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[2026江苏南通期末]假定你是李华，你校英文报正在举办“为你最喜爱的人设计一件神奇衣服”的征文活动。请你根据下列提示，以“My Magic ”为题，写一篇英语短文投稿。词数80左右。

注意事项：
（1）只能介绍一件神奇的衣服；
（2）必须包含内容要点，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
（4）请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
My Magic
I’m Li Hua from Grade 7. I designed a magic

【参考范文】
My Magic Windcheater
I'm Li Hua from Grade 7. I designed a magic windcheater for my father. Now, I want to share my design with you.
The windcheater is brown, a colour that makes my father look smart. And it's made of cotton, which feels smooth, so it is very comfortable to wear. Though it looks common, it has many special functions. In summer, when it's hot outside, the windcheater can make my dad cool. When winter comes, it keeps him warm. And when it rains, it can protect him from getting wet.
I think it isn't just a windcheater but a way to show my love.

【分析】
这是一道半命题英语写作题，要求以“My Magic ______”为题，为最喜爱的人设计一件神奇衣服投稿。解题思路：1. 补全题目，从提示的衣物类型中选择合适的词（如风衣windcheater）；2. 确定设计对象（如父亲），围绕提示的颜色、材质、功能等要点展开内容；3. 结合给定开头句子，组织语言，确保内容完整、行文连贯，词数符合要求，同时融入真情实感。
【解析】
首先补全题目为“My Magic Windcheater”；开头承接给定句子，说明设计对象是父亲；接着描述风衣的颜色（棕色）、材质（棉）及穿着感受；然后介绍其神奇功能：夏天降温、冬天保暖、雨天挡雨；最后升华主题，表达对父亲的爱。写作时注意使用基础词汇和简单从句，保证语句通顺，覆盖所有要求要点。
【答案】
My Magic Windcheater
I'm Li Hua from Grade 7. I designed a magic windcheater for my father. Now, I want to share my design with you.
The windcheater is brown, a colour that makes my father look smart. And it's made of cotton, which feels smooth, so it is very comfortable to wear. Though it looks common, it has many special functions. In summer, when it's hot outside, the windcheater can make my dad cool. When winter comes, it keeps him warm. And when it rains, it can protect him from getting wet.
I think it isn't just a windcheater but a way to show my love.
【知识点】
英语半命题作文；衣物类词汇；英语应用文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题，完整覆盖所有要求要点，语言通顺自然，情感表达真挚，符合七年级学生的写作水平，是一篇优秀的投稿作文。
【难度系数】
0.5