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[2025 山西太原质检]随着全球青少年之间的交流日益增加,一个主题为“I have changed a lot”的全球青少年交流沙龙即将在线上进行。你作为我国的青少年代表将进行发言。请你结合自己进入初中以来的变化,用英语写一篇发言稿。
内容包括:(1)the biggest change you've had
(2)your story about what made you change
(3)the things you've learnt from your story
要求:(1)词数不少于 80;
(2)文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。
内容包括:(1)the biggest change you've had
(2)your story about what made you change
(3)the things you've learnt from your story
要求:(1)词数不少于 80;
(2)文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。
Good morning, everyone!
I'm glad to share my story about changes. The biggest change I've had since entering junior high is becoming more confident. I used to be shy and afraid to speak in public. Once, my English teacher asked me to give a presentation. At first, I wanted to refuse, but she encouraged me, saying, "You can do it! Just try." I spent days preparing, practising in front of the mirror. When I stood on the stage, my hands were shaking but I took a deep breath and started. To my surprise, I finished successfully and even got applause.
From this experience, I learnt that confidence comes from trying. Don't be afraid of challenges. Take a step forward, and you'll find yourself growing.
Thank you!
答案
【参考范文】
Good morning, everyone!
I'm glad to share my story about changes. The biggest change I've had since entering junior high is becoming more confident. I used to be shy and afraid to speak in public. Once, my English teacher asked me to give a presentation. At first, I wanted to refuse, but she encouraged me, saying, "You can do it! Just try." I spent days preparing, practising in front of the mirror. When I stood on the stage, my hands were shaking but I took a deep breath and started. To my surprise, I finished successfully and even got applause.
From this experience, I learnt that confidence comes from trying. Don't be afraid of challenges. Take a step forward, and you'll find yourself growing.
Thank you!
Good morning, everyone!
I'm glad to share my story about changes. The biggest change I've had since entering junior high is becoming more confident. I used to be shy and afraid to speak in public. Once, my English teacher asked me to give a presentation. At first, I wanted to refuse, but she encouraged me, saying, "You can do it! Just try." I spent days preparing, practising in front of the mirror. When I stood on the stage, my hands were shaking but I took a deep breath and started. To my surprise, I finished successfully and even got applause.
From this experience, I learnt that confidence comes from trying. Don't be afraid of challenges. Take a step forward, and you'll find yourself growing.
Thank you!
解析
【分析】
本题为英语话题书面表达题，要求以发言稿形式围绕“进入初中后的变化”写作，需涵盖三个核心要点：最大的变化、促使变化的故事、从故事中获得的感悟。解题思路为：先确定具体可写的核心变化（如性格上的自信提升），再选取贴合初中生活的真实事例支撑变化，最后提炼事例带来的感悟；同时需注意发言稿的格式（问候、致谢）、词数要求及避免真实信息。
【解析】
1. 审题：明确文体为发言稿，主题是初中以来的变化，必须包含题目要求的三个内容，词数不少于80，不得出现真实人名、校名。
2. 构思：确定最大变化为“从害羞变得自信”，选取“英语老师鼓励自己完成演讲”的事例，感悟为“自信源于尝试，要勇于挑战”。
3. 写作：按照“问候→点明主题→阐述变化及事例→分享感悟→致谢”的结构展开，用具体细节（如准备演讲、上台紧张、获得掌声）丰富内容，确保语言通顺、要点齐全。
4. 检查：核对词数，删除可能涉及真实信息的内容，调整语句使符合发言稿的口语化表达。
【答案】
Good morning, everyone!
I'm glad to share my story about changes. The biggest change I've had since entering junior high is becoming more confident. I used to be shy and afraid to speak in public. Once, my English teacher asked me to give a presentation. At first, I wanted to refuse, but she encouraged me, saying, "You can do it! Just try." I spent days preparing, practising in front of the mirror. When I stood on the stage, my hands were shaking but I took a deep breath and started. To my surprise, I finished successfully and even got applause.
From this experience, I learnt that confidence comes from trying. Don't be afraid of challenges. Take a step forward, and you'll find yourself growing.
Thank you!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题作文、发言稿写作
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求，要点完整清晰，选取的事例贴合初中生活，细节生动具体，语言自然流畅，符合发言稿的交际格式，是一篇优秀的参考范文，能为学生提供明确的写作思路。
【难度系数】
0.3
本题为英语话题书面表达题，要求以发言稿形式围绕“进入初中后的变化”写作，需涵盖三个核心要点：最大的变化、促使变化的故事、从故事中获得的感悟。解题思路为：先确定具体可写的核心变化（如性格上的自信提升），再选取贴合初中生活的真实事例支撑变化，最后提炼事例带来的感悟；同时需注意发言稿的格式（问候、致谢）、词数要求及避免真实信息。
【解析】
1. 审题：明确文体为发言稿，主题是初中以来的变化，必须包含题目要求的三个内容，词数不少于80，不得出现真实人名、校名。
2. 构思：确定最大变化为“从害羞变得自信”，选取“英语老师鼓励自己完成演讲”的事例，感悟为“自信源于尝试，要勇于挑战”。
3. 写作：按照“问候→点明主题→阐述变化及事例→分享感悟→致谢”的结构展开，用具体细节（如准备演讲、上台紧张、获得掌声）丰富内容，确保语言通顺、要点齐全。
4. 检查：核对词数，删除可能涉及真实信息的内容，调整语句使符合发言稿的口语化表达。
【答案】
Good morning, everyone!
I'm glad to share my story about changes. The biggest change I've had since entering junior high is becoming more confident. I used to be shy and afraid to speak in public. Once, my English teacher asked me to give a presentation. At first, I wanted to refuse, but she encouraged me, saying, "You can do it! Just try." I spent days preparing, practising in front of the mirror. When I stood on the stage, my hands were shaking but I took a deep breath and started. To my surprise, I finished successfully and even got applause.
From this experience, I learnt that confidence comes from trying. Don't be afraid of challenges. Take a step forward, and you'll find yourself growing.
Thank you!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题作文、发言稿写作
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求，要点完整清晰，选取的事例贴合初中生活，细节生动具体，语言自然流畅，符合发言稿的交际格式，是一篇优秀的参考范文，能为学生提供明确的写作思路。
【难度系数】
0.3
