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三、教材佳句仿写·高分句式训练
1. 教材原句:Because the more we get, the more we spend.
仿写:你越明智地使用金钱,它能带来的幸福就越多。
2. 教材原句:It's not the number that matters...
仿写:正是努力工作让我们能够赚钱并改善生活。
3. 教材原句:Why don't you simply make a start?
仿写:你为什么不在买贵的东西之前先比较一下价格呢?
4. 教材原句:Mary had no idea where she spent all her money this month.
仿写:他不知道自己每个月的钱都花到哪里去了。
5. 教材原句:Well, here comes the O. Henry surprise.
仿写:你这周的零花钱来了!
1. 教材原句:Because the more we get, the more we spend.
仿写:你越明智地使用金钱,它能带来的幸福就越多。
The more wisely you use your money, the more happiness it can bring.
2. 教材原句:It's not the number that matters...
仿写:正是努力工作让我们能够赚钱并改善生活。
It's hard work that allows us to make money and improve our lives.
3. 教材原句:Why don't you simply make a start?
仿写:你为什么不在买贵的东西之前先比较一下价格呢?
Why don't you compare prices before you buy expensive things?
4. 教材原句:Mary had no idea where she spent all her money this month.
仿写:他不知道自己每个月的钱都花到哪里去了。
He has no idea where his money goes every month.
5. 教材原句:Well, here comes the O. Henry surprise.
仿写:你这周的零花钱来了!
Here comes your pocket money for this week!
答案
1. The more wisely you use your money, the more happiness it can bring.
2. It's hard work that allows us to make money and improve our lives.
3. Why don't you compare prices before you buy expensive things?
4. He has no idea where his money goes every month.
5. Here comes your pocket money for this week!
2. It's hard work that allows us to make money and improve our lives.
3. Why don't you compare prices before you buy expensive things?
4. He has no idea where his money goes every month.
5. Here comes your pocket money for this week!
解析
【分析】
本题为教材佳句仿写题，核心是掌握英语中几个高频高分句式的结构，需对应原句结构，替换核心内容，注意词性、时态及语序的正确性，完成符合要求的句子仿写。
【解析】
1. 原句为“the + 比较级...，the + 比较级...”结构，“明智地”用副词wisely修饰动词use，“幸福”对应名词happiness，仿写时匹配该结构；
2. 原句为强调句“It's + 被强调部分 + that...”，被强调部分为“努力工作”hard work，谓语用allows us to do sth，对应“赚钱并改善生活”；
3. 原句为“Why don't you + 动词原形...”句型，“比较价格”是compare prices，“买贵的东西之前”译为before you buy expensive things，组合成句；
4. 原句为“have no idea + where引导的宾语从句”，“他”对应he，“每个月的钱花到哪里”用一般现在时where his money goes every month，匹配结构；
5. 原句为here引导的倒装句“Here comes + 名词短语”，“你的零花钱”是your pocket money，“这周”译为for this week，完成仿写。
【答案】
1. The more wisely you use your money, the more happiness it can bring.
2. It's hard work that allows us to make money and improve our lives.
3. Why don't you compare prices before you buy expensive things?
4. He has no idea where his money goes every month.
5. Here comes your pocket money for this week!
【知识点】
英语句式仿写、“the + 比较级”结构、强调句
【点评】
本题考查对教材核心高分句式的掌握与灵活运用，仿写时需准确匹配原句结构，注意词性、时态和语序，是提升英语写作能力的基础训练。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为教材佳句仿写题，核心是掌握英语中几个高频高分句式的结构，需对应原句结构，替换核心内容，注意词性、时态及语序的正确性，完成符合要求的句子仿写。
【解析】
1. 原句为“the + 比较级...，the + 比较级...”结构，“明智地”用副词wisely修饰动词use，“幸福”对应名词happiness，仿写时匹配该结构；
2. 原句为强调句“It's + 被强调部分 + that...”，被强调部分为“努力工作”hard work，谓语用allows us to do sth，对应“赚钱并改善生活”；
3. 原句为“Why don't you + 动词原形...”句型，“比较价格”是compare prices，“买贵的东西之前”译为before you buy expensive things，组合成句；
4. 原句为“have no idea + where引导的宾语从句”，“他”对应he，“每个月的钱花到哪里”用一般现在时where his money goes every month，匹配结构；
5. 原句为here引导的倒装句“Here comes + 名词短语”，“你的零花钱”是your pocket money，“这周”译为for this week，完成仿写。
【答案】
1. The more wisely you use your money, the more happiness it can bring.
2. It's hard work that allows us to make money and improve our lives.
3. Why don't you compare prices before you buy expensive things?
4. He has no idea where his money goes every month.
5. Here comes your pocket money for this week!
【知识点】
英语句式仿写、“the + 比较级”结构、强调句
【点评】
本题考查对教材核心高分句式的掌握与灵活运用，仿写时需准确匹配原句结构，注意词性、时态和语序，是提升英语写作能力的基础训练。
【难度系数】
0.5
四、典例剖析·主题写作行文指导
假如你是李华,最近你的笔友Tony发来邮件求助。请你根据下面邮件的内容给他回一封邮件。 人称：第二人称 语篇类型：应用文
注意：
1. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
3. 词数80~100。
Step 1 谋篇布局指导
Step 2 高阶表达应用
1. Divide your pocket money into different parts.
（补充各部分零花钱的用途）
2. To think twice before you buy something is wise.
（用it作形式主语升格）
Step 3 佳作展示评析
Dear Tony,
I understand your problem, and I'm glad to help you. Here is my advice.
First, make a budget before the month starts¹.
Divide your pocket money into different parts: one for basic needs, one for savings, and another for fun activities².
Second, try not to buy things you don't really need. It's wise to think twice before you buy something³. Finally, save a small amount of money each month. Savings will help you deal with unexpected situations.
I hope you find my advice useful. Feel free to write back if you have more questions!
Li Hua
①祈使句清晰地呈现了作者的建议。
②说明了各部分零花钱的用途,让建议更具操作性。
③It作形式主语提升了语句的质感。
这篇文章整体语言简洁流畅,内容充实得体,体现了写作者真诚的态度和实际的帮助意图。建议具体而富有条理,既有操作性又贴近生活,展现出良好的逻辑思维能力。
假如你是李华,最近你的笔友Tony发来邮件求助。请你根据下面邮件的内容给他回一封邮件。 人称：第二人称 语篇类型：应用文
注意：
1. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
3. 词数80~100。
Step 1 谋篇布局指导
Step 2 高阶表达应用
1. Divide your pocket money into different parts.
（补充各部分零花钱的用途）
one for basic needs, another for savings, and the rest for fun activities.
（答案合理即可）
2. To think twice before you buy something is wise.
（用it作形式主语升格）
It's wise to think twice before you buy something.
Step 3 佳作展示评析
Dear Tony,
I understand your problem, and I'm glad to help you. Here is my advice.
First, make a budget before the month starts¹.
Divide your pocket money into different parts: one for basic needs, one for savings, and another for fun activities².
Second, try not to buy things you don't really need. It's wise to think twice before you buy something³. Finally, save a small amount of money each month. Savings will help you deal with unexpected situations.
I hope you find my advice useful. Feel free to write back if you have more questions!
Li Hua
①祈使句清晰地呈现了作者的建议。
②说明了各部分零花钱的用途,让建议更具操作性。
③It作形式主语提升了语句的质感。
这篇文章整体语言简洁流畅,内容充实得体,体现了写作者真诚的态度和实际的帮助意图。建议具体而富有条理,既有操作性又贴近生活,展现出良好的逻辑思维能力。
答案
1. Divide your pocket money into different parts: one for basic needs, another for savings, and the rest for fun activities.（答案合理即可）
2. It's wise to think twice before you buy something.
2. It's wise to think twice before you buy something.
解析
【分析】本题为英语应用文写作的补充训练题，需完成两项任务：一是补充零花钱用途的表达，二是将原句升格为用it作形式主语的句子。解题时需结合日常零花钱的合理分配，运用规范的英语句式，确保表达准确符合要求。
【解析】1. 补充零花钱用途时，采用“one...another...the rest...”的结构清晰划分各部分，合理分配为基本需求、储蓄、娱乐，符合英语表达习惯，故答案为Divide your pocket money into different parts: one for basic needs, another for savings, and the rest for fun activities. 2. 将原句的不定式主语改为it作形式主语，结构为It's + adj. + to do sth.，故升格后为It's wise to think twice before you buy something.
【答案】1. Divide your pocket money into different parts: one for basic needs, another for savings, and the rest for fun activities. 2. It's wise to think twice before you buy something.
【知识点】英语应用文写作；英语句式升格
【点评】本题聚焦英语写作的实用表达与句式优化，针对性训练学生的写作细节处理能力，帮助学生掌握合理规划零花钱的英语表述及句式升格技巧，贴合实际应用场景。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】1. 补充零花钱用途时，采用“one...another...the rest...”的结构清晰划分各部分，合理分配为基本需求、储蓄、娱乐，符合英语表达习惯，故答案为Divide your pocket money into different parts: one for basic needs, another for savings, and the rest for fun activities. 2. 将原句的不定式主语改为it作形式主语，结构为It's + adj. + to do sth.，故升格后为It's wise to think twice before you buy something.
【答案】1. Divide your pocket money into different parts: one for basic needs, another for savings, and the rest for fun activities. 2. It's wise to think twice before you buy something.
【知识点】英语应用文写作；英语句式升格
【点评】本题聚焦英语写作的实用表达与句式优化，针对性训练学生的写作细节处理能力，帮助学生掌握合理规划零花钱的英语表述及句式升格技巧，贴合实际应用场景。
【难度系数】0.6
