随着天宫空间站的建设,学校掀起了一阵航天热。假
审时态:以一般将来时为主
如你是李明,你班同学也在热议并遐想未来能进入空间站
旅行。你班将举办一次主题为"My Trip to the Tiangong
Space Station"的英语演讲比赛。请你根据右图提示,发挥
想象谈谈你的空间站之旅。→审主题
注意:1.短文须包含图中所有信息,可适当增加细节,以
使行文连贯;
2.不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名;
3.词数不少于80。→审词数
My Trip to the Tiangong Space Station
I dream of travelling to space. Now I've got a chance to make my dream come true.

写作支架

开头 引出空间站旅行这一话题
中间 描述空间站旅行的具体情况
结尾 总结全文,表达期待
Next month, I'm going to take a trip to . (高分句式1)
It will take by . It will be and .
When we arrive at , I will first . (高分句式2)
Then I'm going to and . It must be .
After that, I'm going to .
All in all, I'm sure that it will . (高分句式3) I can't wait!
教材原文
P76 When we arrive at the space station, I will first look out of the windows and enjoy the view of the Earth.
P69 I'm sure that it'll be a wonderful trip!
P69 I can't wait!
优秀范文
My Trip to the Tiangong Space Station
I dream of travelling to space. Now I've got a chance to make my dream come true.
Next month, I'm going to take a trip to the Tiangong Space Station with some of my classmates.①
It will take about 6 hours by rocket. It will be fast and exciting. When we arrive at the space station, I will first② look out of the windows and enjoy the beautiful view of the Earth. Then② I'm going to have dinner with the astronauts and try space food. It must be delicious. After that②, I'm going to visit the space station and take photos of the astronauts' daily life on the space station.
All in all③, I'm sure that it will be a wonderful trip!
I can't wait!
亮点评析
①开门见山,语言简洁明了,交代了即将到来的空间站之旅。
②first、Then、After that的使用使文章逻辑更加清晰。
③短语All in all的使用提升了文章的整体档次和专业性。

优秀范文
My Trip to the Tiangong Space Station
I dream of travelling to space. Now I've got a chance to make my dream come true.
Next month, I'm going to take a trip to the Tiangong Space Station with some of my classmates.①
It will take about 6 hours by rocket. It will be fast and exciting. When we arrive at the space station, I will first② look out of the windows and enjoy the beautiful view of the Earth. Then② I'm going to have dinner with the astronauts and try space food. It must be delicious. After that②, I'm going to visit the space station and take photos of the astronauts' daily life on the space station.
All in all③, I'm sure that it will be a wonderful trip!
I can't wait!
亮点评析
①开门见山,语言简洁明了,交代了即将到来的空间站之旅。
②first、Then、After that的使用使文章逻辑更加清晰。
③短语All in all的使用提升了文章的整体档次和专业性。

【分析】
首先明确题目要求：需完成主题为“My Trip to the Tiangong Space Station”的英语短文，以一般将来时为主，包含所有提示信息，结构分为开头引出话题、中间描述旅行过程、结尾总结期待，用逻辑连接词使行文连贯，词数不少于80。写作思路：1. 开头开门见山，引出即将到来的空间站之旅；2. 中间按时间顺序展开，用first、then、after that等连接词梳理逻辑，涵盖出发方式、时长、到达后的活动；3. 结尾总结旅行感受，表达期待。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开头：承接给定开头，补充“和同学一起去天宫空间站”，明确旅行主体；2. 中间：用一般将来时描述出发的交通方式（火箭）、时长（约6小时）、感受（快且刺激）；到达后先看地球美景，接着和宇航员吃太空食物，然后参观空间站并拍照；3. 结尾：用All in all总结，表达对旅行的期待，符合题目要求。
【答案】
My Trip to the Tiangong Space Station
I dream of travelling to space. Now I've got a chance to make my dream come true.
Next month, I'm going to take a trip to the Tiangong Space Station with some of my classmates.
It will take about 6 hours by rocket. It will be fast and exciting. When we arrive at the space station, I will first look out of the windows and enjoy the beautiful view of the Earth. Then I'm going to have dinner with the astronauts and try space food. It must be delicious. After that, I'm going to visit the space station and take photos of the astronauts' daily life on the space station.
All in all, I'm sure that it will be a wonderful trip!
I can't wait!
【知识点】
英语话题写作、一般将来时运用、逻辑连接词使用
【点评】
这篇范文紧扣主题，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，使用first、then、after that等连接词梳理行文顺序，运用be going to等一般将来时结构，包含所有提示信息，语言流畅，符合英语写作要求，是一篇优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.5