写作实战 答案(含基础版范文和进阶版范文)D21
「2026 辽宁大连普兰店期末」
假如你是李玉,春天来了,你想种植一种你最喜欢的植物。请你以“My Favourite Plant”为题用英语写一篇短文,向你的同学介绍一下这种植物。内容包括:
1.喜欢这种植物的原因(颜色、气味……);
2.这种植物的特性或对我们的好处(可以作为装饰、药材……);
3.你的看法。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4.标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:blossom (v.开花), lively (adj.生机勃勃的)
My Favourite Plant
I’m Li Yu. Spring is coming.
「2026 辽宁大连普兰店期末」
假如你是李玉,春天来了,你想种植一种你最喜欢的植物。请你以“My Favourite Plant”为题用英语写一篇短文,向你的同学介绍一下这种植物。内容包括:
1.喜欢这种植物的原因(颜色、气味……);
2.这种植物的特性或对我们的好处(可以作为装饰、药材……);
3.你的看法。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4.标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:blossom (v.开花), lively (adj.生机勃勃的)
My Favourite Plant
I’m Li Yu. Spring is coming.
答案
主题写作专项
基础版范文
My Favourite Plant
I'm Li Yu. Spring is coming. I want to grow some plants.
Of all the plants, I like the roses best because they are beautiful with a sweet smell. When they blossom, they can make my garden colourful, and the house looks very lively. The roses are also a kind of medicine. My mother likes collecting the petals and making tea with them.
All of my family members love roses. I think the roses stand for love, and they always make me feel positive.
进阶版范文
My Favourite Plant
I'm Li Yu. Spring is coming. I want to grow some plants.
Of all the plants, I like the roses best because they are beautiful with a sweet smell. When they blossom, they can make my garden colourful, and the house looks very lively. Roses are not only just pretty, but also useful. They can be used as medicine. My mother likes collecting the petals and making tea with them, which tastes nice and is good for our bodies.
All of my family members love roses. I think the roses stand for love, and they always make me feel positive.
基础版范文
My Favourite Plant
I'm Li Yu. Spring is coming. I want to grow some plants.
Of all the plants, I like the roses best because they are beautiful with a sweet smell. When they blossom, they can make my garden colourful, and the house looks very lively. The roses are also a kind of medicine. My mother likes collecting the petals and making tea with them.
All of my family members love roses. I think the roses stand for love, and they always make me feel positive.
进阶版范文
My Favourite Plant
I'm Li Yu. Spring is coming. I want to grow some plants.
Of all the plants, I like the roses best because they are beautiful with a sweet smell. When they blossom, they can make my garden colourful, and the house looks very lively. Roses are not only just pretty, but also useful. They can be used as medicine. My mother likes collecting the petals and making tea with them, which tastes nice and is good for our bodies.
All of my family members love roses. I think the roses stand for love, and they always make me feel positive.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语主题写作题,要求以李玉的身份介绍最喜欢的植物,需覆盖三个核心要点:①喜欢该植物的原因(如颜色、气味等);②植物的特性或对人的好处(如装饰、药用等);③个人看法。写作时需沿用给定开头,使用参考词汇,控制词数,避免出现真实姓名、学校,保证内容连贯。
【解析】
首先选定写作对象为玫瑰:①说明喜欢的原因:玫瑰外观美丽且带有甜香,开花时能让花园多彩、屋子充满生机;②介绍特性与好处:玫瑰可作装饰,花瓣可收集制作茶饮(兼具药用价值);③表达个人看法:玫瑰象征爱,能让人保持积极心态。按要求组织语句,衔接自然,符合词数要求即可。
【答案】
My Favourite Plant
I'm Li Yu. Spring is coming. I want to grow some plants.
Of all the plants, I like the roses best because they are beautiful with a sweet smell. When they blossom, they can make my garden colourful, and the house looks very lively. The roses are also a kind of medicine. My mother likes collecting the petals and making tea with them.
All of my family members love roses. I think the roses stand for love, and they always make me feel positive.
【知识点】
英语主题写作;英语词汇运用;英语应用文写作
【点评】
本题为初中期末常考的话题写作,贴近学生生活,要求明确,能有效考察学生的语言组织与运用能力,难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.7
本题为英语主题写作题,要求以李玉的身份介绍最喜欢的植物,需覆盖三个核心要点:①喜欢该植物的原因(如颜色、气味等);②植物的特性或对人的好处(如装饰、药用等);③个人看法。写作时需沿用给定开头,使用参考词汇,控制词数,避免出现真实姓名、学校,保证内容连贯。
【解析】
首先选定写作对象为玫瑰:①说明喜欢的原因:玫瑰外观美丽且带有甜香,开花时能让花园多彩、屋子充满生机;②介绍特性与好处:玫瑰可作装饰,花瓣可收集制作茶饮(兼具药用价值);③表达个人看法:玫瑰象征爱,能让人保持积极心态。按要求组织语句,衔接自然,符合词数要求即可。
【答案】
My Favourite Plant
I'm Li Yu. Spring is coming. I want to grow some plants.
Of all the plants, I like the roses best because they are beautiful with a sweet smell. When they blossom, they can make my garden colourful, and the house looks very lively. The roses are also a kind of medicine. My mother likes collecting the petals and making tea with them.
All of my family members love roses. I think the roses stand for love, and they always make me feel positive.
【知识点】
英语主题写作;英语词汇运用;英语应用文写作
【点评】
本题为初中期末常考的话题写作,贴近学生生活,要求明确,能有效考察学生的语言组织与运用能力,难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.7
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