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八、Writing. 根据要求进行书面表达。(共5分)
请根据所提供的信息,在个人成长纪念册中写一写自己在小学六年间的变化,内容必须包括外表、能力和爱好这三个方面的今昔对比,至少五句。开头和结尾已给出,不算在五句话以内。
| Time | Appearance(外表) | Ability(能力) | Hobby |
| ---- | ---- | ---- | ---- |
| Before | short |
couldn't... | didn't like... |
| Now | tall | can... | like... |
It's time to say goodbye to our school. Everyone has had many changes in the past six years. Me, too.
Before, I was short.
More changes, better me! Thank you, dear teachers! Thank you, my friends!
请根据所提供的信息,在个人成长纪念册中写一写自己在小学六年间的变化,内容必须包括外表、能力和爱好这三个方面的今昔对比,至少五句。开头和结尾已给出,不算在五句话以内。
| Time | Appearance(外表) | Ability(能力) | Hobby |
| ---- | ---- | ---- | ---- |
| Before | short |
couldn't... | didn't like... || Now | tall | can... | like... |
It's time to say goodbye to our school. Everyone has had many changes in the past six years. Me, too.
Before, I was short.
And my hair was short, too. But now I'm tall and my hair is long. I couldn't speak English well and I didn't like reading English books before. My friend helped me a lot with my English. Now I can speak English very well and I like reading all kinds of English books with my friend.
More changes, better me! Thank you, dear teachers! Thank you, my friends!
答案
One possible version:
It's time to say goodbye to our school. Everyone has had many changes in the past six years. Me, too.
Before, I was short. And my hair was short, too. But now I'm tall and my hair is long. I couldn't speak English well and I didn't like reading English books before. My friend helped me a lot with my English. Now I can speak English very well and I like reading all kinds of English books with my friend.
More changes, better me! Thank you, dear teachers! Thank you, my friends!
It's time to say goodbye to our school. Everyone has had many changes in the past six years. Me, too.
Before, I was short. And my hair was short, too. But now I'm tall and my hair is long. I couldn't speak English well and I didn't like reading English books before. My friend helped me a lot with my English. Now I can speak English very well and I like reading all kinds of English books with my friend.
More changes, better me! Thank you, dear teachers! Thank you, my friends!
解析
【分析】
本题为英语写作题，要求根据表格中“外表、能力、爱好”的今昔对比，结合给定开头和结尾，写小学六年的成长变化，至少五句。解题思路：1. 紧扣表格关键词，补充具体细节让内容完整；2. 区分时态：过去的情况用一般过去时，现在的情况用一般现在时；3. 连贯组织句子，确保满足句数要求。
【解析】
写作时，先承接已给的“Before, I was short.”，补充外表的今昔细节：“And my hair was short, too.”，接着写现在的外表：“But now I'm tall and my hair is long.”；再写能力变化：“I couldn't speak English well before. My friend helped me a lot with my English. Now I can speak English very well.”；最后写爱好变化：“I didn't like reading English books before. I like reading all kinds of English books with my friend.”，最后衔接已给结尾，确保内容连贯、时态正确。
【答案】
One possible version:
It's time to say goodbye to our school. Everyone has had many changes in the past six years. Me, too.
Before, I was short. And my hair was short, too. But now I'm tall and my hair is long. I couldn't speak English well and I didn't like reading English books before. My friend helped me a lot with my English. Now I can speak English very well and I like reading all kinds of English books with my friend.
More changes, better me! Thank you, dear teachers! Thank you, my friends!
【知识点】
英语写作、一般过去时、一般现在时
【点评】
本题围绕个人成长变化展开写作，要求结合给定信息补充细节，重点考查学生对一般过去时和一般现在时的运用能力，内容贴近学生实际生活，易于学生发挥，能有效考查学生的英语表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语写作题，要求根据表格中“外表、能力、爱好”的今昔对比，结合给定开头和结尾，写小学六年的成长变化，至少五句。解题思路：1. 紧扣表格关键词，补充具体细节让内容完整；2. 区分时态：过去的情况用一般过去时，现在的情况用一般现在时；3. 连贯组织句子，确保满足句数要求。
【解析】
写作时，先承接已给的“Before, I was short.”，补充外表的今昔细节：“And my hair was short, too.”，接着写现在的外表：“But now I'm tall and my hair is long.”；再写能力变化：“I couldn't speak English well before. My friend helped me a lot with my English. Now I can speak English very well.”；最后写爱好变化：“I didn't like reading English books before. I like reading all kinds of English books with my friend.”，最后衔接已给结尾，确保内容连贯、时态正确。
【答案】
One possible version:
It's time to say goodbye to our school. Everyone has had many changes in the past six years. Me, too.
Before, I was short. And my hair was short, too. But now I'm tall and my hair is long. I couldn't speak English well and I didn't like reading English books before. My friend helped me a lot with my English. Now I can speak English very well and I like reading all kinds of English books with my friend.
More changes, better me! Thank you, dear teachers! Thank you, my friends!
【知识点】
英语写作、一般过去时、一般现在时
【点评】
本题围绕个人成长变化展开写作，要求结合给定信息补充细节，重点考查学生对一般过去时和一般现在时的运用能力，内容贴近学生实际生活，易于学生发挥，能有效考查学生的英语表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
