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六、书面表达(本题有1小题;共计20分)
61. 为全面增进健康,初中生每天要至少锻炼1个小时。那么,你是如何锻炼身体的呢?请你根据以下提示,写一篇英语短文为校英文报"健康与体育"栏目投稿。
提示:
1. How do you keep fit?
2. What do you think of playing sports?
3. How often do you play sports?
4. What will you do to improve your health?
要求:
(1)包含提示内容,可适当发挥,以使行文连贯;
(2)语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
(3)60词左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
As we all know, health is the greatest wealth for everyone.
61. 为全面增进健康,初中生每天要至少锻炼1个小时。那么,你是如何锻炼身体的呢?请你根据以下提示,写一篇英语短文为校英文报"健康与体育"栏目投稿。
提示:
1. How do you keep fit?
2. What do you think of playing sports?
3. How often do you play sports?
4. What will you do to improve your health?
要求:
(1)包含提示内容,可适当发挥,以使行文连贯;
(2)语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
(3)60词左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
As we all know, health is the greatest wealth for everyone.
答案
One possible version:
As we all know, health is the greatest wealth for everyone. I usually keep fit through healthy outdoor exercise.
I think playing sports is a meaningful activity. It helps us keep fit, learn to work with others and better understand others. I run with my father every morning in the park. When I run, I feel like a bird flying through the air. I play basketball with my classmates once a week. In my opinion, everyone should learn to play it. It is really enjoyable and relaxing.
In the near future, I think it's necessary for me to learn the long jump. That's because we will have a long jump test in Grade 9. All in all, only by keeping fit can we study better and live a happier life.
As we all know, health is the greatest wealth for everyone. I usually keep fit through healthy outdoor exercise.
I think playing sports is a meaningful activity. It helps us keep fit, learn to work with others and better understand others. I run with my father every morning in the park. When I run, I feel like a bird flying through the air. I play basketball with my classmates once a week. In my opinion, everyone should learn to play it. It is really enjoyable and relaxing.
In the near future, I think it's necessary for me to learn the long jump. That's because we will have a long jump test in Grade 9. All in all, only by keeping fit can we study better and live a happier life.
解析
【分析】
本题要求写一篇关于锻炼的英语短文，需覆盖4个提示点，开头已给出。解题思路：1. 承接开头，点明自身锻炼方式；2. 表达对运动的看法，结合具体运动说明频率；3. 说明未来提升健康的计划；4. 收尾呼应主题，确保内容连贯、符合词数要求。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 承接给定开头，说明自己通过户外锻炼保持健康；2. 阐述对运动的积极评价，结合日常运动（跑步、篮球）说明频率；3. 说明未来计划学长跳以提升健康；4. 结尾升华，呼应健康对学习生活的重要性，确保内容完整、语法正确。
【答案】
One possible version:
As we all know, health is the greatest wealth for everyone. I usually keep fit through healthy outdoor exercise.
I think playing sports is a meaningful activity. It helps us keep fit, learn to work with others and better understand others. I run with my father every morning in the park. When I run, I feel like a bird flying through the air. I play basketball with my classmates once a week. In my opinion, everyone should learn to play it. It is really enjoyable and relaxing.
In the near future, I think it's necessary for me to learn the long jump. That's because we will have a long jump test in Grade 9. All in all, only by keeping fit can we study better and live a happier life.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、健康话题英语写作、频率表达
【点评】
范文紧扣题目所有要求，内容充实，结合个人实际情况，观点积极向上，语言流畅，语法正确，很好地完成了校报投稿任务，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求写一篇关于锻炼的英语短文，需覆盖4个提示点，开头已给出。解题思路：1. 承接开头，点明自身锻炼方式；2. 表达对运动的看法，结合具体运动说明频率；3. 说明未来提升健康的计划；4. 收尾呼应主题，确保内容连贯、符合词数要求。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 承接给定开头，说明自己通过户外锻炼保持健康；2. 阐述对运动的积极评价，结合日常运动（跑步、篮球）说明频率；3. 说明未来计划学长跳以提升健康；4. 结尾升华，呼应健康对学习生活的重要性，确保内容完整、语法正确。
【答案】
One possible version:
As we all know, health is the greatest wealth for everyone. I usually keep fit through healthy outdoor exercise.
I think playing sports is a meaningful activity. It helps us keep fit, learn to work with others and better understand others. I run with my father every morning in the park. When I run, I feel like a bird flying through the air. I play basketball with my classmates once a week. In my opinion, everyone should learn to play it. It is really enjoyable and relaxing.
In the near future, I think it's necessary for me to learn the long jump. That's because we will have a long jump test in Grade 9. All in all, only by keeping fit can we study better and live a happier life.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、健康话题英语写作、频率表达
【点评】
范文紧扣题目所有要求，内容充实，结合个人实际情况，观点积极向上，语言流畅，语法正确，很好地完成了校报投稿任务，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
