Festival very much!
【知识点】英语节日写作;一般过去时;常用短语运用
【点评】本题借助思维导图降低写作难度,考查学生梳理节日活动的能力,既涉及节日话题的词汇与表达,又锻炼记叙文写作能力,是小学英语常见的写作题型。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作步骤:1. 开头点明主题,说明去年春节的整体感受;2. 写春节前的活动:去购物(买新衣服和美食)、打扫房屋;3. 写除夕夜的活动:吃团圆饭、一起看电视,补充聊天说笑的细节;4. 写春节期间的活动:穿新衣服、对家人说节日祝福;5. 结尾表达对春节的喜爱。注意使用一般过去时,语句通顺,符合节日话题的表达习惯。
【答案】My last Spring Festival
I had a great Spring Festival last year.
Before the Spring Festival, my family and I were very busy. We went shopping to buy new clothes and delicious food. We also cleaned the house. On New Year's Eve, we had a big family dinner. After dinner, we watched TV together. We talked and laughed happily. Over the Spring Festival, I wore my new clothes and said "Happy Chinese New Year!" to my family. Everyone looked happy.
I love the Spring Festival very much!
【知识点】英语节日写作;一般过去时;常用短语运用
【点评】本题借助思维导图降低写作难度,考查学生梳理节日活动的能力,既涉及节日话题的词汇与表达,又锻炼记叙文写作能力,是小学英语常见的写作题型。
【难度系数】0.5
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