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一、话题词汇
1. 方便的
2. 满怀希望的
3. 随着……的发展
4. 鼓励某人做某事
1. 方便的
convenient
2. 满怀希望的
hopeful
3. 随着……的发展
with the development of
4. 鼓励某人做某事
encourage sb to do sth
答案
1. convenient
2. hopeful
3. with the development of
4. encourage sb to do sth
2. hopeful
3. with the development of
4. encourage sb to do sth
解析
【分析】本题为英语基础话题词汇的汉译英题型，需准确对应每个汉语表达的标准英语译法，结合日常积累的英语常用形容词及固定短语知识，逐一匹配正确表达即可。
【解析】1. “方便的”对应的英语常用形容词为convenient；2. “满怀希望的”对应的英语常用形容词为hopeful；3. “随着……的发展”对应的英语固定短语为with the development of；4. “鼓励某人做某事”对应的英语固定短语为encourage sb to do sth。
【答案】1. convenient
2. hopeful
3. with the development of
4. encourage sb to do sth
【知识点】英语常用词汇、英语固定搭配
【点评】本题考查英语基础话题词汇的标准译法，属于英语学习的核心基础内容，需熟练掌握常见形容词及固定短语的对应表达，为后续英语应用打下基础。
【难度系数】0.8
【解析】1. “方便的”对应的英语常用形容词为convenient；2. “满怀希望的”对应的英语常用形容词为hopeful；3. “随着……的发展”对应的英语固定短语为with the development of；4. “鼓励某人做某事”对应的英语固定短语为encourage sb to do sth。
【答案】1. convenient
2. hopeful
3. with the development of
4. encourage sb to do sth
【知识点】英语常用词汇、英语固定搭配
【点评】本题考查英语基础话题词汇的标准译法，属于英语学习的核心基础内容，需熟练掌握常见形容词及固定短语的对应表达，为后续英语应用打下基础。
【难度系数】0.8
二、佳句仿写
5. 【教材原句】 Thanks to the government's support, the roads in the village have improved a lot in recent years. (thanks to)
→仿写:多亏因特网,我们和世界连接了起来。
6. 【教材原句】 Today, however, many college students return and do all kinds of jobs. (however)
→仿写:然而,这些天,我们镇上正在发生一些不同寻常的事情。
5. 【教材原句】 Thanks to the government's support, the roads in the village have improved a lot in recent years. (thanks to)
→仿写:多亏因特网,我们和世界连接了起来。
Thanks to the internet, we are connected with the world.
6. 【教材原句】 Today, however, many college students return and do all kinds of jobs. (however)
→仿写:然而,这些天,我们镇上正在发生一些不同寻常的事情。
However, these days, something unusual is happening in our town.
答案
5. Thanks to the internet, we are connected with the world.
6. However, these days, something unusual is happening in our town.
6. However, these days, something unusual is happening in our town.
解析
【分析】
本题考查常用英语短语（thanks to、however）的运用及句子仿写能力。解题思路：第5题需用给定短语thanks to，遵循“Thanks to + 名词短语，主语 + 谓语 + 宾语”的结构，准确对应中文语义；第6题需用给定副词however，遵循“However + 时间状语，主语 + 谓语 + 地点状语”的结构，注意副词位置和句子语序。
【解析】
5. 对应中文“多亏因特网”用Thanks to the internet，“我们和世界连接了起来”用we are connected with the world，组合成完整句子。
6. 对应中文“然而”用However置于句首，“这些天”用these days，“我们镇上正在发生一些不同寻常的事情”用something unusual is happening in our town，组合成完整句子。
【答案】
5. Thanks to the internet, we are connected with the world.
6. However, these days, something unusual is happening in our town.
【知识点】
英语短语运用、句子仿写
【点评】
本题为基础仿写题，考查常用短语的用法及句子结构的掌握，需准确匹配短语语义和句子语序，难度较低，适合巩固英语基础表达。
【难度系数】
0.3
本题考查常用英语短语（thanks to、however）的运用及句子仿写能力。解题思路：第5题需用给定短语thanks to，遵循“Thanks to + 名词短语，主语 + 谓语 + 宾语”的结构，准确对应中文语义；第6题需用给定副词however，遵循“However + 时间状语，主语 + 谓语 + 地点状语”的结构，注意副词位置和句子语序。
【解析】
5. 对应中文“多亏因特网”用Thanks to the internet，“我们和世界连接了起来”用we are connected with the world，组合成完整句子。
6. 对应中文“然而”用However置于句首，“这些天”用these days，“我们镇上正在发生一些不同寻常的事情”用something unusual is happening in our town，组合成完整句子。
【答案】
5. Thanks to the internet, we are connected with the world.
6. However, these days, something unusual is happening in our town.
【知识点】
英语短语运用、句子仿写
【点评】
本题为基础仿写题，考查常用短语的用法及句子结构的掌握，需准确匹配短语语义和句子语序，难度较低，适合巩固英语基础表达。
【难度系数】
0.3
第3阶 高分范文赏析
[2025 江苏扬州期中]随着社会的发展,我们的生活变得越来越好。学校英语角本周的主题是“Changes Around Us”。请你根据下列提示,从以下四个角度对比过去和现在的变化,并谈一谈自己对这些变化的看法。
要求:(1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
(2)必须包括所有相关信息,并作适当发挥;
(3)词数 100 左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Changes Around Us
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around us.
◆ 第一步 审
体 裁:说明文
时 态:一般现在时、一般过去时及现在完成时
人 称:以第一人称和第三人称为主
内容要点:身边的变化,包括学习、环境、交通、旅游方面
写作结构:总—分—总
◆ 第二步 列
[2025 江苏扬州期中]随着社会的发展,我们的生活变得越来越好。学校英语角本周的主题是“Changes Around Us”。请你根据下列提示,从以下四个角度对比过去和现在的变化,并谈一谈自己对这些变化的看法。
要求:(1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
(2)必须包括所有相关信息,并作适当发挥;
(3)词数 100 左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Changes Around Us
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around us.
◆ 第一步 审
体 裁:说明文
时 态:一般现在时、一般过去时及现在完成时
人 称:以第一人称和第三人称为主
内容要点:身边的变化,包括学习、环境、交通、旅游方面
写作结构:总—分—总
◆ 第二步 列
答案
高分范文
Changes Around Us
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around us.
In the past, travelling abroad was nearly impossible for most people. Now, more people have chances to go abroad or travel online. Meanwhile, we used to ride bicycles or take slow buses, but today many people drive cars or take high - speed railways. At school, we do more reading, group work, and often share our ideas in class. In addition, we have become more aware of environmental protection by planting more trees and using less plastic.
In my opinion, these changes have made our lives more convenient and meaningful. I hope we can continue to develop our world in a greener and smarter way.
名师点评
① 衔接词使用合理，串联内容且使文章层次分明。Meanwhile（同时）、In addition（此外）等词汇有效避免了句子间的生硬堆砌，让段落内部逻辑更连贯。
② 描述过去与现在的对比时，used to与today搭配使用，清晰凸显时间维度上的变化。
③ 结尾总结升华，首尾呼应。最后一段既总结了变化带来的积极影响，又提出未来发展的期望，呼应了开头的“变化”，形成完整的“总—分—总”结构，让文章逻辑闭环。
整体而言，这篇作文在词汇、句型、结构、语法上均展现出扎实的基础，能清晰、准确地围绕“身边的变化”展开表达，是一篇主题明确、逻辑清晰的佳作。
Changes Around Us
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around us.
In the past, travelling abroad was nearly impossible for most people. Now, more people have chances to go abroad or travel online. Meanwhile, we used to ride bicycles or take slow buses, but today many people drive cars or take high - speed railways. At school, we do more reading, group work, and often share our ideas in class. In addition, we have become more aware of environmental protection by planting more trees and using less plastic.
In my opinion, these changes have made our lives more convenient and meaningful. I hope we can continue to develop our world in a greener and smarter way.
名师点评
① 衔接词使用合理，串联内容且使文章层次分明。Meanwhile（同时）、In addition（此外）等词汇有效避免了句子间的生硬堆砌，让段落内部逻辑更连贯。
② 描述过去与现在的对比时，used to与today搭配使用，清晰凸显时间维度上的变化。
③ 结尾总结升华，首尾呼应。最后一段既总结了变化带来的积极影响，又提出未来发展的期望，呼应了开头的“变化”，形成完整的“总—分—总”结构，让文章逻辑闭环。
整体而言，这篇作文在词汇、句型、结构、语法上均展现出扎实的基础，能清晰、准确地围绕“身边的变化”展开表达，是一篇主题明确、逻辑清晰的佳作。
解析
【分析】
首先审题，明确体裁为说明文，时态需结合一般过去时、一般现在时及现在完成时，人称以第一、第三人称为主；内容需覆盖旅游、交通、学习、环境四个角度的今昔对比，结构采用总-分-总；写作时需用衔接词串联内容，用used to等体现时间变化，最后加入个人看法，确保词数约100，表达连贯、语法正确。
【解析】
1. 开头：沿用题目给出的开头，总起点明过去几年周围发生了巨大变化；
2. 主体部分：分述四个角度的变化：①旅游：过去出国几乎不可能，现在更多人有出国或线上旅游的机会；②交通：过去常骑车或乘慢公交，现在多乘私家车或高铁；③学习：过去的学习方式，现在更多阅读、小组合作、课堂分享；④环境：过去环保意识弱，现在通过种树、少用塑料增强环保意识；使用Meanwhile、In addition等衔接词使内容连贯；
3. 结尾：总结变化带来的便利与意义，提出未来发展期望，呼应开头，形成完整的总-分-总结构，符合词数要求。
【答案】
高分范文
Changes Around Us
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around us.
In the past, travelling abroad was nearly impossible for most people. Now, more people have chances to go abroad or travel online. Meanwhile, we used to ride bicycles or take slow buses, but today many people drive cars or take high - speed railways. At school, we do more reading, group work, and often share our ideas in class. In addition, we have become more aware of environmental protection by planting more trees and using less plastic.
In my opinion, these changes have made our lives more convenient and meaningful. I hope we can continue to develop our world in a greener and smarter way.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、时态运用、衔接词使用
【点评】
这篇作文主题明确，围绕“身边的变化”展开，采用总-分-总结构，逻辑清晰；使用Meanwhile、In addition等衔接词串联内容，避免句子生硬堆砌，层次分明；通过used to与today的搭配清晰体现时间维度的变化；结尾总结升华，呼应开头，语法正确，是一篇符合要求的佳作。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先审题，明确体裁为说明文，时态需结合一般过去时、一般现在时及现在完成时，人称以第一、第三人称为主；内容需覆盖旅游、交通、学习、环境四个角度的今昔对比，结构采用总-分-总；写作时需用衔接词串联内容，用used to等体现时间变化，最后加入个人看法，确保词数约100，表达连贯、语法正确。
【解析】
1. 开头：沿用题目给出的开头，总起点明过去几年周围发生了巨大变化；
2. 主体部分：分述四个角度的变化：①旅游：过去出国几乎不可能，现在更多人有出国或线上旅游的机会；②交通：过去常骑车或乘慢公交，现在多乘私家车或高铁；③学习：过去的学习方式，现在更多阅读、小组合作、课堂分享；④环境：过去环保意识弱，现在通过种树、少用塑料增强环保意识；使用Meanwhile、In addition等衔接词使内容连贯；
3. 结尾：总结变化带来的便利与意义，提出未来发展期望，呼应开头，形成完整的总-分-总结构，符合词数要求。
【答案】
高分范文
Changes Around Us
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around us.
In the past, travelling abroad was nearly impossible for most people. Now, more people have chances to go abroad or travel online. Meanwhile, we used to ride bicycles or take slow buses, but today many people drive cars or take high - speed railways. At school, we do more reading, group work, and often share our ideas in class. In addition, we have become more aware of environmental protection by planting more trees and using less plastic.
In my opinion, these changes have made our lives more convenient and meaningful. I hope we can continue to develop our world in a greener and smarter way.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、时态运用、衔接词使用
【点评】
这篇作文主题明确，围绕“身边的变化”展开，采用总-分-总结构，逻辑清晰；使用Meanwhile、In addition等衔接词串联内容，避免句子生硬堆砌，层次分明；通过used to与today的搭配清晰体现时间维度的变化；结尾总结升华，呼应开头，语法正确，是一篇符合要求的佳作。
【难度系数】
0.6
