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主题写作专项 练写作 答案D21
主题词网
优选词汇
介绍植物
组成 · leaf · root · seed · flower · fruit · stem
常见的植物 · grass · tree · rose · cotton · potato
· bamboo · coconut · corn · carrot · tomato
自然界的相关词汇 · animal · in the world · nature world · around the world
· on earth · wild animal · green plant · all over the world
作用 · produce oxygen · clean air · beautify the environment
· use for medicine · provide food · provide home for animals
写作实例
审时态:一般现在时 审人称:以第一人称为主 审主题 审体裁 审要点 审词数
假设你是你们学校“绿色家园”环保组织的成员李明。现在,老师要你为大家做演讲,讲述植物对人类的重要性,并呼吁学生们要保护植物。请根据下列提示问题写一篇演讲稿。
提示问题:1.Why are plants important? (至少三点)
2.Do you think we should protect the plants?
写作要求:1.短文必须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥。
2.词数80左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My name is Li Ming. I am so honored to make a speech here.
写作支架
优秀范文
My name is Li Ming. I am so honored to make a speech here. Now, I want to say something about plants.①
Plants are important in the natural world.② First③, we can get oxygen from plants. Second③, we can build houses with plants like trees. A lot of houses are made of plants. Some animals live in trees. Finally③, humans can get food from plants. Animals need them for food, too.
We should try to protect the plants. For example④, we shouldn't cut down trees. Instead, we should plant more trees. Without plants, the natural world would be very different!
亮点评析
①点明演讲的话题并引出下文。
②该句为第二段的主题句。
③本段以First、Second和Finally引出植物的重要性,条理清晰,思路明确。
④以For example引出具体事例,增加说服力。
主题词网
优选词汇
介绍植物
组成 · leaf · root · seed · flower · fruit · stem
常见的植物 · grass · tree · rose · cotton · potato
· bamboo · coconut · corn · carrot · tomato
自然界的相关词汇 · animal · in the world · nature world · around the world
· on earth · wild animal · green plant · all over the world
作用 · produce oxygen · clean air · beautify the environment
· use for medicine · provide food · provide home for animals
写作实例
审时态:一般现在时 审人称:以第一人称为主 审主题 审体裁 审要点 审词数
假设你是你们学校“绿色家园”环保组织的成员李明。现在,老师要你为大家做演讲,讲述植物对人类的重要性,并呼吁学生们要保护植物。请根据下列提示问题写一篇演讲稿。
提示问题:1.Why are plants important? (至少三点)
2.Do you think we should protect the plants?
写作要求:1.短文必须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥。
2.词数80左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My name is Li Ming. I am so honored to make a speech here.
Now, I want to say something about plants.
Plants are important in the natural world. First, we can get oxygen from plants. Second, we can build houses with plants like trees. A lot of houses are made of plants. Some animals live in trees. Finally, humans can get food from plants. Animals need them for food, too.
We should try to protect the plants. For example, we shouldn't cut down trees. Instead, we should plant more trees. Without plants, the natural world would be very different!
Plants are important in the natural world. First, we can get oxygen from plants. Second, we can build houses with plants like trees. A lot of houses are made of plants. Some animals live in trees. Finally, humans can get food from plants. Animals need them for food, too.
We should try to protect the plants. For example, we shouldn't cut down trees. Instead, we should plant more trees. Without plants, the natural world would be very different!
写作支架
优秀范文
My name is Li Ming. I am so honored to make a speech here. Now, I want to say something about plants.①
Plants are important in the natural world.② First③, we can get oxygen from plants. Second③, we can build houses with plants like trees. A lot of houses are made of plants. Some animals live in trees. Finally③, humans can get food from plants. Animals need them for food, too.
We should try to protect the plants. For example④, we shouldn't cut down trees. Instead, we should plant more trees. Without plants, the natural world would be very different!
亮点评析
①点明演讲的话题并引出下文。
②该句为第二段的主题句。
③本段以First、Second和Finally引出植物的重要性,条理清晰,思路明确。
④以For example引出具体事例,增加说服力。
答案
1. Plants are important in the natural world. First, we can get oxygen from plants. Second, we can build houses with plants like trees. A lot of houses are made of plants. Some animals live in trees. Finally, humans can get food from plants. Animals need them for food, too.
2. We should try to protect the plants. For example, we shouldn't cut down trees. Instead, we should plant more trees. Without plants, the natural world would be very different!
亮点评析
①点明演讲的话题并引出下文。
②该句为第二段的主题句。
③本段以First、Second和Finally引出植物的重要性,条理清晰,思路明确。
④以For example引出具体事例,增加说服力。
2. We should try to protect the plants. For example, we shouldn't cut down trees. Instead, we should plant more trees. Without plants, the natural world would be very different!
亮点评析
①点明演讲的话题并引出下文。
②该句为第二段的主题句。
③本段以First、Second和Finally引出植物的重要性,条理清晰,思路明确。
④以For example引出具体事例,增加说服力。
解析
【分析】
这是一篇以“植物的重要性及保护植物”为主题的演讲稿，要求用一般现在时、第一人称写作，需涵盖提示的两点核心内容：植物的重要性（至少三点）、呼吁保护植物。解题思路：1. 开头承接已给句子，引出演讲话题；2. 中间围绕“植物的重要性”，用First、Second、Finally分三点阐述，结合给定词汇网的相关词汇；3. 结尾表达保护植物的观点，用For example举例说明具体做法，最后发出呼吁。
【解析】
根据写作支架和要求，具体写作步骤：
1. 开头：承接已给句子，引出话题，填写“about plants”；
2. 中间段主题句：“Plants are important in the natural world.”；
3. 第一点重要性：“First, we can get oxygen from plants.”；
4. 第二点重要性：“Second, we can build houses with plants like trees. A lot of houses are made of plants.”；
5. 第三点重要性：“Finally, humans can get food from plants. Animals need them for food, too.”；
6. 结尾段：先表达保护意愿，再举例“we shouldn't cut down trees. Instead, we should plant more trees.”，最后用“Without plants, the natural world would be very different!”发出呼吁。
【答案】
My name is Li Ming. I am so honored to make a speech here. Now, I want to say something about plants.
Plants are important in the natural world. First, we can get oxygen from plants. Second, we can build houses with plants like trees. A lot of houses are made of plants. Some animals live in trees. Finally, humans can get food from plants. Animals need them for food, too.
We should try to protect the plants. For example, we shouldn't cut down trees. Instead, we should plant more trees. Without plants, the natural world would be very different!
【知识点】
英语写作、植物相关词汇、连接词运用
【点评】
这篇演讲稿结构清晰，以First、Second、Finally分点阐述植物的重要性，条理分明；用For example举例说明保护植物的具体做法，增强说服力；符合一般现在时和第一人称的要求，词数合适，完美覆盖提示内容，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
这是一篇以“植物的重要性及保护植物”为主题的演讲稿，要求用一般现在时、第一人称写作，需涵盖提示的两点核心内容：植物的重要性（至少三点）、呼吁保护植物。解题思路：1. 开头承接已给句子，引出演讲话题；2. 中间围绕“植物的重要性”，用First、Second、Finally分三点阐述，结合给定词汇网的相关词汇；3. 结尾表达保护植物的观点，用For example举例说明具体做法，最后发出呼吁。
【解析】
根据写作支架和要求，具体写作步骤：
1. 开头：承接已给句子，引出话题，填写“about plants”；
2. 中间段主题句：“Plants are important in the natural world.”；
3. 第一点重要性：“First, we can get oxygen from plants.”；
4. 第二点重要性：“Second, we can build houses with plants like trees. A lot of houses are made of plants.”；
5. 第三点重要性：“Finally, humans can get food from plants. Animals need them for food, too.”；
6. 结尾段：先表达保护意愿，再举例“we shouldn't cut down trees. Instead, we should plant more trees.”，最后用“Without plants, the natural world would be very different!”发出呼吁。
【答案】
My name is Li Ming. I am so honored to make a speech here. Now, I want to say something about plants.
Plants are important in the natural world. First, we can get oxygen from plants. Second, we can build houses with plants like trees. A lot of houses are made of plants. Some animals live in trees. Finally, humans can get food from plants. Animals need them for food, too.
We should try to protect the plants. For example, we shouldn't cut down trees. Instead, we should plant more trees. Without plants, the natural world would be very different!
【知识点】
英语写作、植物相关词汇、连接词运用
【点评】
这篇演讲稿结构清晰，以First、Second、Finally分点阐述植物的重要性，条理分明；用For example举例说明保护植物的具体做法，增强说服力；符合一般现在时和第一人称的要求，词数合适，完美覆盖提示内容，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
