八、书面表达(计30分)
A. 根据中文意思,翻译下列句子,词数不限。(共5小题;每小题2分,计10分)
91.一个好的阅读习惯能帮助我们开辟一个全新的世界。
92.我弟弟太小,不能清楚地表达自己。
93.近来,你是否已经意识到学好英语的重要性?
94.应当采取措施阻止人们浪费资源。
95.我做作业很细心,以免犯同样的错误。
A. 根据中文意思,翻译下列句子,词数不限。(共5小题;每小题2分,计10分)
91.一个好的阅读习惯能帮助我们开辟一个全新的世界。
A good reading habit can help us open up a whole new world./A good reading habit can help open up a whole new world to us.
92.我弟弟太小,不能清楚地表达自己。
My brother is too young to express himself clearly./My brother is so young that he can't express himself clearly./My brother isn't old enough to express himself clearly.
93.近来,你是否已经意识到学好英语的重要性?
Have you realized the importance of learning English well recently?
94.应当采取措施阻止人们浪费资源。
Something should/must be done to prevent/stop/keep people from wasting resources.或Action(s) should/must be taken to prevent/stop/keep people from wasting resources.
95.我做作业很细心,以免犯同样的错误。
I do homework very carefully in order to/to avoid making the same mistake(s).或I do homework very carefully in order not to make the same mistake(s).
答案
A. 91. A good reading habit can help us open up a whole
new world./A good reading habit can help open up a
whole new world to us.
92. My brother is too young to express himself clearly./My
brother is so young that he can't express himself clearly./
My brother isn't old enough to express himself clearly.
93. Have you realized the importance of learning English well
recently?
94. Something should/must be done to prevent/stop/keep
people from wasting resources.或Action(s) should/must
be taken to prevent/stop/keep people from wasting
resources.
95. I do homework very carefully in order to/to avoid making
the same mistake(s).或I do homework very carefully in
order not to make the same mistake(s).
new world./A good reading habit can help open up a
whole new world to us.
92. My brother is too young to express himself clearly./My
brother is so young that he can't express himself clearly./
My brother isn't old enough to express himself clearly.
93. Have you realized the importance of learning English well
recently?
94. Something should/must be done to prevent/stop/keep
people from wasting resources.或Action(s) should/must
be taken to prevent/stop/keep people from wasting
resources.
95. I do homework very carefully in order to/to avoid making
the same mistake(s).或I do homework very carefully in
order not to make the same mistake(s).
解析
【分析】
翻译此类句子时,需先明确句子核心成分(主语、谓语、宾语等),再结合中文含义匹配对应的英语词汇、固定搭配及句式:1. 第91题需掌握“帮助某人做某事”“开辟”的固定表达;2. 第92题“太…不能”有三种常用句式(too…to/so…that/not…enough to);3. 第93题“近来”提示用现在完成时,需掌握“…的重要性”的表达;4. 第94题需运用被动语态翻译“应当采取措施”;5. 第95题需掌握“以免”的目的状语表达。
【解析】
91. 主语“一个好的阅读习惯”译为A good reading habit,“帮助我们开辟”对应help us open up,“一个全新的世界”是a whole new world,组合得:A good reading habit can help us open up a whole new world.
92. “我弟弟”译为My brother,“太小不能清楚表达自己”可选用三种常用句式:too young to express himself clearly / so young that he can't express himself clearly / not old enough to express himself clearly,任选其一即可。
93. “近来”(recently)提示用现在完成时,“意识到”是realize,“学好英语的重要性”是the importance of learning English well,组合得:Have you realized the importance of learning English well recently?
94. “应当采取措施”用被动语态,“采取措施”可译为Something should be done / Actions should be taken,“阻止人们浪费资源”是prevent people from wasting resources,组合得:Something should be done to prevent people from wasting resources.
95. “我做作业很细心”译为I do homework very carefully,“以免犯同样的错误”用in order to avoid making the same mistake / in order not to make the same mistake,组合得:I do homework very carefully in order to avoid making the same mistake.
【答案】
91. A good reading habit can help us open up a whole new world./A good reading habit can help open up a whole new world to us.
92. My brother is too young to express himself clearly./My brother is so young that he can't express himself clearly./My brother isn't old enough to express himself clearly.
93. Have you realized the importance of learning English well recently?
94. Something should/must be done to prevent/stop/keep people from wasting resources.或Action(s) should/must be taken to prevent/stop/keep people from wasting resources.
95. I do homework very carefully in order to/to avoid making the same mistake(s).或I do homework very carefully in order not to make the same mistake(s).
【知识点】
汉译英、常用句型、被动语态
【点评】
本题为英语基础汉译英题型,考察学生对常用词汇、固定搭配、时态及被动语态的掌握,属于英语学习的基础应用,需学生牢记核心表达与句式结构。
【难度系数】
0.6
翻译此类句子时,需先明确句子核心成分(主语、谓语、宾语等),再结合中文含义匹配对应的英语词汇、固定搭配及句式:1. 第91题需掌握“帮助某人做某事”“开辟”的固定表达;2. 第92题“太…不能”有三种常用句式(too…to/so…that/not…enough to);3. 第93题“近来”提示用现在完成时,需掌握“…的重要性”的表达;4. 第94题需运用被动语态翻译“应当采取措施”;5. 第95题需掌握“以免”的目的状语表达。
【解析】
91. 主语“一个好的阅读习惯”译为A good reading habit,“帮助我们开辟”对应help us open up,“一个全新的世界”是a whole new world,组合得:A good reading habit can help us open up a whole new world.
92. “我弟弟”译为My brother,“太小不能清楚表达自己”可选用三种常用句式:too young to express himself clearly / so young that he can't express himself clearly / not old enough to express himself clearly,任选其一即可。
93. “近来”(recently)提示用现在完成时,“意识到”是realize,“学好英语的重要性”是the importance of learning English well,组合得:Have you realized the importance of learning English well recently?
94. “应当采取措施”用被动语态,“采取措施”可译为Something should be done / Actions should be taken,“阻止人们浪费资源”是prevent people from wasting resources,组合得:Something should be done to prevent people from wasting resources.
95. “我做作业很细心”译为I do homework very carefully,“以免犯同样的错误”用in order to avoid making the same mistake / in order not to make the same mistake,组合得:I do homework very carefully in order to avoid making the same mistake.
【答案】
91. A good reading habit can help us open up a whole new world./A good reading habit can help open up a whole new world to us.
92. My brother is too young to express himself clearly./My brother is so young that he can't express himself clearly./My brother isn't old enough to express himself clearly.
93. Have you realized the importance of learning English well recently?
94. Something should/must be done to prevent/stop/keep people from wasting resources.或Action(s) should/must be taken to prevent/stop/keep people from wasting resources.
95. I do homework very carefully in order to/to avoid making the same mistake(s).或I do homework very carefully in order not to make the same mistake(s).
【知识点】
汉译英、常用句型、被动语态
【点评】
本题为英语基础汉译英题型,考察学生对常用词汇、固定搭配、时态及被动语态的掌握,属于英语学习的基础应用,需学生牢记核心表达与句式结构。
【难度系数】
0.6
B. 写作(计20分)
96.你校英语文化节正在开展“爱心传递,从我做起”的主题演讲活动。假如你是Simon,请你以“Giving a Helping Hand”为题,根据提示写一篇英语演讲稿。提示问题:
(1)Why do you give a helping hand to others?
(2)What do you usually do when someone needs help?
(3)How do you feel?
要求:(1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;(2)必须包括提示中的所有信息,并按要求适当发挥;(3)词数100左右;(4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Giving a Helping Hand
Good afternoon, everybody!
I'm Simon from Class 1, Grade 8. We are talking about what we can do to give a helping hand to others in trouble. I'm glad to share something with you.
That's all. Thank you for listening!
96.你校英语文化节正在开展“爱心传递,从我做起”的主题演讲活动。假如你是Simon,请你以“Giving a Helping Hand”为题,根据提示写一篇英语演讲稿。提示问题:
(1)Why do you give a helping hand to others?
(2)What do you usually do when someone needs help?
(3)How do you feel?
要求:(1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;(2)必须包括提示中的所有信息,并按要求适当发挥;(3)词数100左右;(4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Giving a Helping Hand
Good afternoon, everybody!
I'm Simon from Class 1, Grade 8. We are talking about what we can do to give a helping hand to others in trouble. I'm glad to share something with you.
I believe in giving a helping hand to others because it not only makes their lives easier but also brings joy to my own. When I see someone in need, I feel a strong urge to assist them.
For instance, I often help the elderly cross the street and carry their shopping bags to ensure they reach their destination safely. Additionally, I regularly tutor my classmates in subjects they find challenging, which reinforces my understanding of the material as well.
These actions make me feel fulfilled and content, knowing that I've made a positive impact on someone's day.
That's all. Thank you for listening!
答案
B. 96. One possible version:
Giving a Helping Hand
Good afternoon, everybody!
I'm Simon from Class 1, Grade 8. We are talking about
what we can do to give a helping hand to others in trouble.
I'm glad to share something with you.
I believe in giving a helping hand to others because it not
only makes their lives easier but also brings joy to my own.
When I see someone in need, I feel a strong urge to assist
them.
For instance, I often help the elderly cross the street and
carry their shopping bags to ensure they reach their destination
safely. Additionally, I regularly tutor my classmates in
subjects they find challenging, which reinforces my
understanding of the material as well.
→which引导的非限制性定语从句
These actions make me feel fulfilled and content,
knowing that I've made a positive impact on someone's day.
That's all. Thank you for listening!
思路引导 [总体分析]
①体裁:本文是一篇应用文,为演讲稿。②时态:以一般现在时为主。③提示:写作要点已给出,应注意不要遗漏信息提示,适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,写出帮助别人的原因;第二步,写出帮助别人的措施;第三步,写出帮助别人的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①make their lives easier让他们的生活更简单 ②bring joy to my own把快乐带给我自己 ③feel a strong urge to assist them有一种强烈的冲动去帮助他们 ④for instance例如 ⑤make a positive impact on对……产生积极的影响
[高分句型]
I believe in giving a helping hand to others because it not
only makes their lives easier but also brings joy to my own.
(not only... but also...结构)
Giving a Helping Hand
Good afternoon, everybody!
I'm Simon from Class 1, Grade 8. We are talking about
what we can do to give a helping hand to others in trouble.
I'm glad to share something with you.
I believe in giving a helping hand to others because it not
only makes their lives easier but also brings joy to my own.
When I see someone in need, I feel a strong urge to assist
them.
For instance, I often help the elderly cross the street and
carry their shopping bags to ensure they reach their destination
safely. Additionally, I regularly tutor my classmates in
subjects they find challenging, which reinforces my
understanding of the material as well.
→which引导的非限制性定语从句
These actions make me feel fulfilled and content,
knowing that I've made a positive impact on someone's day.
That's all. Thank you for listening!
思路引导 [总体分析]
①体裁:本文是一篇应用文,为演讲稿。②时态:以一般现在时为主。③提示:写作要点已给出,应注意不要遗漏信息提示,适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,写出帮助别人的原因;第二步,写出帮助别人的措施;第三步,写出帮助别人的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①make their lives easier让他们的生活更简单 ②bring joy to my own把快乐带给我自己 ③feel a strong urge to assist them有一种强烈的冲动去帮助他们 ④for instance例如 ⑤make a positive impact on对……产生积极的影响
[高分句型]
I believe in giving a helping hand to others because it not
only makes their lives easier but also brings joy to my own.
(not only... but also...结构)
解析
【分析】
这是一篇英语演讲稿写作题,主题为“Giving a Helping Hand”,需围绕三个提示问题展开:帮助他人的原因、具体做法、帮助后的感受。写作时要注意:1. 体裁为应用文(演讲稿),格式需符合要求;2. 时态以一般现在时为主;3. 必须覆盖所有提示要点,适当添加细节使内容连贯;4. 词数控制在100左右,不得出现真实个人信息。
【解析】
写作步骤如下:
1. 承接给定开篇内容,点明帮助他人的原因:用“not only...but also...”结构说明帮助他人既让他人生活更便利,也给自己带来快乐;
2. 列举具体帮助他人的做法:用“for instance”举例,如帮助老人过马路、帮同学辅导功课,使内容具体;
3. 表达帮助后的感受:用“fulfilled”“content”等词说明自身的满足感,呼应主题;
4. 按演讲稿格式礼貌收尾,符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Giving a Helping Hand
Good afternoon, everybody!
I'm Simon from Class 1, Grade 8. We are talking about what we can do to give a helping hand to others in trouble. I'm glad to share something with you.
I believe in giving a helping hand to others because it not only makes their lives easier but also brings joy to my own. When I see someone in need, I feel a strong urge to assist them.
For instance, I often help the elderly cross the street and carry their shopping bags to ensure they reach their destination safely. Additionally, I regularly tutor my classmates in subjects they find challenging, which reinforces my understanding of the material as well.
These actions make me feel fulfilled and content, knowing that I've made a positive impact on someone's day.
That's all. Thank you for listening!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作;演讲稿写作;常用句型运用
【点评】
本文严格遵循演讲稿格式,覆盖所有提示要点,结构清晰、逻辑连贯;运用了“not only...but also...”“for instance”等亮点词汇和高分句型,语言表达准确自然,符合初中英语写作的高分要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一篇英语演讲稿写作题,主题为“Giving a Helping Hand”,需围绕三个提示问题展开:帮助他人的原因、具体做法、帮助后的感受。写作时要注意:1. 体裁为应用文(演讲稿),格式需符合要求;2. 时态以一般现在时为主;3. 必须覆盖所有提示要点,适当添加细节使内容连贯;4. 词数控制在100左右,不得出现真实个人信息。
【解析】
写作步骤如下:
1. 承接给定开篇内容,点明帮助他人的原因:用“not only...but also...”结构说明帮助他人既让他人生活更便利,也给自己带来快乐;
2. 列举具体帮助他人的做法:用“for instance”举例,如帮助老人过马路、帮同学辅导功课,使内容具体;
3. 表达帮助后的感受:用“fulfilled”“content”等词说明自身的满足感,呼应主题;
4. 按演讲稿格式礼貌收尾,符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Giving a Helping Hand
Good afternoon, everybody!
I'm Simon from Class 1, Grade 8. We are talking about what we can do to give a helping hand to others in trouble. I'm glad to share something with you.
I believe in giving a helping hand to others because it not only makes their lives easier but also brings joy to my own. When I see someone in need, I feel a strong urge to assist them.
For instance, I often help the elderly cross the street and carry their shopping bags to ensure they reach their destination safely. Additionally, I regularly tutor my classmates in subjects they find challenging, which reinforces my understanding of the material as well.
These actions make me feel fulfilled and content, knowing that I've made a positive impact on someone's day.
That's all. Thank you for listening!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作;演讲稿写作;常用句型运用
【点评】
本文严格遵循演讲稿格式,覆盖所有提示要点,结构清晰、逻辑连贯;运用了“not only...but also...”“for instance”等亮点词汇和高分句型,语言表达准确自然,符合初中英语写作的高分要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
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